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FF-BIRTHDAY GIRLS(UPDATED PART 8) (Page 29)

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Pm me nxt part. Awesome

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Part 8:



Kria and sharon both got ready...though sharon doubted that

she might luk awful, she luked quite preety..infact much

preetier...

kria-told u!!!!!u luk preety...

sharon-well u also luk beautiful!!!!!!

smriti cam to krisha and said,"chalo sab mehmaan aa gaye

hai(remember this gathering is in d mrng n party is in 

evening)
den she did a kala tikka to both her daughters...

smriti -nazar na lage meri betiyo ko!!!!kitni pyaari lag rahi

hai...

they all cum in d hall...kria n sharon both r covered

wid lots of relatives...

evry1 saying kaise ho beta?badi pyaari bachi hai...this

and that...which was enuf to bore sharon...and suddenly

1 fat lady came, she pulled sharon and krias cheeks and

said to smriti.."arey smriti teri kudiya to badi soni

hai...tu kahe to meri pehchan mai hai do ladke baat

chalau???

nw sharon started fuming wid anger...b4 she did

anything smriti said-nhi nhi abhi to ye bahut choti hai!!!!!!

sharon(to her parents)-exactly wht is this!!!!!!! is dis a family

a family gathering or u ppl hv arranged a swayamvar fr

us!!!!!!

kria(in a teasing tone)-exactly rite

sharon...SWAYAMvar!!!!!!!

and she giggled...sharon ws nw throwing daggers wid her

eyes at kria...n their parents luked at them wid a confused

look!!!!!!!

b4 any anhoni cn tak place...their parents said-v hv arranged

fr sum entertainment n they hv arrived...gautam goes to

the dancing band n inform them 2 start der

performance(note-dont expect western dance this 1 is a typical bhangda group wid beards n moustaches)...
the song started...(gal mithi mithi frm d film aisha)
the grp started d dance...
"GAL MITHI MITHI BOL"
RAS KANO MAI TU GHOL
BAJNE DE TASHE DHOL
MASTI MAI TU BHI DOL

now in the grp their wer 2 weird luking boys...wid big beards n moustaches...kria n sharon wer standing in d center...this weirdo boys came 2wards dem n started dancing again...
one boy took kria hand and sang
AA SONI TENU CHAND KI MAIN CHUDI PEHNAWA...

second boy took a circle around sharon and sang,
MAINU KAR DE ISHARA TO MAI DOLI LE AWA

den both went in frnt of them n started doing bhangda...n started singing,
Jaan leva teri adaa,
Kaise na koi ho fida,
Tere ang sharara jaise mare lashkara soniye,

n they did a dil dhadakne wala step n sang
Dekhun to dil dhadake,
Tan maine agan bhadke,
Surat aisi mohini hai,
Laga jaise sohni hai soniye,

both kria n sharon turned to leave but those batameez boys came in frnt of them,
Chahne waala hu tera,
Dekh to le idhar zara,
Tu jo dekhe ik nazar,
Karu lakh shukar hiriye,

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continued...


d performance finished...every1 clapped...all d guests moved on fr d feast...sharon walked 2wards her room...she went 2 her washroom washed her face...stood fr sumtym in frnt of d mirror and den came out...as soon as she came out of her room...she saw d same batameez boy sitting on her bed...who ws dancing around him...
sharon-hw dare u enter my room!!!!!!
boy-well i cn dare to enter ur room...
sharon came near d boy n said get out frm here at once...and showed him d door..but accidently tripped n fell on him... the bichara boys beard n moustache came off...
it w none other dan swayam...
sharon-tum????????
swayam-hai mai!!!!!!!!!!

On the other hand In the kitchen,

Smriti-kria zara dekh ke to aavo ki Sharon kaha reh gayi????

Kria-ok mom………..

Kria walks 2wards Sharon s room but as soon as she reaches d store room sum1 pulls her inside…….

She is about to shout bt d person keeps a hand on her mouth and holds her tightly against him wid a hand on her waist...

stranger-mai jab bhi tumse milne aata hu...tum hamesha hi chilati ho baatcutter!!!kria stared at him wid wide open eyes...he ws none other dan his line cutter his rey

kria-aap ne to mujhe dara hi diya phew!!!!!aur ye muh pe kya laga rakha hai...she removed d moustache n d beard

rey-ouch it hurts!!!!

kria-acha n she started doing him gudgudi...

both started laughing fr a while...n they started staring each other wid "mere bina mai " in d bg..

in sharon s room

swayam on sharon's bed...sharon on swayam...both glancing each other lovingly...

swayam-sharon mai kuch kehna chahta hu tumse...

sharon -ha bolo!!!!!

swayam-sharon...sharon...tum tum bahut bhari ho...mai bichara nanhi si jaan dab gaya hu...n he started laughing...

sharon punched him in his stomach n got up...

swayam-arey sorry baba!!!!!!kya tumhare saath mazak bhi nhi kar sakta n he caught his ears...came in front of sharon and knelt down and again cutely said sorry...

sharon-aacha thik hai...par ye mat samajna ki maine tumhe maaf kiya coz tum swayam ho ...its coz i love u n more importantly u r sharon raiprakash's bf...

swayam-ok baba...n they hugged each other

 

in the store room,

after ending d staring session,

rey-kria mujhe bhuk lagi hai!!!!!!!!

kria-ok aap idhar hi ruko bahar mat nikalna mai abhi aayi...

kria went into d kitchen...quickly filled a plate n frm d backdoor entered d store room...

kria-khana kha lo!!!!!!

rey-par mere haath to gande hai...he showed his hands to her lyk a 5 year old kid who just came home after playing in mud

kria -ok baba...n she started feeding rey wid her own hands morsel by morsel...

 

 

ok guys i end this here now...hw ws it did u lyk it...i ws gonna write it last week only bt cud'nt sorry fr d delay...plz comment n hit d lyk button

 

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Edited by anamika143 - 11 February 2012 at 7:32am
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aww...kria feeding rey
awesome!!ClapClap

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Its amazing. U updated aftr a long time and plz don't torcher me by updating nxt part late. Plz do it soon.

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aweee it was awesome and super cute part
boys come as disguised to meet there girls thats sooo sweet
kria feeding rey with her hands aweeeDay Dreaming
loved it very much
please continue soon waiting eagerly for the next part

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Originally posted by aditi061

Its amazing. U updated aftr a long time and plz don't torcher me by updating nxt part late. Plz do it soon.

SORRY I M QUITE LAZY I WUD HV UPDATED LAST WEEK BUT AS U KNW WHT HAPPENED

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