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FF-BIRTHDAY GIRLS(UPDATED PART 8) (Page 15)

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Posted: 30 December 2011 at 7:25am | IP Logged
Just read ur ff...it is freaking awesum...plzzz pm me wen u update the next parts...

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Posted: 30 December 2011 at 7:26am | IP Logged

PART 5:

  REY parked his car at some distance from the raiprakash house and walked slowly and entered into the backyard.he knew that their used to be a ladder there.

   He went into the backyard...but the ladder was not there!!!!!!!
REY-kya karu???ek to pehle se late ho gaya hu...aur ab to 12 bajne ko bhi aaye hai...

  Rey was walking backwards..suddenly he bumped into some1...
REY-wohaaa..who's this???

There swayam was standing with the ladder (hehehe)properly adjusted to sharon's window...

REY-what r u doing here with the ladder???

SWAYAM-puchne ki baat hain?...he said pointing to sharon's window...
REY-paar ye plan mera tha(ofcourse for kriya...)

SWAYAM-par pehle main yaha aaya tha...
               so pehle main jaunga...phir le lena siddi apni                                baatcutter ke paas jane ke liye...
"HUH"said rey and stood there...

   AND our dear SWAYAM climbed the ladder...he reached the window...BUT ALAS...THE WINDOW WAS CLOSED...

but swayam cud see through the window(glass window)
   There sharon was sitting on the dressing table combing her hair looking in the mirror thoughtfully!!!!!

swayam said in his mind"THANK GOD SHARON JAAG RAHI HAIN"
"HE KNOCKED ON THE WINDOW"

SHARON looked around to see wer the noice was coming from???
suddenly she saw swayam out of the window...
SHARON- "S...W...A...Y...A...M.. tum ????yaha????

SWAYAM-arre pehle window to kholo!!!!
sharon quickly opened the window...

swayam quickly hopped inside,...
SWAYAM-HAPPY BIRTHDAY SHARON...said swayam and hugged sharon with some stuff in his hand...

SHARON-THANKS...she said and hugged him back...
  "aha whats in ur hands ha"
"COME"said swayam and they both sat on the bed...
first...he gave her a bunch of orchids flower
SHARON-WOW ORCHIDS!!!!!!!!
(well it was shown in 1 of d epi that she loved orchids)

then our swayam gave her a book...and directed her to open it...sharon opened it...
inside wer pics of her...diff pics..even she didnt knew wen wer they clicked...
(remember in 1 epi swayam was shown sticking pics of sharon and sharon pulled the book  and pics got scattered everywer...well i found it very lovely)

sharon got so happy...and was looking so intensely at the pics..."sharon is smiling"thought swayam and smiled himself...

He then gave her a gift ...
what is this???said sharon and without waiting for the answer unwrapped the gift...inside was a beautiful dress...

SHARON-i will wear this in the party!!!! i will go and try it!!!!she said and ran into d washroom...
AFTER SOMETYM...

SHARON came out wearing d dress swayam had given...
SHARON-i think the dress is abit loose...
SWAYAM(in his mind)oh crap dream come true...

SWAYAM-sorry sharon...dekho tum party main koi dusra dress pehen lena...

SHARON-arre sorry kis baat ka???...this is such a beautiful dress...don't worry i will get it altered...but party mein to main yahi dress pehnungi...akhir(she sat beside swayam)ye tumne mujhe gift kiya hain...

and look look hawa hawa(with pehla nasha in the bg...)
SWAYAM THOUGHT"sach keh rahi thi neha...sharon ke dil ko saamajne me thoda aur tym lagega...

"SWAYAM"said sharon and kept her head on his shoulders..."i was so rude to u na !!!!!!...i was such dumb...i mean i loved u !!!!!ye bhi main samaj nahi payi!!!!!
i m sorry swayam for all the bad things i did to u...
SWAYAM-par ab to mujse pyaar karti ho na...and sharon looked into his eyes and said"ha bahut...bahut pyaar karti hu main tumse...

and again eyelock with pehla nasha in the bg...
SWAYAM-bas...mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye...


next:KRIYAANSH

SO FRNDS HOW WAS MY UPDATE...
PLZ DO LYK AND COMMENT AS U ALL ALWAYS DOTongueTongue



Edited by anamika143 - 30 December 2011 at 7:28am

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Posted: 30 December 2011 at 7:41am | IP Logged
best part the small cute fight between swayam and rey for the ladder ;)

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Posted: 30 December 2011 at 7:41am | IP Logged
Dude it was awesome, n mindblowing...plzz nxt update jaldi post karna coz im a huge kriyaansh fan...n thnxxx for the pm...
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Posted: 30 December 2011 at 7:42am | IP Logged
OMG dat was choo CUTE!!!
i luved SwaRon part!!
and Rey haha he has to wait now!!!LOL
continue soon!!
and thnxx for d PM!!!Smile
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Posted: 30 December 2011 at 7:45am | IP Logged
awesome part pls update soon
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Posted: 30 December 2011 at 7:46am | IP Logged
Aww!!It was sooo cute!!
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Posted: 30 December 2011 at 7:47am | IP Logged
HEY PLZZZ PM ME!!! superb!!! gosh im so excited 4 kriyaansh!!! plzzz jaldi updt krna :P

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