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The007Shivani IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 December 2011 at 4:57pm | IP Logged
cant wait for the next part now so plz update soon

..nams.. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 December 2011 at 9:54pm | IP Logged
Hehehehhe i loved dis1... Gud1 keep goin on.. Nd thnkx 4 d pm do pm me nxt tym updt
kuhu_Arsha IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 December 2011 at 11:43pm | IP Logged
lovely part ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,nxt tym lamba bala update dena plzzz,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,n merry christmas
anamika143.. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 December 2011 at 6:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by poojadworld

lovely part ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,nxt tym lamba bala update dena plzzz,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,n merry christmas

merry christmas to you tooo!!!!Tongue
anamika143.. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 December 2011 at 6:52am | IP Logged

(morning time)
    Kriya was sitting on her bed with folded legs.Sharon was busy doing something in kriyas wardrobe.'I was right",said sharon.

kriya-for what?
sharon-we need to go for shopping!!!!she said excitedly
kriya-par kya zarurat hai!!!

sharon-see first of all we have our b'day coming up and new years round the clock ,iska matlab pata hai...

sharon-arey lots and lots of parties!!!!!!

sharon-par var chodo apni puri aadate bhul jao!!!
             u r kriya raiprakash!!!!!!and sharons sister!!!
sharon-and i think u also need a makeover!!

saying this sharon laid on the bed beside wer kriya was sitting with a pillow in her lap..
kriya-u mean i don't look beautiful...and kriya made a baby face
sharon-no my dear sis,u r beautiful but u just need to lighten up!!!!
         aur socho rey ka kya reaction hoga????

at the mention of rey kriya got lost (imagine the thursdays episode)
sharon soon noticed that kria was lost...
sharon started singing
"tu hi REY"
"tu hi REY"
"tere bina mein kaise jiyu"

she started teasing kriya.
kriya in her mind"soch kriya soch varna sharon tujhe chodegi nahi"

and then kriya said,
'aaj swayam ka sms aaya tha'
sharon-kya?kya sms aaya tha?

kriya-usne likha tha ki...
sharon-kya likha tha?

kriya-usne likha tha ki...
sharon-kriya kya likha tha?
kriya-kuch nahi ,sms aaya hi nahi tha hahaha...

and kriya started laughing loudly
sharon hit kriya with a pillow.
and then both kriya and sharon started pillow fighting(i love pillow fightings)

that day they went for shopping
and sharon took kriya to her favourite shopping destinations !!!
kriya-sharon inki price to dekho!!!kitne mehge hai

sharon-kriya stop looking at the price ab inki aadat daal lo
         wait i will select the most beatiful dresses for u!!!!
and they shopped the whole day long!!!!went to beauty parlour
and finally returned home...

sharon-That's not fair, DAD!!!!!
gautam-see sharon its just a family gathering

sharon and kriya 2 gether-but dad its our birthday!!!!

sharon-thats not done!!! i mean hamare frnds kaha jayenge???
gautam-see this gathering is in the mrng and ur party is in the evening!!!

kriya-phir bhi dad!!!

gautam-well ur mom has organised it!!!

smriti entered
smriti-itne saalon baad hum mile hain isliye sabko bulaya hai!!!tumhare dad ke relatives mere relatives sab aa rahe hai!!!

sharon and kriya made a balloon wala face.

smriti-(filmy andaaz)tum log apni mom ke liye itna bhi nahi kar sakte!!!
kriya-ok mom!!!!

and kriya did ishara to sharon to do the same
sharon-ok mom
smriti-that's lyk my daughters
chalo chalo khana kha lo!!!maine apne haatho se banaya hain!!!
kitni dubli ho gayi hain meri beti(sharon) bilkul khayal nahi rakha!!!!
and bichara dad what would he say!!!!!

so frnds how was the update .it was definitely longer then the previous one!!!!!!plz do lyk and comment!!!!!Wink

Edited by anamika143 - 25 December 2011 at 7:20am

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spicyheart IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 December 2011 at 7:18am | IP Logged
amazing part
loved the TU HI REY!! wala part LOLLOL
continue soon
-bitz- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 December 2011 at 7:22am | IP Logged
aaaiii too gud!!
tu hi REY LOL
Swayam ka msg ROFL
continue soon very very soon!
waiting for ur update and thnx for d PM!!!!Smile
StolenKiss. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 December 2011 at 7:23am | IP Logged
aww cute part loved d way hw sharon was teasing kria..thx fr d pm..

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