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Mere Dharkano Ko Qarar dO<<<sujal kashsih (Page 8)

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Mere Dharkano ko QArar do
Mahrukh teeze se palti aur apne saamne khare tahmoor ko dekh kar us ki rahi sahi himmat bhi jawab de gai ek dam us ke haath mein pakri tray kape lagi tahmoor ne us ke chehre se naazrein hata kar us ke haathon ko dekha aur age barh kar tray thaam li woh teeze se bahir ki taraf baghi ander ate talha ko dekh kar woh wahiin ruk gai
Talha: yahan ate waqt maine yehi dua ki thi app mil jaen mujhe nahi pata tha woh waqt qabooliyat ka hai (talha shararat se bola to mahrukh khali khali nazro se use dekhne lagi) mahrukh aap thiek to hain (us ke andaaz par talha chonka us ne teeze se us par se naazrein hatain aur gate ki taraf barhne lagi) mahrukh (us ne use pukara lekin who teeze se gate ki taraf barh rahi thi woh abhi soorat e haal samajhne ki koshish kar raha tha jab tahmoor teeze se us ke kareeb se guzar kar mahrukh ke peech bagha woh gate khool rahi thi jab tahmoor ne us ka haath pakar kar use rok liya)
Tahmoor: kahan jaa rahi ho?
Mahrukh: mujhe ghar jana hai
Tahmoor: abhi kuch der mein chalte hain (tahmoor ne use ander le jana chaha lekin woh us se apna haath chura kar bahir nikal gai aur use teeze se tahmoor bhi bahir nikal giya)
Tahmoor: mahi! Gari mein behto (tahmoor ne gari us ke kareeb rokte huwe kaha to woh begair kise behas ke gari ka pichla door khool kar beht gai tahmoor baar baar mirror se use dekh raha tha lekin sara raasta ek baar bhi us ne sir nahi uthaya tha gari rukte hi woh jaldi se utri aur jaldi ander (ghar ke) dakhil ho gai aur use teeze se tahmoor us ke peeche aya tha lekin us ne apne kamren mein dakhil hote hi door lock kar diya tha
Tahmoor: mahi darwaza kholo (kuch seconds baad us ne tahmoor ki awaa suni thi kuch der tahmoor us ko pukarta raha lakin kuch der baad khamoshi chaa gai saath hi us par taari khamooshi toot gai woh darwaze se hat kar aine ke saamne aa gai)




Mahrukh (to herself): kiya main itni buri hoon ke mian kise ki pasand nahi ban sakti jis ko maine chaha us ne mujhe thukra diya aur ab ek bar phir main thukrai jaon gi kiya main yateem hoon to yeh mera kasoor hai sari zillat mere hi naseeb mein kyun likh di yarab (woh dono haathon mein mun (face) chupa kar zoor zoor se rone lagi)
Background music
Kiya mila jag mein
Kismet ki baatein hain
Kahiin sunhare din
Kahiin kali raatein hain
Khushiyon ka
Kahiin pe mela hai
Kahiin jag mein
Koi akela hai
Mile ga wohi
Jo hai likhaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Jane kitni hi der guzar gai phir kitchen se ati bartano ki awaaz par woh bahir nikal ai thi rakshanda fridge mein se kuch nikal rahi thin use dekh kar woh fridge band kar ke woh teeze se us ki taraf ayen
Rakshanda: kiya baat hai beta tabiyat ziada kharab hai (unho ne us ki sooji huwe aankhon ko dekh kar poocha and she nods her head in no) wahan se kyun aa gai thi tahmoor alag pareshaan tha (woh ab bhi kuch nahi boli) khana nikalon (she again nods her head in no then woh pareshaani se age barhin) mahrukh beta kiya baat hai (unho ne age barh ke us ka chehra apne haathon mein thama to mahrukh goor se Rakshanda ko dekhne lagi)
Mahrukh: ami kiya yateem hona buri baat hai (us ke sawaal par Rakshanda heraani se mahrukh ka chehra dekhne lagiin kuch pal ke liye to woh jawab dene ke kabil hi nahi rahiin) ami jin ke baap nahi hote who kiya karte hain
Rakshanda: mahrukh (Rakshanda ne pareshani se mahrukh ka chehra dekha jahan werani hi werani thi)
Mahrukh: batain na ami agar kise ka baap na ho to us ka sahara kon banta hai……us ka bahi? Aur agar bahi bhi na ho to (us ke sawaal unhe pareshaan kar rahe the)
Rakshanda: mahrukh kiya ho giya hai beta (she hugs mahrukh aur mahrukh aur zoor zoor se rone lagi aaj Rakshanda ne buhat arse baad mahrukh ko aise rota dekha tha)
Mahrukh: ami papa ko mujhe chor kar nahi jana chahiye tha agar woh chale gai to bare papa mujhe chor kar na jate ab main unhe kaise kahoon bare papa aap ki mahrukh ko aap ki zaroorat hai sirf ek aap the jo mujhe pyaar karte the aur kise ko mere zaroorat nahi (mahrukh ke aansoon mein rawani aa gai thi aur seeriyon mein khara tahmoor teeze se neeche ki taraf palta tha aur car start kar ke woh bahir nikal giya)



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Mere Dharkano ko Qarar do
Haleema: kiya baat hai tum khana kyun nahi khaa rahe (tahmoor rice plate mein dale us mein spoon ghuma raha tha haleema ki baat par tahmoor ne chonk kar un ki taraf dekha aur khana shuru kar diya)
Salman: mumma aap ka phone hai (salman ne un ke saamne beht te huwe kaha) bahi aap ko mera kaam yaad hai na (haleema ke uthte hi salman ne sargoshi ke se andaaz mein tahmoor se kaha to us ne sir hila diya)
Sehar: bahi yeh kiya keh raha hai
Salman: mera aur bahi ka personal mamla hai (woh jaldi se bola haleema ke beht te hi salman ne tahmoor ko ishara kiya)
Tahmoor: mumma mera khiyaal hai sehar ke saath salman ki bhi engagement na kar den (haleema ne chonk kar pehle tahmoor ko aur phir salman ko dekha jis ke poore teeth bahir nikal rahe the)
Haleema: mera damagh kharab nahi huwa hai bara abhi kanwara behta hai aur mein chote ki kar doon
Salman: mumma yeh to ziati hai bahi ka to koi program hi nahi shadii ka to main kab tak behta rahoon (us ke bachon wale andaaz par haleema ne ghoor kar use dekha)
Haleema: tum larki ho ke tumhari umer nikli jaa rahi hai (haleema ke dantne par sehar ki hanse choot gai tahmoor bhi muskarane laga to salman gusse se sir jhuka kar khana khane laga) pehle sehar aur mahrukh ki ho jae abhi shela ka phone tha woh talha ke liye mahrukh ko mang rahe hain mujhe to larka pasand hai abhi Rakshanda se baat karte hoon woh kiya kehte hai
Tahmoor: es ki koi zaroorat nahi (haleema uthne lagin jab unho ne tahmoor ki sanjeeda awaaz sune es ki awaaz mein aisa kuch tha ke salman aur sehar bhi matwajah ho gae)
Haleema: kiya matlab (haleema ne uljhan bhari naazron se tahmoor ki taraf dekha)
Tahmoor: hamein mahi ki shadii wahan nahi karni
Haleema: lekin kyun tahmoor woh log har lehaz se aache hain
Tahmoor: maine kaha na mumma mahi ki shadii wahan nahi ho sakti aap unhe inkaar kar den (ab ke woh kuch sakhti se bola to sehar aur salman ne heeart se pehle tahmoor ko aur phir ek doosre ko dekha)
Haleema: tahmoor itne ache rishte se main inkaar nahi kar sakti inkaar ki koi waja bhi honi chahiye (woh bhi ab gusse mein bolin) aakhir kyun karoon inkaar
Tahmoor: KYUN KE MAHI SE MAIN SHADII KARNA CHAHTA HOON (tahmoor ki baat par pani pete slman ko zabardat goota laga jab tak mun tak le jane wala chamcha sehar ke haath mein reh giya) mere khiyaal mein yeh wajah aap ke liye kafi ho gi aap chachi jaan se baat karen (who chair dhakail kar dinning room se bahir nikal giya jab ke kamren mein behte who teeno log apni jaga heeran the)
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Tania: mumma kheriyat thi aap ne itni emergency mein bulaya (tania ne kamre mein dakhil hote hi pareshani se maa ki shakal dekhi to unho ne use talha ke proposal ke bare mein bataya) janti hoon (woh bezari se boli)
Haleema: woh……woh tahmoor kehta hai ke woh mahrukh se shadii karna chahta hai
Tania: kiya (tania cheeke phir nichla hoont danton ke neeche daba kar hans di) main bhi kahoon kal mosoof gusse mein laal peele kyun ho rahe the (us ne jaise kise baat ka maza liya)
Haleema: woh kehta hai woh log mahrukh ke qabil nahi (haleema ne jaise tania ki baat sune hi nahi thi)
Tania: keh to thiek raha hai wese ami mahrukh aur tahmoor ek doosre ke saath jitna khush reh sakte hain kise aur ke saath nahi
Haleema: woh to thiek hai tania mahrukh se ziada mujhe koi aziz nahi lekin main soochti hoon kahiin Rakshanda ko bura na lage pata nahi achanak tahmoor ko kiya ho giya hai jab main kehti thi koi larki hai to bata do tab bolta nahi tha ab mahrukh ki baat paki hone lagi hai to us ka naam le liya
Tania: mumma aap chachi jaan se baat to karen……wese papa ki bhi yehi khuwahish thi (haleema ne chonk kar tania ko dekha) jab sheryar paida huwa tha to tahmoor aur mahrukh saath khare the tab papa ne mujh se kaha tha yeh dono sada aise hi saath rahen tab mein bhi heeran huwe thi lekin papa ka faisla bilkul thiek tha agar woh zinda hote to yaqeenana woh tahmoor ki yeh khuwahish zaroor poori karte (haleema ki aankhon mein aanson teerne lage the)
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Rakshanda: bhabhi aap ne mujhe bulaya (kamre mein dakhil hoti Rakshanda ne heerat se tania ko dekha)
Haleema: Rakshanda talha ke ghar walon ne mahrukh ka rishta manga hai (un ke beht te hi haleema ne kaha)
Rakshanda: to bhabhi agar aap ko pasand hai to thiek hai (unho ne heerat se un dono ke zaroorat se ziada sanjeeda chehre ko dekha)
Haleema: Rakshanda ek proposal aur bhi hai agar tum bura na mano to……hum sab chahte hain ke mahrukh ki shadii tahmoor se ho jae (rakshanda is shockes at this haleema ne sir utha kar rakshanda ko dekha) Rakshanda main tumhein majboor nahi karti lekin itna zaroor kahoon gi ke yeh hum sab ki khuwahish hai (Rakshanda ki aankhon se aanson nikal aye)
Rakshanda: bhabhi yeh aap kiya keh rahi hain main inkaar kyun karon gi tahmoor se barh kar mere liye aur kon ho sakta hai aur mujhe kiya chahiye ke mere beti sada mere aankhon ke saamne rahe gi (woh roo rahi thi aur muskara bhi rahi thin) lekin aap ne tahmoor se poocha (unho ne ruk kar haleema ka chehra dekha to woh muskara den)
Tania: chachi jaan fikar na karen use ke kehne par to baat ki hai (tania ke kehne par Rakshanda get relaxed and smile)
Haleema: mahrukh mere apni bete hai mujhe tum se poochne ki zaroorat nahi es liye hum sehar ke saath use bi ring pehne den ge (Rakshanda just smiles)



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Mere Dharkano ko Qarar do
Rakshanda ke mun se nikalne wale alfaaz us ke sir par kise bomb ki soorat mein phate the (dhush dhush baam baam dhaa dhaa dhaa) kitni der tak woh phati phati naazron se un ka chehra dekhti rahi to woh us ki khuli huwe aankho mein dekh kar muskara di
Rakshanda: bhabhi ne talha ka bhi zikar diya tha lekin tahmoor ke hote huwe kise aur ki kiya zaroorat hai (unhe ne use dekh kar kaha to woh ek jhatke se hawason mein aye)
Mahrukh: ami mujhe tahmoor bahi se shadii nahi karni (woh bari sanjeedgi se boli Rakshanda ne heerat se use dekha)
Rahshanda (with lil anger): to kiya tum talha se shadii karna chahti ho
Mahrukh (in low tone): maine aisa to nahi kaha
Rakshanda: to phir (un ke lehje ki sakhti mein koi farq nahi aya woh jawab dene ki bajae khamoshi se table par haath se line kheechne lagi) tumhari shadii tahmoor se hi hogi (Rakshanda ne faisla kun andaaz mein kaha)
Mahrukh (with lil anger): aap kahiin bhi mere shadii kar den lekin tahmoor bahi se nahi
Rakshanda (with full anger): maine tum se rai nahi mangi thi apna faisla sunaya hai (Rakshanda uthkar chal di mahrukh ne gusse ki shaded lehar apna ander utarti mehsoos ki woh teeze se uth kar un ke peeche kitchen mein chali gain)
Mahrukh: ami main aap ke es faisle ko nahi manti (us ki batameezi par Rakshanda ne khaa jane wali nazron se use dekha)
Rakshanda: tum chahti kiya ho
Mahrukh: main bas tahmoor bahi se shadii karna nahi chahti
Rakshanda: mahrukh beta yeh kiya bachpana hai (unho ne kareeb aa kar us ka chehra thaam liya) bhabhi ne kitne maan se mujh se baat ki hai tahmoor ki yeh khuwahish hai tumhare bare papa aisa chahte hain tum itne logon ki khuwahish ko thukra do gi yeh sab log tum se buhat pyaar karte hain (Rakshanda ke samjane par bhi us ke reaction mein koi farq nahi aya) talha ke bare mein maine bhat kuch suna hai ho sakta hai woh galat ho lekin yeh to paki baat hai ke us ki maa tumhein pasand nahi karti tum wahan hamesha un chahi raho gi aur un chaha hona kiya hota hai es ka dard main janti hoon tum ne saari umer pyaar sameta hai tum un ka behaviour bardaasht nahi kar pao gi yahan tum sab ko janti ho samajhti ho sab tum ko samajhte hain lekin un logon ke bare mein tum kiya jaanti ho shadii ke baad buhat se baton ka khiyaal rakhna parta hai tum wahan adjust nahi ho sako gi
Mahrukh: main adjust kar loon gi
Rakshanda: maine jo kehna tha keh diya tumahri fazool zid ke liye main apno ko naraaz nahi kar sakti (woh keh kar paltin to mahrukh ne glass utha kar deewar par mara jo dewaar se lagte hi zoor daar awaaz ke saath toot giya woh chonk kar paltin)
Rakshanda: tu jo bhi kar lo mera faisla nahi badle ga (Rakshanda bhi aaj jaise zid mein aa gain)
Mahrukh: aap bhi jo chahin kar len main kabhi tahmoor bahi se shadii nahi karoon gi (she sees mahrukh face in a shock bcoz of her misbehave and in a next moment she slaps mahrukh chapat chapat one two suddenly someone stops her hand)


    Mere Dharkano ko Qarar do

Recap: Rakshanda slap mahrukh when suddenly someone stop him lets see whoz that guy
Rakshanda turn around to see that person and get shock to see tahmoor
Tahmoor (by holding her hand): yeh kiya kar rahi hai chachi jaan (tahmoor stops him Rakshanda get shock to see tahmoor and mahrukh get angry)
Mahrukh (with full anger): aap aa gai tamasha dekhne aap ko to buhat khushi mehsoos ho rahi ho gi doosron ko takleef de kar wese bhi aap buhat khush hote hain
Rakshanda: tahmoor tum mujhe choro (unho ne khudh ko tahmoor se shurwane ki koshish ki jis ne unhe mazbooti se thaam rakha tha)
Tahmoor: plz chachi jaan haath mat uthaen araam se baat karen woh samajh jae gi
Mahrukh: kabhi nahi samjhon gi main. aap ki baton se ami impress ho sakti hain main nahi kis bina par aap ne mujh se shadii ki baat ki aap hote kaun hai mere liye baat karne wale (us ka lehja aisa tha jaise abhi us ka gala daba de gi tahmoor ke saamne itni batameezi par Rakshanda ander tak sharminda ho gain bebas se ho kar woh tahmoor ke saath lag kar rone lagin )
Rakshanda: Allah aise aulaad kise ko na de aacha huwa es ka baap mar giya kam se kam woh to es ki batameezi nahi dekh saka Allah ne mujhe pata nahi kyun zinda rakha hai mujhe bi apne pass bula le to aacha hai (tahmoor ne malamat bhari naazron se mahrukh ko dekha lekin woh kise cheez ki parwah kiye begair apne kamre mein aa gai)

Backgroung music
Kis dagar jaon jane
Kuch samajh mein na aye
Mere dil ki be chain
Aur barhti hi jae
Bhuj gae sare diye oooooo
Apni palkon ke tale
Sari umeeden pyaasi
Thora sa pyaar huwa tha
Kuch nahi baqi


kuch der baad ahat par us ne darwaze ki taraf dekha to tahmoor ko dekh kar woh ek jhatke se khari ho gai

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Mere Dharkano ko Qarar do

Ok jee mahrukh go into her room and after sometime tahmoor is also there when mahrukh sees him he stand from the bed and says
Mahrukh: aap kyun aye hain jaen yahan se (lekin who darwaza band kar ke us ke saath take laga kar khara ho giya) suna nahi aap ne (woh full gusse se bole tahmoor ki muskarahat aur gehri ho gai aur us ki pal pal gheri hoti muskarahat ne jalti par tail (oil) ka kaam kiya woh darwaze ke saamne es tarah pheel kar khara tha ke woh bahir bhi nahi nikal sakti thi)
Tahmoor: tum mujhe se shadii kyun nahi karna chahtin (tahmoor ke sawal par us ne kahair bhari nazron se us ki taraf dekha)
Mahrukh: kyun ke main aap se nafrat karti hoon (woh ek ek lafz par zoor de kar boli to woh hans para)
Tahmoor: aacha lekin jahan tak mujh yaad parta hai tum ne to kaha tha ke tum mujh se mohabbat karti ho
Mahrukh: bakwaas ki thi maine lanat bhejti hoon main apne alwaaz par main maafi mang chuki hoon aap se plz mere jaan choor den (woh jaise aaj pagal ho gai thi tahmoor kuch der use dekhta raha)
Tahmoor: lekin main tum se shadii karna chahta hoon (mahrukh ne tanzia andaaz men muskara kar us ka chehra dekha)
Mahrukh: main janti hoon aap aisa kyun kar rahe hain lekin mujhe aap ki hamdardi aur tars ki koi zaroorat nahi na haq aap yeh qurbani de rahe hain na main aap ko pasandkarti hoon aur na aap phir kyun aap apni zindagi barbaad karna chahte hain apni pasand ki kise larki se shadii karen aur khushi se zindagi guzaren lekin lagta hai aap ko qurbani dene ko adapt ho chuki hai lekin aap ki es qurbani se kise ko khushi nahi ho gi haan aap ki ehmiyat mein azafa zaroor ho jae ga log kahen ge dekho tahmoor ne kitni naiki ka kaam kiya hai ek yateem besahara larki se shadii kar li jis ka baap nahi tha jo use shaandar jahez de sakta aap ko apni tareefen sunne ki adat ho chuki hai hai na (woh safaki ki hadh tak berahem ho chuki thi es dooran pehli baar tahmoor ke hoonton se muskarahat gaib huwe thi) lekin qurbani dena mere adapt nahi hai main aap se shadii nahi karon gi sab yehi kahen ge na keh mahrukh buri hai to main buri hi thiek hoon (woh kuch der sanjeedgi se us ka chehra dekhta raha phir ek dam bahir nikal giya)


               

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