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Mere Dharkano Ko Qarar dO<<<sujal kashsih (Page 7)

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zillae kahaan ho dear... Cry continue karo na.. waiting for the next parts of your story.. eagerly...

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whr r u zillae, Ouch con it yaar
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yaar guyz i m trying my best to post it actually guyz purane parts search kar rahi hoon jab milte hain then post kar dete hoon ab 900 above pages hain time to lage ga na so plzzzzzzzzz intezaar ke liye sorry
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genious mery pass tumahri poori story hai chahiye ho to pm kardo and pls new part post karo i m dying to read ur story
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hey "shruti_gauri1" can u send me genious's stories. mujhe uske stories bohot ache lagte hai, it will be really good of u if u could send them to me. i hope i get a reply in a positive way. and genious continue soon..i love ur stories
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hey guyz thanx to shuruti ke us ne mujhe mere stories ke parts post kiye so that i m able to post it here
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Mere Dharkano ko Qarar do

Aaj woh charon (sidra mahrukh sameen urooj) university mein milne ke liye jama huwe thin
Sameen: tumhare shadii ki tiyariyan kahan tak pohanchi hain (sameen ne burger khate huwe urooj se poocha)
Urooj: jweller ka kaam reh giya hai aur bridal dress pasand karna hai bas
Sidra: tum dono (sameen and urooj) ki shadiyon ke liye maine bari zabardast tiyaariyan ki hain (shez tell them abu her dresses)
Urooj: kiya baat hai tum nahi bol rahi (urooj ne sidra ki baat sunne ke dooran mahrukh se poocha)
Mahrukh: main tum logon ki baatein sun rahi hoon
Sidra: wese bhi yaar mahrukh ab ziada tar khamoosh rehti hai (sidra ki baat par sameen ne goor se mahrukh ka utra huwa chehra dekha)
Sameen: are yeh kon mun utha kar chala aa raha………………hai are yeh to hamari taraf hi aa raha hai(sameen ki herat bhari awaaz par who dono bhi us taraf dekhne lagi jabke mahrukh heeran pareshaan apni taraf ate talha ko dekh rahi thi un ke kareeb pohanchne par us ne salam kiya)
Talha: kaise hain aap mahrukh (talha ne muskara kar us se poocha to woh jaise hoosh mein aye aur ek dam khari ho gai )
Mahrukh: aap yahan
Talha: main yahan ek dost se milne aya tha use dhoond raha tha to aap mil gain to soocha aap se hi hello karta jaon
Sameen: hum ne aap ko pehchana nahi (sameen ne goor se talha ki shakal dekhi)
Talha: mera naam talha ikram hai main army mein captain hoon aur enka rishtedaar (relative) hoon
Sidra: aur hum es ki friends hain (sidra ne use ke andaaz mein kaha)
Talha: aap sab se mil kar khushi huwe
Sidra sameen urooj : hamein bhi
Talha: agar aap logon ko etraaz na ho to kiya main mahrukh se baat kar sakta hoon (mahrukh ne satpata kar use dekha)
Sidra: o sure (sidra jaldi se boli talha ne haath se use saath chalne ka ishara kiya to woh pareshaan nazroon se use dekhne lagi)
Talha: main aap ka ziada time nahi loon ga (talha ke kehnepar woh sir jhuka kar us ke saath chalne lagi)
Mahrukh: aap yahan apne kise dost se milne aye the us ka naam kiya hai
Talha (with smile): main aap ko sahi bataon ga mera yahan koi dost nahi main yahan aap se milne aya tha (woh janti thi ke talha us se milne aya hai lekin phir bi woh confuse ho gai)
Talha: beht jain (talha ne ek bench ki taraf ishara kiya to woh bench ke aakhri sire (corner) par beht gai)
Talha: actually main aap se aap ki rai poochne aya tha pichle hafte jab se aap se mila hoon tab se soch raha hoon kaise aap se baat karon pehle soocha phone par maloom kar loon lekin phir yeh munasib nahi laga to main yahan aa giya (woh khamoosh huwa to mahrukh ne uljhan bhari nazron se use dekha) mian aap se shadii karna chahta hoon (talha ne us ke aankhon mein dekhte huwe kaha use kuch kuch mehsoos to huwa tha lekin itni jaldi aur itne wazeha izhaar ki use umed na thi) maine pehli baar aap ko tania bhabhi ki shadii par dekha tab aap buhat shararti huwa karti thin aap mujhe buhat aaci lagi thin doori baar bhi aap ko tania bhabhi ke ghar par dekha tha aur phir teen saal baa dab aap ke ghar pe en teen saloon ke dooran maine ek baar bhi aap ko yaad nahi kiya lekin us din aap ko dekhe ke baad laga ke main to aap ko bhoola hi nahi pehle man shadi ke bare mein serious nahi tha lekin ab jab maine shadii ke bare mein soocha to mujhe pehla khiyaal aap ka aya mujhe lagta hai ke hum ek saath aaci zindagi guzar sakte hain aap mujhe pehle nazar mein aachi lagi thin aur har mulaqaat mein es pasandeedgi mein azafa hota giya aur mujhe lagta hai ke main aap se mohabbat kare lagon ga (akhir mein woh muskaraya to mahrukh ko apni dharkan teez hoti mehsoos huwe talha ab bhi use dekh raha tha jo sir jhukae apni godh mein rakhe apne dono haathon ko dekh rahi thi) mahrukh mein aap ki khamoshi ko kiya samjhon (kuch der baad mahrukh ne talha ki awaaz sune thi to us ne gheri saans lekar saamne dekha jahan woh teeno unhe dekh kar muskara rahi thin phir us ne apne rite side par behte talha ko dekha jo uske jawaab ka muntazir tha woh khali nazron se use dekhne lagi) kiya aap kise aur ko pasand karti hain (us ki khamoshi par talha ne poocha to ek chehra us ki nazron ke saamne ghooma then she immediately noda her head in no) to main aoni mama ko aap ke har bhej doon (mahrukh nods her head in yes talha us ke haan kehne par khil utha) thank you thank you very much main bata nahi sakta keh main kitna khush hoon (woh agar nab hi kehta to bhi us ke shakal bata rahi thi)
Mahrukh: main chalti hoon (woh ek dam khari ho gai us ke saath talha bhi khara ho giya woh chand kadam age bhari thi jab us ne apne peeche sehar ki awaaz sune woh jaldii se muri lekin sehar ke saath khare tahmoor ko dekh kar jaise woh statue ban gai tahmoor ek nazar use dekhne ke baad talha ki taraf mura)
Sehar: yeh mosoof yahan kiya kar rahe hain (sehar ne kareeb aa kar shararti andaaz mein kaha lekin woh pareshaan nazroon se tahmoor ko dekh rahi thi) ae kiya huwa (sehar ne us ka shoulder hala kar use apni taraf mutwajah kiya)
Mahrukh: tum yahan
Sehar: haan achanak bahi lene aa gai to soocha tumhein bhi saath lete jain chalo chalet hain
Mahrukh: tehro main sidra se notes le aon (woh teeze se un teeno ki taraf barhi)
Urooj: kheriyat itni lambi guftagoo (urooj ne muskara kar use dekha lekin es waqt woh kafi pareshaan thi pehle achanak talha ka ana aur phir us ka proposal aur phir tahmoor us ne ek dam apna sir thaam liya)
Sameen: kiya huwa mahrukh (woh teeno pareshani se us ki taraf barhin)
Mahrukh: kuch nahi sidra woh notes de do (mahrukh ke kehne par sidra bikhre huwe papers sametne lagi)
Sameen: tum jaa rahi ho (mahrukh nodes her head in yes) kitni batameez ho main tum logon se milne aye thi)
Mahrukh: sorry sameen who sehar lene aa gai
Sameen: yeh sehar ke saath kon hai (sameen ne door khare tahmoor ko dekh kar kaha)
Mahrukh: tahmoor bahi
"KIYA" teeno ek saath cheeken
Sameen: tahmoor bahi aa chuke hain aur tum ne hamein bataya bhi nahi (mahrukh khamoosh rahi)
Urooj: yaar yeh tahmoor sahab pehle ki nisbat kuch ziada shaandar ho gai hain
Sidra: yaar mahrukh apne es cousin se mere setting karwa do (notes mahrukh ko pakrane ke baad sidra ne mahrukh se kaha)
Urooj: shahyad tum bhool rahi ho keh tum ne hi kaha tha ke tahmoor mahrukh se pyaar karta hai aur mahrukh bhi aura b tum mahrukh se keh rai ho ke woh tum ko apni mohabbat de de (arooj ke lehje mein ghusse ke saath saath tanz bi shamil tha kyun ke mahrukh ke behaviour mein itni bare change ke peeche jo wajah thi woh poori tarah us se agah to nahi thi lekin phir bhi kise hadh tak samajh gai thi)
Sidra: are woh to ek mazak tha aur ab to mahrukh ne kabhi woh baat bhi nahi ki tab to hum chote the tab mein aura b mein buhat farq hai aur main aise hi mahrukh ko tang (tease) karne ke liye mazak karte thi (sidra hanse to mahrukh ne bari zakhmi nazron se us ki taraf dekha) kyun mahrukh kya waqai koi aise baat to nahi thi (sidra ne shararat se us se poocha and nods her head in no)
Mahrukh: Allah Hafiz (woh teeze se palat gai jab woh onke kareeb pohanche to tahmoor talha se mil raha tha)
Talha: aacha mahrukh phir mulaqat ho gi (woh keh kae chala giya lekin mahrukh ne nazrein utha kar kise ki taraf nahi dekha car mein beht te hi sidra ki baatein us ke damagh mein ghoomne lagin)
Mahrukh (to herself): mazak (es ek lafz ko us ne dil mein repeat kiya) tum kiya jano sidra tumhare es ek mazak ne mere poori zindagi badal kar rakh di hai tum ne thiek kaha tha tab hum chote the tab mein aur ab mein buhat farq hai lekin tab ki umer aise hote hai jab koi baat dil mein beht jae to nikalte nahi tum mazak karte rahiin aur main serious ho gai aur itni serious keh woh mohabbat mere dil-o-damagh par chah gai maine us mohabbat ke liye apni ana ko kuchal diya aur badle mein mujhe kiya mila zilat tumhare ek mazak ki wajah se zindagi ka sab se bara dard maine paa liya aur sab se pyaare insaan ko kho diya
Background music
Jane har bar mere saath kyun ho jata hai

main jise chahti hoon mujh se woh kho jata hai

es main mere khata kiya koi mujh ko batai

pyaar karne ki itni kyun saza dil yeh pai

mujh ko tanhai dase OOOoooooooooooooo

mujh pe duniya yeh hanse

pyaar ki hai ruswai

jis pe itbaar kiya tha woh hai harjai

thora sa pyaar huwa tha

kuch nahi baqi

       
Sehar: mahrukh (sehar ki awaaz par woh jaise chonki) yeh talha yahan kiya kar raha tha
Mahrukh: pata nahi maine pehli baar yahan dekha hai (she gives xplanations)
Gate se ander dakhil hone se pehle us ne mur kar tahmoor ko dekha jo sehar se baat karte huwe muskara raha tha
Mahrukh (to herself): main kiya pagal hoon jo dar rahi hoon main kiya lagti hoon es shaks ki jo kise aur bande ke saath dekh kar ese takleef ho gi woh kon sa mujh se mohaabat karta hai
Mahrukh ghusse se teeze se stairs charne lagi wid some tears in her eyes
Background music
Thora sa pyaar huwa tha Kuch nahi baqi

thora sa pyaar huwa tha kuch nahi baqi      



Edited by genious420 - 06 May 2006 at 3:35am
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Mere Dharkano ko Qarar do

Sehar: mahrukh a baa bhi chuko (mahrukh balon (hairs) mein brush kar rahi thi jab us ne sehar ki ghuseli awaaz sune us ne teeze se baal brush kiye aur un ko khula chorh diya shoulders par dupatta liya aur teeze se neeche utri)
Sehar: tum tiyaar ho
Mahrukh: haan (sehar see mahrukh from bottom to top and whistle)
Sehar: wow aaj to ek do zaroor halak hoon ge
Mahrukh: sehar
Sehar: haan bolo (with full concentration)
Mahrukh: shut up
Sehar (hanste huwe): yaar wese to tum abhi bhi qayamat dha rahi ho lekin agar tum woh black suit pehenti na to I swere afat lagti
Mahrukh: very funny main aise hi thiek hoon wese bhi mujhe wahan kon dekhne aa raha hai (she see sehar from top to bottom then say) aur wese bhi afat to tumhein lagna chahiye jo ke tum lag bhi rahi ho aur wese bhi tumhari tyaari ka koi matlab bhi hai
Sehar: wese wahan talha bhi ho sakta hai
Mahrukh: to kiya farq parta hai
Sehar kuch kehne hi lagti hai ke bahir tahmoor ki car ka horn hota hai and after listening this sehar lightly slap on her forehead
Sehar: bahi kab se intezaar kar rahe hain tum niklo main lock kar ke ati hoon
Mahrukh bahir nikal jati hia aur sehar kise kaam se kamre main chali jati hai mahrukh car ka pichla door kholne lagti hai ke us ko tahmoor ki awaaz sunai dete hai
Tahmoor: aaj nahi poocho gi mahi ke tum kaise lag rahi ho (handle par rakha mahrukh ka haath sakit ho giya woh teeze se us ki taraf palti tahmoor ke hoonton ke saath saath us ki aankhen bhi muskara rahi thin)
Mahrukh (to herself): to kiya tab mere baat ka matlab unhe samajh mein aa chukka tha (woh ab bhi hairat se tahmoor ko dekh rahi thi)
Tahmoor: chalo tum nahi poochtin to main khudh hi bata deta hoon hamesha ki tarah buhat aachi lag rahi ho (jaga bhi wohi thi words bhi wohi the lekin lehja badla huwa tha jahan us ki heerani par tahmoor ki muskarahat gheri huwi thi wahiin us ki aankhon mein teezi se aanson aye the)
Mahrukh: tahmoor bahi aap aisa kyun kar rahe hain mujh se ek galti huwe thi main us ke liye buhat sharminda hoon plz ab mujhe maaf kar den (us ne bakaida haath jor diye)
Tahmoor: are maine to tareef ki hai aur tum rone lagi ho (tahmoor ne us ke jure huwe haathon ko thaam liya jinhe us ne ek jhatke se kheench liya)
Mahrukh: mujhe aap ki tareef ki koi zaroorat nahi hai mahrukh ne keh kar jhatke se car ka darwaza khola aur ander beht kar itne hi zoor se band kiya darwaza band karne par tahmoor ne muskara kar ungali ko ear mein ghumaya aur muskarate huwe driving seat par beht giya sehar ke beht te hi us ne car start kar di)
Mahrukh (to herself): pata nahi itni bari galti mujh se kyun ho gai (woh bahir dekhte huwe musalsal khudh ko kos rahi thi)
Background music
Toot kar maine hum dam
Pyaar tum se kiya hai
Kiya mere chahaton ka
Yeh sila mujh ko mila hai
Jo na ki miane khata
OOOoooooo
Kyun mili us ki saza
She na paon ruswai
Thora sa pyaar huwa tha
Kuch nahi baqi


Tania: mahrukh guriya do cup chai aur bana do (woh cabinet se barten nikal rahi thi jab tania ander dakhil huwe) woh talha aur us ki ami bhi aye hain sehar to drawing room mein aoni saas ke saath chipak gai hai itni ishare kiya par majal hai jo uth jae (tania jaldi se cheezen tray mein set karne lagi) aacha plz chai bana ke mere kamre mein de jana shela aunty (talha's mother) mere kamre mein hain (tania ne talha ki ami ka naam liya to mahrukh sir hila kar chai banane lagi woh chai le kar aye to kamre mei ndakhil hone se pehle us ne talha ki ami ki awaaz sune
Shehla: jab se lhr aya hai ek hi rat laga rakhi hai keh mahrukh se shadii karni hai pehle kehta tha somia se shadii karni hai ab mahrukh mere to koi marzi hi nahi har dafa es ki pasand badalti rehti hai phir kiya kia jae agar jawan aulaad ho aur woh bhi aklauta beta to insaan majboor ho hi jata hai (un ke lehje mein bezari hi bezari thi)
Tania: aunty mahrukh buhat aachi hai talha ka decision galat nahi (tania boli to shehla tanzia andaaz mein hasin)
Shehla: aacha agar itni aachi hai to tum logon ne kyun nahi use apna liya tumhare dono bahi talha se kam to nahi ek doctor hai ek ne ab nai factory shuru ki hai lakhon mein khel raha hai magar nahi jab aap ameer (rich) hote hain to apne liye aacha hi soochte hain ab tum log bhi kehte ho ge tumhare jo bhabhiyan ayen woh kam az kam lakhon ka jaheez to zaroor laen jabke woh mahrukh na to us ka baap hai na bahi jab ke talha mera aklauta beta hai mere bhi kuch armaan hain aachi soorat ka kiya hai koi haisiyat bhi to ho phir somia mein koi burai bhi na thi us ka bahi America mein buhat aazhi post par hai (un k ibaaton par tania ka hosla jawab de giya)
Tania: bas buhat ho giya aunty aap ko mahrukh ke bare mein aise baat karne ka koi haq nahi mahrukh hamein sehar se ziada aziz hai aur jahan tak tahmoor aur salman ki baat hai to mahrukh ki shadii en mein se kisi se bhi ho jae to hamari khush kismati hai talha ko mein aacha larka samajhti thi lekin aap khudh hi us ke itne affairs bata chuki hain jab ke kise somia ke saath woh serious bhi tha agar yehi baat hai to hamein maaf ki jiye hum talha ke saath mahrukh ki shadii nahi kar sakte (tania ke es tarah gusse mein ane se shehla ghabra gai)
Shehla: are beta maine aise hi ek baat ki hai somia to bas aise hi………(she cant understand how to control the situation) mujhe to khudh mahrukh buhat pasand hai (pehle ki bajae ab un ka lehja aur alfaaz badle huwe the lekin mahrukh ka poora wajood zalzalon ki zad mein aa giya cups mein dali gai chai thandi ho chuki thi woh teeze se palti and get shock to see a person standing infront of her



Edited by genious420 - 21 September 2006 at 2:45am

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