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Mere Dharkano Ko Qarar dO<<<sujal kashsih (Page 6)

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Mere Dharkano ko Qarar do     
Neeche se ati toor phoor ki awaaz par us ne ghusse se book ko table par pakha tahmoor ko ae huwe ek hafta huwa tha aur us ne ate hi ghar mein kaam shuru karwa diya tha mahrukh ne apna sir table par rakh diya aur wahiin so jati hai
Rakshanda: mahrukh (Rakshanda ke shoulder hilane par us ne table par rakha apna sir utha kar unhe dekha woh shahyad soo gai thi neeche se awaazein ana bhi ab band ho gai thin
Rakshanda: kiya huwa soo gai thin (unho ne us ke chehre par se balloon ko hatate huwa poocha)
Mahrukh: shahyad pata hi nahi chala
Rakshanda: aacha phir tiyaar ho jao neeche sab tumhara intezaar kar rahe hain
Mahrukh: kyun
Rakshanda: tahmoor ne nai car li hai aur woh sab ko treat de raha hai
Mahrukh: ami main nahi jaa sakti kal mera buhat zarrori test hiaaur wese bhi sardi ki wajah se mere sir mein dard ho raha hai (mahrukh ki baat sun kar Rakshanda ek pal ko chup ki chup rah gain phir unhi ne gor se apni bete ke chehre ko dekha)
Rakshanda: mahrukh kia baat hia main mehsoos kar rahi hoon jab se tahmoor aya hai tum na to neeche jati ho aur na hi tahmoor se baat karti ho tum dono mein koi narazgi hai kia
Mahrukh: nhai ami aise to koi baat nahi hai main kyun tahmoor bahi se naraz hone lagi bas test ki masroofiyat hain es liye jaise hi test khatam ho gen main sab se pehle tahmoor bahi se treat loon gi
Rakshanda: chalo thiek hai main un ke saath jaa rahi hoon hum gate bahir se lock kar ke jaen ge (woh neeche utarte huwe bolen to us ne ghera saans liya)        & nbsp; * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
subeh university jane ke liye mahrukh neeche lounge mein ati hai to she get surprised after seeing new decoration of house the house looks beautiful just then she sees sehar enters

Mahrukh: ghar buhat khhobsoorat ho giya hai (sehar doesn't answer) kiya baat hia sehar tum mujh se baat nahi kar rahen
Sehar: kyun ke main tum se naraaz hoon
Mahrukh: kyun (pareshaan hote huwe)
Sehar: es liye ke main tum ko samajh nahi paa rahi tumhein ho kiya giya hai jab se tahmoor bhai aye hain tum ne neeche ana choor diya hai sare ghar ka furnisher badla tha tum ne apne kamre ka change karwane se inkaar kar diya tumhein pata hai tahmoor bahi ne kitne pyaar se tumhare kamre ka furnisher pasand kiya tha tumhein bahir jane ke liye bulain to tum inkaar kar deti ho tahmoor bahi ne nai car le tum woh dekhne tak neeche nahin utren kiya main yeh samjhon ke tum hamein apna nahi samajhtin hamari khusiyan tumhein hum sab ki nahi sirf hamari lagti hain
Mahrukh: sehar (us ne bare dukh se kaha) tum mujhe aisa samajhti ho (us ki aankhon aanson se barh jati hain sehar gets embarrass)
Sehar: I am sorry mahrukh lekin tum janti ho na tahmoor bahi hamare liye kiya ehmiyat rakhte hain unho ne hamari khushiyon ki khatir kabhi apni khushiyon ki parwah nahi ki main tahmoor bahi se buhat pyaar karti hoon agar un ko koi takleef hoti hia to un se ziada takleef mujhe hoti hai tumhare behaviour se un ko buhat takleef hoti hai mahruk woh kuch kehte nah ito kiya huwa main aachi tarah janti hoon mian to es baat par heeran hoon ke hum sab se zida tum tahmoor bahi se kareeb thin phir ab kiya huwa (sehar ne ulajh kar kaha) kahiin tum tahmoor bahi se naraz to nahi
Mahrukh jo age hi sehar ki baton se pareshaan thi yeh baat sun kar aur bhi pareshaan ho gai
Mahrukh: aise koi baat nahi hai sehar main tahmoor bahi se naraaz nahi hoon aur jahan tak neeche na ane ka sawal hai to aaj kal mere test ho rahe hain es liya aaj mere test khatam ho jaen ge to main sara din neeche hi rahoon gi aur jahan tak furnisher ki baat hai to mujhe lagta hai ke itne saalon mein main apne bed aur cheezon ki es kadar adi ho gai hoon ke mujhe lagta hai ke shahyad es ke begair mujhe neend na aye aur paint tum janti ho ke es ki boo se mere tabiyat kis kadarkharab hoti hia (woh normal lehje mein baatein kar ke sehar ka dehaan batane mein kamayab ho gai lekin university pohanch kar us ka sara etmenan ruksat ho giya lecture ke dooran bhi us ka dehaan baar baar sehar ki baton ki taraf mur jata)
Mahrukh (to herself): agar sehar aur ami ne yeh baat mehsoos ki hai to baqiyon ne bhi mehsoos ki ho gi (us ne pareshaani se soocha) es tarah karne se to sab baar baar wajah poochen ge to mian kiya bataon gi jab tahmoor bahi sab bhool chuke hain to mujhe es se koi sarokaar nahi to main kyun khudh ko halkaan kar rahi hoon aur saath saath dosron ko bhi naraz kar rahi hoon mujhe neeche jana chahiye kise ke hone yaan na hone se kiya farq parta hai (then she sees her friend coming to him so after that shez busy i ntalking to her)
coming up: tahmoor and mahrukh again face to face but this time all family members iz also there
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Edited by genious420 - 30 April 2006 at 4:17am

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  Mere Dharkano ko Qarar do

Lounge main dakhil hote hi bachon ki chehkar se salman ko andaza ho giya ke tania aye huwe hai tamoor ne good mein areeba (tania's daughter) aue ek tang par sheryar (tania's son) ko bhetai ahista ahista us ke kaan mein kuch keh raha tha aur woh tahmoor ko beyaqeene se dekh raha tha phir achanak tahmoor ke pass se uth kar woh sehar ke pass aa giya
Sheryar: khala yeh mere mamu hain (pointing towards tahmoor sehar smiles)
Sehar: haan yeh tumhare mamu hain
Sheryar: lekin mere mamu to woh hain (poiting towards salman whoz sitting with tahmoor)
Sehar: haan yeh bhi mamu hain aur woh bhi (lekin sheryar sahab ab bhi tahmoor ko mashkook nazron se dekh rahe the us ke es tarah dekhne se tahmoor kheka laga kar hans para)
Tahmoor: Tania tumhare bete ko yaqeen kyun nahi ata ke main bhi es ka kuch lagta hoon
Tania just smile
Salman: bahi yeh khane ka rishtedaar hai aap abhi ese chocolate pakrain abhi aap es ke favourite mamu ban jae gen
Tahmoor: aacha aise baat hai (salman ke khene par us ne muskara kar sheryar ki taraf dekha jo ab mahrukh se baatein kar raha tha sheryar se hoti huwe us ki nazrein mahrukh ke muskarate chehre par tehr gaen)
Just then haleema enters
Haleema: chalo bahi khana lag giya hai (hearing his mom's voice he comz into reality)
On the dinning table they r still busy in chatting when mahrukh put curry in his plate tahmoor gives her a surprising look as he knew how much she hate vegetables salman feels tahmoor reaction after seeing mahrukh he smiles and say
Salman: bahi heeran hone ki zaroorat nhai hai mohtarma kafi badal chuki hain ab yeh sherni nahi balke hirni ban chuki hai (salman ke kehne par sab muskara diye woh jante thi ke us ke bare mein baat ho rahi hai lekin us ne sir utha kar kise ki taraf nahi dekha)
Tahmoor: haan woh to mian dekh hi raha hoon (tahmoor ne gor se us ke jhuke huwe sir ko dekha0
Salman: bahi aap dono ek doosre se naraz hain (salman ke poochne par jahan ek muskarahat tahmoor ke chehre par ai wahin mahrukh ne ghusse se pahlo badla)
Tahmoor: main to bilkul bhi naraz nahi lekin lagta hai mahi mujh se naraz hai (woh shararat se muskaraya to mahrukh ne kha jane wali nazron se use ghoora)
Haleema: aacha main bhi kahoon mahrukh neeche kyun nahi ati kyun beta tum tahmoor se kis baat par naraz ho (haleema ke poochne par woh pareshaan ho gai ab sab ki nazrein us par jami thin us (mahrukh) ko phansa kar woh (tahmoor) bare maze se khana khane mein masroof ho giya)
Mahrukh: nahi to mumma main to naraz nahi hoon mere test ho rahe the es liye neeche nahi aa saki sab ko bata chuki hoon koi yaqeen hi nahi karta
Tania: woh thiek to keh rahi hai mumma aap khudh soochen bhala tahmoor aur mahrukh ek doosre se kaise naraz ho sakte hain (Tania ki baat par tahmoor ne naazrein utha kar mahrukh ki taraf dekha jis ka chehra ghusse se red ho raha tha woh muskara kar dobara khane mein masroof ho giya khane ke baad sab ek dafa phir longe mein aa gae to majbooran use bhi ana para pehle hi neeche na ane ki wajah se woh achi khasi pareshaan huwe thi woh mazeed unhe koi mauqa nahi dena chahti thi dheer sare chocolates sheryar ko dene ke baad akhir kaar sheryar ne tahmoor ko apna mamu maan hi liya
Haleema (while seeing areeba and sheryar): bachon ke ane se ghar mein kitni ronaq ho jati hai
Tania: to mumma aap tahmoor shadi kar den take yahan bhi ronaq ho jae
Haleema: lo tum se ziada mujhe jaldi hai mera bas chale to mian kal ki bajae aaj kar doon par yeh mane to (haleema ne tahmoor ki taraf dekha to Tania ne bhi apna rukh tahmoor ki taraf moor liya)
Tania: kyun tahmoor ab kiya problem hai teen saal se tum yeh keh kar taal rahe the main aa nahi sakta mera kaam set nahi lekin ab to aisa koi masla nahi
Tahmoor: haan to main kab mana kar raha hoon
Sehar: to es ka matlab hai aap tiyaar hain (sehar ne beyaqeene se poocha to tahmoor muskara diya wahan par behte sab logon ke chehre khil uthe sawai mahrukh ke jo cushion par behti magazine dekh rahi thi)
Tania: mumma bas aap tiyaari karen ek larki miane dekh rakhi hai hamare neighbors main nai aye hain
Salman: api pehle bahi se to pooch len yeh na ho ke unho ne pehle hi koi larki pasand kar rakhi ho yaan london mein hi kise ko dil de behte hoon (tahmoor just smiles)
Tania: kyun tahmoor? (tania ke poochne par tahmoor jo sofa ki back se take lagai sab ki baatein enjoy kar raha tha ek dam seedha hote huwe kadre age ko jhuka)
Tahmoor: shadii to kise aachi larki se karni chahiye kyun mahi? (us ki baat par mahrukh chonki us ne sir utha kar tahmoor ko ekha jo use goor se dekh raha tha)
Haleema: are use kiya pata woh to bachi hai (haleema ke kehne par bhi us ne mahrukh ke chehre se apni nazrein nahi hatai thin)
Tahmoor: mumma mahi bhi aachi larki hai es liye us se pooch raha hoon (mahrukh ka dil sookhe pate (leaf) ki tarah laraz utha jatata huwa andaaz pichle baat ka hawala us ki beyaqeen aankhen aanson se bharne lagin thin us ne kabhi nahi soocha tha ke tahmoor kabhi sar-e-mehfil use yeh baat jata sakta hai)
Salman: bahi baat ghumane ki koshish kar rahe hain (salman uth kar us ke karee baa giya to tahmoor ne apni nazren mahrukh ke dhuwan dhuwan hote chehre se hata len aur khul kar muskaraya)
Mahrukh khamoshi se uth kar wahan se aa gai
Mahrukh: es shaks (person) se kiya koi aaci umeed rakhi jaa sakti hia (seeriyan (stairs) charte huwe us ne khudh se kaha) lekin agar unho ne sab ko bata diya to (woh teeze se seeriyan chahrne lagi aur apne kamre mein chale gai and tears roll down from her eyes)
Background Music
Kis dagar jaon jane
Kuch samajh mein na aye
Mere dil ki beecheni
Aur barhti hi jae
Bujh gae sare diye
OOOOOOoooooo
Apni palkon ke tale
Sare umeeden piyaasi
Thora sa pyaar huwa tha
kuch nahi baqi
Thora sa pyaar huwa tha
Kuch nahi baqi
coming up: talha iz back hez trying to flirt wid mahrukh



Edited by genious420 - 30 April 2006 at 4:19am
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Mere Dharkano ko Qarar do
Sadia (to be saas of sehar): bas haleema ab baat pakki samjho es Friday ko sehar aur sufian ki engagement kar dete hain aur do mah tak shadii hamari taraf se to sari arrangements complete hain aur tumhare liye do mah kafi hain hamien kuch bhi nahi chahiye Allah ka fazal hai bas sehar beti hamein de do
Haleema (smile): behen jee! sehar aap hi ki bete hai mujhe bas tahmoor ka intezaar hai aaj kal us ne apne dost ke saath mil kar factory shuru ki hai es silsile mein bagh door kar raha hai abhi bhi teen din se Islamabad giya huwa hai woh aa jae to inshallah yeh kaam bhi ho jae ga
Sadia: haan to abhi Friday ane mein poore saat din baqi hain tab taq sab intezaam ho jaen ge bas ab mein aur kuch nahi suno gen
Haleema (smiles at her decision): jaisa aap behtar samjhen
Mahrukh jab neeche aye to kafi khush gawar mahool mein chai pee jaa rahi thi woh sab se milne ke baad sehar ko dhhondte huwe lawn mein nikal aye saamne chairs par sehar ke saath koi aur bi behta tha woh abhi sooch hi rahi thi jab sehar ne use dekh kar pukar liya sehar ke pukarne par woh shaks (person) teeze se palta tha aur us shaks ko dekh kar mahrukh heeran reh gai
Person:
Assalam-o-alaikum (mahrukh ke karee bane par us ne khare ho kar salam kiya)
Mahrukh: w salam
Sehar: mahrukh yeh talha hain pehchana (ok so that person is none other than tahmoor (sujal) saut talha (piyush) lolz) (mahrukh just ods her head in yes) aur talha yeh mahrukh hai
Talha: en ko kon bhool sakta hai (talha ne es andaaz mein kaha ke sehar hans pari jab ke mahrukh confuse ho gai)
Sehar (to mahrukh): tum ab tak kahan thi
Mahrukh: soo rahi thi (mahrukh ke kehne par talha ne goor se us ka chehra dekha jahan aankhon mein ab bhi neend ka khumar baqi tha)
Sehar: aacha tum talha ko company do main bas do minute mein aye (us ne kehne ke saath hi mahrukh ka baazo pakar kar us ko chair ke kareeb khara kar diya aur khudh teeze se ander ki taraf barh gai)
Talha: aap behten (talha ke kehne par woh jhijakte huwe beht gai kuch lamhe khamoshi ki nazar ho gai talha musalsal use ki taraf dekh raha tha jo nazrein jhukai grass ko dekh rahe thi akhrt talha ne es khamoshi ko toora)
Talha: aap koi baat nahi karen gi
Mahrukh: main kiya baat karoon
Talha: kuch bhi (mahrukh kuch der ruki phir us ki taraf dekh kar bole)
Mahrukh: aap aaj kal kiya kar rahe hain (woh jo buhat goor se use dekh raha tha khul kar muskaraya)
Talha: darasal pehle main pagal tha lekin rank mein azafe ke saath mere pagal pan mein bhi azafa ho giya hai (us ki awaaz ke saath saath us ke chehre par bhi shararat thi pichle mulaqat ki yaad mahrukh ke damagh mein roshan huwe to woh khul kar hans pari talha ne bare dilchaspi se us ke chehre ko dekha)
Mahrukh: aap ko ab bhi yaad hai (muskara ke us ko dekhti hai)
Talha: aji hum to kuch bhi nahi bhoole (woh ghera saans le kar bola phir jaldi se sanmbhal giya) aap kiya kar rahe hain
Mahrukh: main psychology main MSC kar rahi hoon
Talha: that's nice
Mahrukh: aap aaj kal yahan Lahore main hote hain (kuch der khamoshi ke baad mahrukh ne baat age barhane ko bola)
Talha: jee aaj kal to Lahore mein hi hoon pichle teen saal se mere posting Peshawar mein thi (us ne muskarate huwe kaha) wese mahrukh aap buhat badal gai hain(talha ke kehne par us ne chounk kar us ki taraf dekhne lagi tabhi us ke nazar sehar par pare jo un ki taraf aa rahi thi mahrukh ki khamosi par talha muskaraya) dekha agar aap na badle hoten to abhi mujhe bara zabardast jawab milta (us ne phir pichle baat ka hawala diya to mahrukh mutmaen (relax) ho kar muskara di tabhi horn ki awaaz par sehar wapis palti) ek baat kahoon aap se (mahrukh sehar ko dekh rahe thi ek dam chounki) aap ka woh roop bhi zabardast tha lekin yeh roop dil fareb hai
Mahrukh ki muskarahat gaib ho gae us ke lehje mein aisa kuch tha ke us ki dharkan ek dam teez ho gai us ne ghabra kar gate se ander dakhil hone wali tahmoor ki car ko dekha us ne bhi unhe dekh liya tha tahmoor ko dekhte hi mahrukh ke chehre ka rang badla us ne nazren ghuma kar talha ki taraf dekha jo gheri nazron se use dekh raha tha sirf ek pal laga tha aur mahrukh talha ko dekh kar muskara di aur us ki muskarahat par jese woh khil giya itne mein tahmoor bhi un tak pohanch giya
Talha:
are tahmoor kaise hain aap? (tahmoor ko dekhte hi woh uth kar us ke gale laga talha ke gale lagte huwe tahmoor ne gaur se mahrukh ki shakal dekhi mahrukh ne nazrein utha kar tahmoor ko dekha aur ander jane ke liye kadam barha diye)

coming up: talha propose mahrukh........par guys kiya mahrukh talha ko haan keh de gi........aur jab tahmoor ko pata chale ga to us ka reaction kia hoga.........kiya woh apne dil mein basi mahrukh ki mohabbat ko jaan pae ga.........yaan us ne kabhi mahrukh ko mohababt ki hi nahi......kiya mahrukh ke dil mein tahmoor ke liye basi huwe nafrat mit pae gi....just wait and readWink

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Edited by genious420 - 30 April 2006 at 4:25am
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hey guyz i hope itne kafi hain i'll post others soon
and sont forget to comment plzzzzzz
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thanx yaar Smile cont it waiting and last but not the least nice nice part
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thanx yaar Smile cont it waiting and last but not the least nice nice part Clap
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i'm confused...y exactly does mahi hate tahmoor? lovely story...waiting to read the next part.
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she doesnt hate him yaar she is ignoring him bz jab mahi ne us purpose kia tha tu tahmoor ne us mana kar diya tha aur wo abroad chal gaya Cry

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