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Mere Dharkano Ko Qarar dO<<<sujal kashsih (Page 5)

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Posted: 09 April 2006 at 8:03am | IP Logged

   Mere Dharkano ko Qarar do

Mahrukh aur sehar university se wapis aa rahi hoti hain and they r walking towards their house
Mahrukh: tauba kis kadar sardii hai subah jab main uthi to sardi ke mare mere daant bajne lage the aur aaj to suraj bhi nahi nikla (mahrukh ne sir utha kar aasman par suraj ko dhoondne ki koshsih ki thi)
Sehar: mahrukh! Jaldi chalo na tum kiya reeng reeng kar chal rahi ho (stop se ghar tak ka rasta 5 min ka tha jo un ko kise azaab se kam nahi lag raha tha)
Atlast woh ghar pohach jati hain sehar ne dabao daal kar gate kholne ki koshish ki lekin woh ander se lock tha
Sehar: lo aaj gate band hai (sehar ne ghusse se bell par ungli rakhi aur phir uthana bhool gai)
Mahrukh: are sehar mere pass keys hain (lekin mahrukh ke keys nikalne se pehle hi salman door khool chukka tha)
Salman: yeh kiya tareeqa tumhara bell bajane ka sari tameez university bhool ai ho kiya (salman kehte huwe teeze se ander mur giya tameez ke es lecture par dono ne ek doosre ko sawalia nazron se dekha aur ander chali gain lekin lounge amin enter hote saath hi un ko salman ke lecture ki waja samajh main aa gai jahan sufian ke parents behte huwe the mahrukh ne sehar k itaraf dekha jis ke chehre par ek rang aa raha tha aur ek jar aha tha mahrukh un ko salam kar ke upper sone chali gai shaam ko woh fresh ho kar kitchen main ai tic hai peene ke baad us ka sehar ke saath do do haath karne ka program tha woh chai le kar rakshanda ke pass aa gain jo kise sooch main gum thin mahrukh k odekh kar woh muskarain)
Rakshanda: sufian ke parents baat pake kar gai hain ese saal shadii ka program bhi hai un ka
Mahrukh (muskarate huwe): yeh to khushi ki baat hai
Rakshanda: aacha yeh batao arooj ki shadii kab hai
Mahrukh: do teen months tak woh log tiyarion main masroof hain saman k ibhi do mah tak hai es saal to sari shaadiyan akhate aa rahi hain mera to aacha khaasa kharcha ho jae ga (muskara kar bolte hai)
Rakshanda: sab ke naseeb khul rahe hain pata nahi tumhare kab khule gen (rakshnada ke sard ahh barhne par mahrukh ne nazar utha kar unhe dekha)
Mahrukh: to es mein parshaan hone wali kon si baat hai ami jab naseeb main hoga ho jae gi (khari ho jati hai) main sehar ke pass jaa rahi hoon (woh jane lagti hai then)
Rakshanda: mere pass tumhare liye ek aur gud news hai (ek dam murti hai)
Mahrukh (khush hote huwe): kiya
Rakshanda: aaj shaam ko tahmoor aa raha hai (us ke honton se ek dam muskarahat gaib ho gai)
Mahrukh: aacha (wid expressionless voice)
Rakshanda: haan es liye to sehar ke liye haan ki hai us ke ane par engagement ho gi aaj subah hi us ka phone aya tha aaj shaam ko pohanch raha hai hum sab to heeran reh gai (apni khushi main unho ne us ke bhuje huwe chehre ko bhi nahi dekha woh uth kar apne kamre ki taraf jane lagi)
Rakshanda: are tum to sehar ke pass jaa rahe the (heerat se mahrukh ko dekha)
Mahrukh: woh kal mera test hai mujhe us ki tiyaari karni hai (woh teeze se apne kamre main aa gai bed par beht kar us ne notes apne age phela liye kitne der tak woh be maqsad un ko ghoorti rahi es waqt us ka zehan bilkul khali tha achanak us ko bahir se sehar ki awaaz suanai dete hai)
Sehar: are chachi jaan aap abhi tak tiyaar nahi huwen aap ne mahrukh ko bataya ke aaj bahi aa rahe hain (us ki awaaz se hi us ki khushi ka andaza ho raha tha)
Rakshanda: ander hai
Sehar: aacha main use dekhte hoon (mahukh jaldi se notes haath mein pakar lete hai sehar ander kamre mein ati hai)
Sehar: mahrukh tumhein pata chala aaj tahmoor bahi aa rahe hain tum tiyaar nahi huwe abhi tak hamein airport jana hai salman ata hi hoga apni dost ki car le kar jaldi se utho (sehar ne use haath se pakar kar uthane ki koshsih ki)
Mahrukh: sehar plz yaar kal mera test hai tumhein to pata hai na sir ka relation halakoo khan ke khandaan se hai aur agar marks kam ayen ge to woh mere poori class ke saamne insult kar den ge
Sehar: mujhe kuch nahi pata jaldi se utho
Mahrukh: sehar plz main sach keh rahi hoon mere bilkul bhi tiyaari nahi hai aur wese bhi sab jaa rahen hain to jaga kahan nikle gi gari mein aur phir waapsi mein kiya karen ge tahmoor bahi ko kiya gari ki chat par bhitain gen tum sab jao main un se ghar par mil loon gi (sehar is still confused abu wat to do and wat not to do mahrukh see her face and say) its okay sehar tahmoor bahi ko ana to ghar par hi hai na main tab un se mil loon gi (sehar relaxed ho jati hai)
Sehar: wese mahrukh tum buhat badal gai ho es ka ehsaas aaj mujhe ho raha hai warna es waqt sab se pehle tum gari mein sawar hotin (mahrukh sir jhuka kar muskara de)
Mahrukh: aacha ab jao (us ne sehar ko bahir dhakela aur darwaza band kar diya)
Jab sehar bahir ati hai then rakshand aask her
Rakshanda: mahrukh nahi aa rahi
Sehar: nahi aap chalen main aap ko batati hoon
Kuch der baad awaazein ana band ho gain woh khieke ke pass aa kar bahir dekhne lagi jahan salman darwaza lock kar raha tha aur phir gari mein beht kar chala giya woh wapis bed par ati hai aur blanket le kar lait jati hia aur phir kitne hi aanson us ki aankhon se nikal kar us ka pillow bhigote rahe
Background music
Dil ka gham dil hi jane
Kiya kahoon main kise se
Maine aanson chupai
En labon ki hansi se
Dil ne to kuch chaha tha
Aur kuch ho giya hai
Mere palkon ka sapne
Ab kahiin kho giya hai
Mere aankhon main nami
OOOooooooo
Es mein ho gin a kami
Chahi chehre pe udaasi
Jis se ekrar huwa tha
Choota woh saathi
Thora sa pyaar huwa tha
Kuch nahi baqi

coming up: tahmoor and mahrukh face to face after three years

do comment guyz



Edited by genious420 - 09 April 2006 at 8:06am

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 Mere Dharkano ko Qarar do

Subah woh mamool se pehle ghar se nikal ai neeche mukamal tor par khamoshi ka raj tha university pohanch kar woh thiek tarah se koi lecture attend nahi kar pai
Raat ko woh log teen baje ghar pohanche the aur subah saat baje soe the woh bhi sari raat jagte rahe thi teen baje jab sehar use bulane ai to woh soote ban gai sari raat jagne ki wajah se us ki aankhen aur tabiyat dono bhojal ho rahe the
Sidra: mahrukh (sidra ke awaaz dene par woh chonki) kahan gum ho tum tabiyat thiek hai tumhari
Mahrukh: hun………..woh raat ko der se soi thi na es liye (phir woh mazeed khudh ko soochon se bachane ke liye un ke saath baton mei nmasroof ho gai woh khudh nahi janti thi woh chahti kiya hai bus stop se utar kar woh dheere dheere chalne lagi gate ke saamne khare ho kar woh kitne der soochti rahi ke woh bell de yaan na de……phir kise nateeje par pohanch kar us ne bag se keys nikalen us ki tawaqo ke mutabiq abhi sab soo rahe the upper aa kar us ne rakshanda ke kamre mein jhanka to woh bhi soo rahi thin woh apne kamre mein chali aa gai fresh hone ke baad woh kitchen mein aa gai jo ke bilkul saaf tha yaani khane ko kuch nahi paka tha kuch der woh khari kitchen ko ghoorti rahi phir fridge khol kar us mein se egg nikal kar boil kiya aur saath fresh orange juice glass mein nikal kar table par rakhne ke liye juhin mure to aankhon ke saath us ka wajood bhi sakit ho giya aamne saamne khare woh dono ek doosre ko yun dekh rahe the jaise abhi palken jhapkain to sab khatam ho jae ga teen saal baad woh chahra us ke saamne tha us ne jaldi se nazren jhuka len
Tahmoor: kaise ho mahi (teen saal baad woh us ki awaaz sun rai thi us k isamajh mein nah iaya ke woh kiya kahe)
Mahrukh: asalamoalaikum (us ki nazrein jhuki huwen thi)
Tahmoor: w salam (he smiles) tum raat ko bhi mujh se nahi milen subah bhi jab main upper aya to tum jaa chuki thi ab gate khulne ki awaaz par soocha khudh tum se mil loon (woh ab bhi chup rahi tahmoor ne gor se us ke jhuke sir ko dekha) tum airport kyun nahi ayen (woh ab bhi kuch na boli) mahi tum ne jawab nahi diya
Mahrukh: sab gae to the
Tahmoor: lekin sab mein aur tum mein buhat farq hai main tumhari baat kar raha hoon (ab ke mahrukh ne nazren utha kar us ke fresh chehre ko dekha en teen salon main us mein koi farq nahi para tha sawai es ke keh woh aur ziada handsome ho giya tha
Mahrukh (to herself): kuch log hote hai n jo doosron ka sakoon barbaad kar ke unhe toor kar khush rehte hain (tahmoor ne gor se us ke chehre ke badalte rang ko dekha aur muskarate huwe ander aa giya)
Tahmoor: naraz ho (mahrukh ne apne kareeb us ki awaaz sune wohi behlata huwa shafqat se bharpoor lehja en teen salon mein yaan to who us ki galti bhool chukka tha yaan maaf kar chuka tha lekin woh na to tahmoor ko aur na hi apne aap ko kabhi maaf kar sakti thi us ne kuch kehna hi chaha tha ke rakshanda ki awaaz ati hai)
Rakshanda: are tahmoor uth gae tum (khush hote huwe)
Tahmoor: jee chahchi jaan neeche sab soo rahe the to soocha mahi se mil aon (us ne muskara kar mahrukh ke ghazabnak tewar dekhe)
Rakshanda: aacha huwa tum aa kar mil liye warna abhi tahmoor bahi karte neeche pohanch jate (un ki baat par mahrukh ki bardaasht jawab de gai aur woh kitchen se bahir nikal ai)
Rakshanda: are mahrukh khana to kah lo
Mahrukh: mujhe bhook nahi hai
Woh teeze se kamre mein aa gai bed par beht kar woh kitni der khudh par kaboo pane ki koshsih karte rahi woh uth kar khirki ke pass aa gai aur khirke kholne par thandi hawa ne us ka istakbaal kiya tha lekin woh thandh se beniyaaz neeche dekhne lagi
Mahrukh (to herself): aap bhool sakte hain aap ne kiya kaha tha leki n main nahi bhool sakti aaj teen saal guzarne ke baad bhi aap ka lehja aap ka ek ek lafz muje aachi tarah yaad hai aap woh sab kuch bhool kar tahmoor ban sakte hain lekin main woh mahi nahi ban sakti woh mahi to tab hi mar gai thi jab aap ne us ka maan toora tha us ki mohabbat ko pagal pan kaha tha main mahrukh hoon woh mahrukh jo aap se nafrat karti hai main aap ko kabhi maaf nahi kar sakti kabhi nahi (ek aanson us ki aankh se nikal kar us ke ruksaar par lakeer banata huwa gum ho giya)   

coming up: family members feel mahrukh ignorance

do comment guys   wese yeh part thora bore ho giya (i feel that)





Edited by genious420 - 09 April 2006 at 8:09am
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zillae dear ur story is justttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
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plz jaldi se aage likho....... Embarrassed
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goody goody partClap Clap continue
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is your name zillae genious?... Clap ..great story and its not boring....i love it.....aur jase sun le na dekha hai....tahmoor aur bhi acah lagne laga hai Clap
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zillae plz continue soon...waiting to read the other parts very eagerly...ur a too good writer.. i really like ur writing... Clap
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plllzzz continueee
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hey yaar u didn't post the parts that u posted on "announcement kahi...", can u please post them here also...and even in the anouncement area i couldn't find one of the part when the niqah of tahmoor and mahi is being decided. i hope u will post these parts as soon as possible...i love ur fan-fic...keep up the good work.take care..comtinue soon

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