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Mere Dharkano Ko Qarar dO<<<sujal kashsih (Page 4)

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Mere Dharkano ko Qarar do
Waqt ke saath saath woh buhat badal gai thi sharartein kheke us ne sab chor diye the FSC jab us ne shaandar numbers se pass kiya to us ne medical main admission lene se inkaar kar diya medical main jana us ki kitne bari khuwahish thi sab jante the sab heeran the sab ne use samjhane ki buhat koshish ki lekin us ki naa haan main na badle arooj aur sidra ke number merit ke mutabiq nahi aye the so unho ne us ke saath admission le liya tha jab tahmoor ko pata chala ke woh medical main admission nahi le rahi to us ne kitne hi phone kar daleā€¦lekin ab woh us shaks ki awaaz bhi sunna nahi chahti thi jis ne us ka maan toora tha
              Now after three years
A girl enter in a house
Gate se ander dakhil hote saath hi us ki pehle nazar sheryar par pari jo salman ki bike par charne ki koshish kar raha tha gate khulne ki awaaz par woh gate ki taraf mura aur wahiin se khala khala pukarta us se lipat giya us ne us ke dono gaal choome aur use le kar lawn main aa gai jahan sab behte dhoop ka maza le rahe the
Girl: hi api kaise hain aap (sheryar ka haath chor kar Tania ke kareeb aye)
Tania: are mahrukh! Main to bilkul thiek hoon tum sunao university kaise jaa rahi hia
Mahrukh: aachi jaa rahi hai (saath hi us ne Tania ki goodh main lete us ki 7 months ki bete {daughter} ko uthaya) hi guriya
Sheryar come near to mahrukh with a luddo in hia hand: khala! Chale khelte hain
Haleema: mahrukh bete pehle khana kha lo phir es shetaan ke saath khelna
Just then sehar enters mahrukh gives her a role of paper and say
Mahrukh: tumhare en notes ke liye mujhe itna khuwaar hona para bata nahi sakte
Sehar: thank u (and kiss on her gaal and for this mahrukh forget all her ghussa)
And now salman enters
He see Tania and say
Salman: are wah yahan to bari ronaq lagi hai
Tania: tum kahan the subah se main kab se aye hoon aur tumhai nab fursat mil rahi hai
Salman: sach api mujhe bilkul pata nahi tha keh aap aye hain aaj kal mere nite duty hote hai es liye sara din sota hoon warna aap ayen aur hum sone ki jisarat karen is this possible
Tania: haan tumhari sari mohabbat ko main jante hoon itni tiyaari se kahan jaa rahe ho (she observe him from head to toe)
Salman: bata to raha hoon hospital
Tania: hmmmmmmm daal main kuch kala lata hai (mahrukh aur sehar ko dekhte hain)
Sehar: jee nahi poori daal hi kaali hai (sehar ke kehne par salamn chir kar uth giya)
Salman: tum to ho hi mere dushman (and walk out)

rakshanda enter
Rakshanda: salman chala giya
Sehar: jee
Haleema: sehar jao beta zara kitchen to dekh lo sheraz ane wala ho ga
Sehar: aacha ami jate hoon (and goes to kitchen and mahrukh is still there)
Tania: maine aap se sadia aunty ke bete ki baat ki thi phir kiya soocha aap ne (mahrukh aur sehar ke kaan khare ho gai)
Haleema: mujhe to rishta buhat pasand hai lekin sooch rahi thi ek baar tahmoor se baat kar loon itne din ho gae us ka phone bhi nahi aya pata nahi kiya baat hai
Tania: ufho ami es main soochne wali kiya baat hai sadia aunty sheraz ki khala hain main un ko aachi tarah jante hoon rooz aunty phone kar ke poochte hain ab main un ko kiya jawab doon
Haleema: aacha main ek do din main bataon gi
Mahruk h sehar ke pass kitchen main jate hai
Jahan seher fridge main kuch dhoond rahe hote hai mahrukh fridge se take laga kar us ka chehra dekh rahe hoti hai pehle to sehar chup rehte hai but then
Sehar: kiya takleef hai
Mahrukh (innocently say): kiya huwa maine kuch kaha
Sehar: to ghoor kyun rahi ho
Mahrukh: to kiya tumhein ghoorne ka hak sirf sadia aunty ke bete (son) ke pass hai (after much thinking) ummmmmm kiya naam tha us ka
Sehar (ek dam bolte hai): sufian
Mahruk: OOOoooooo
Sehar give him a punch
Mahrukh: batmeez itne zoor se kyun mara maine kiya kia hai sirf naam sooch rahi thi (woh phir bhi baaz na ai) main bhi kahoon jab bhi Tania ke ghar jaen mr pehle se hi kyun wahan available hote hain aur us din achanak hi un ko university main koi kaam par giya aur woh bhi tumhare department main heerat ki baat hai na?(sehar ne ghusse se use ghoora) aur woh sadia aunty bhi MUJHE SEHAR BUHAT AACHI LAGTI HAI (mahrukh ne un ki nakal uteri to sehar hans di)
coming up: return of tahmoor

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Edited by genious420 - 09 April 2006 at 7:59am

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