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Mere Dharkano Ko Qarar dO<<<sujal kashsih (Page 18)

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zillae cont karo yaar Confused aab to wait bhi nahi ho raha Ouch

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Posted: 02 August 2006 at 12:05am | IP Logged
zilaae....plz continue soon...i ve been eagerly waitin 4 da nxt part....
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ok herez next
after all the people going mahrukhlock the doors n decide to call tahmoor so she dial tahmoor cell #
(bure bure hum hum shitan zara zara bachna re hum se)(wait thats d tone of tahmoor's cell hehehehe)
ok so tahmoor pick up the fone
tahmoor=t
mahrukh=m
t: ami maine kaha na aap fikar na kren main aa jaon ga aap jaen
m: nah iwoh main...
t: mahi tm sab thiek to hai
m: haan ..w..woh actually mjhe aap k saath jana hai
t (surprisingly): wat
m: anhi woh main tyaar nahi huwi th iaur sab late ho rahe the to bari ami ne kaha aap k saath a ajaon aur aap ko fone bh ikar loon to es liye aap kab tak aa rahe hain
t: main bas 15 min tak pohanch jaon ga tm aisa karo tyaar ho jao mere pass main door ki key hai main aa jaon ga
m: thiek hia Allah hafiz
then she dc the fone n going upstirs to get ready after half an hour she come down stairs n then she going to knock tahmoor's door
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but no one is responding from inside so she open the door n finds no one is there she going towards the wardrobe n tahmoor ke clothes nikal kar bed par rakh dete n come in lounge n calling tahmoor but her cell is off shez wait abu 15 min n now she get angry suddenly therez some khat pat in main door mahi goes there n opens the door before tahmoor open it n wid full anger tahmoor ko ghorti hai
t: aa sorry woh actually main nikal hi raha tha k ek imp kaam aa giya tm tiyaar ho
M: no response
t: main tyaar ho k aya ok sirf 5 min
m: turn her face on other side
tahmoor goes into his room n after 15 he come outside mahrukh ko aur gussa charh jata hai
t: woh.........
mahrukh go outside
t: chalen
ok now both sit in the car
ab car main kiya hota hai yeh baad main parna ok
tc luv u all bye
aache se comment karna n baqi sab bhi apni stories continue karen jaldi ok bye bye
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both sits in the car n tahmoor drive n baar baar mahrukh k odekhta hai jo full gusse main hoti hai after abu one hour he then tahmoor on the radio fm n therez a song n by listening this smile appears on tahmoor's face
koi shikwa agr ho
koi shikayat agr ho
hum se gila karo
pr...
mahrukh switch off the radio after half an hour
t: mahi i m sry yaar so sry
m: no response
T: naraz ho
still no response
T: aacha chalo gussa hi kar lo
no response
T: chalo daant hi lo par yaar kuch to kaho
suddenly tahmoor stop the car
dnt wry because marriage hall is there
mahrukh is abu to come out of car when tahmoor us ka haat hpakr leta hai
T: aise har giz nahi jane doon ga pehle mere baat ka jawab do
m: haath choren mera
T: pehle jawab do
M: kiya jawab chahte hain aap haan.........aap ko jawab h ichaiye na to sune mr tahmoor gussa insaan ko apno pe ata hai n daanta bhi insaan us ko hai jo aap ko sab se pyaara hota hai aur naraz us insaan se huwa jata hai jis se aap piyaar karte hain jo aap k dil ke kareeb rehta n for ur very kind information mere liye aap k dil main koi feeling nahi hai aur na hi main aap ko apna samjahti hoon aap ke saath rishta nibhana meri majboori hai chahat nahi
tahmoor free her hand wid disbelief disappointment dard n tears in his eyes mahrukh go into the hall n tahmoor is there alone in the car
he put her head aginst stearing n said
T: main ab mazeed tmhari nafrat bardaasht nahi kar sakta mahi mjh main ab itni himmat nah ik yeh sab seh sakon buhat akela h ogiya hoon lekin agr tm yehi chahti ho to yehi sahi main yeh rishta toor doon ga kyun k main nah ichahta k tm kise majboori main aa kar mera saat hdo main tm k osirf tmhari chahat tmahri khuwahish k saath apnana chahta hoon lekin tmhari aankhon main mere liye jo ehsaas hai j opyaar ahi main us ko bhi nahi jhutla sakta jnta hoon bhat pyaar karti ho tm mujh se tm se ziada main tm ko samajhta hoon tm mjh se jhoot bool skti h opar tmhari aankhen nahi
background song
dil pe hans k liye hain
tm ne jo ghum bante the
phool smjha un k obhi
jo nookele kaante the
nafraton main bhi tere
pyaar mera chupa hai
hoonth kuch bolat hai
aankhen kuch bolti hain
yeh galat fehmi teri
OOOooooOOOooo
di lse nikle gi kabhi
door ho gi yeh udasi
thora sa pyaar kiya tha
ab bhi hai baqi
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hey plz give ur lovely comments ab plz yeh na kehna chota part hai main to halkaan ho gai likh likh kar
n from 10th aug my annual papers r start so plz pray 4 me but dnt worry main story post karon gi bcoz aise cheezen (papers) mjh par effect nahi karte
n
coming up: jab ae ga to prh lena khudi ok
bye dnt forget to comment Smile

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