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I Won't Fall In Love With You...*Manveer FF* Pg 60 (Page 25)

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Posted: 23 December 2011 at 5:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pri01

Love the update and the romance was too good and like the use of the third person POV it gives more light to the scene.
 
I do understand Mahak dear studies come first ...so take your time and I'll wait for the next update
 
Love ya take care and thxs for the pm Hug
 
Priya  



Thank you so much for replying

I am so glad that you loved the update

Thank you for calling it beautiful <3 I just love the siggie you use! Makes the review so beautiful... *love*

Yup, I use the 3rd person pov to include both the feelings *shy*

Next update would be soon... coz i have pre-written that :P  I wrote up that chapter before I wrote this one. Lol.

I would continue soon

Thanks for the review

, Mahak

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Posted: 23 December 2011 at 5:28am | IP Logged
OMG it awesome yaar...aww they were so close and they nearly kissed...
i m really enjoying reading ur FF

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Posted: 23 December 2011 at 5:49am | IP Logged
I replied, "You know what? Jab tum hamare liye itni rang birangi bhasha ka istemaal karti ho na, toh hamein bada acha lagta hai. Lekin yeh sab chodo. Aaj in baton mein samay barbaad karne ki jagah, I would prefer to do romance." OMG..he rembmers all these things.. So cute..

really loved the part.. but it was short..

continue soon..

thanks for the pm...

take care

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Posted: 23 December 2011 at 5:53am | IP Logged
Awesome partClapClapClap.I'm already craving for moreEmbarrassed.You have actually captured Manveer's emotions in a suttle manner.Please update the further part soonSmile

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Posted: 23 December 2011 at 6:14am | IP Logged
Hey mahak,  Fantastic update Clap...really loved it... they nearly kissed  Embarrassed ...i'm already in deamland Day Dreaming ...
do continue soon

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Posted: 23 December 2011 at 6:15am | IP Logged
hai mahek.  kis point pe la ke roka hai...ab intezar ki ghariyan kaise kateingi?  seriously though, good job.  i like the different points of view...gives the reader a complete picture.  waiting eagerly for the next part.
 
sheeza

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Posted: 23 December 2011 at 6:32am | IP Logged
AwwW...its a short update..Disapprove
but superb lyk alwayzzz.Big smile
goshh i luv dere convo..
update soon..

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Posted: 23 December 2011 at 6:33am | IP Logged
hey dear thanks 4 beautiful chapter.

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