Bade Acche Laggte Hai

FF My Prediction track- 7th Jan Pg 35 - Page 24

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Posted: 12 years ago
Ram and Priya step out.

Priya is smiling to herself...

Ram: What are you smiling about?

Priya: Did you look at everyone? How happy they were...i mean they are fussing over us as if we are teenagers ...and you Ram...dont you think you are acting like one?

Ram: So...i am always young at heart...Actually Priya..you are right, i am 40 going on 18...its so wonderful to be in love...I mean i used to laugh at Vikram when he fretted over Neha...and he always said that the day i fall in love it would be the same...now i am actually realizing its so true...Love really makes your world go round...

Ram: Priya...i have actually written some thing for you...umm i mean i have attempted..

Priya: I want to read it...

Ram: See Priya i am not a very good writer but 

Priya: Ram let me atleast read it 

Ram pulls out a piece of paper from his wallet...Here you go

Priya takes the paper from him

Didnt know it was actually love when i saw that twinkle in your eye
When you and me just sat side by side watching the world go by
When my world was topsy turvy but it still seemed right 
When i did all the unusual things and did not seem to get the reason why

Why all i wanted were some moments of bliss
Why i looked at you and the heart skipped a beat
Why i heard music in my ears all the time
Why what i felt in my heart i couldn't define

Dont know when an unexplained emotion took place in my heart
Difficult it became to spend any moment apart
I used to mock love but it has struck me hard and fine
Glad that i found you and you would always be mine...

As we start this wonderful journey one promise i make 
Years later when we eventually grey
Sitting across a glorious sunset holding your hand
Looking back at the years passed by i would say
Thanks for coming into my life for it has never remained the same...
Cant describe what i feel For the first time that love beckoned it was your name!!!!

Priya read and reread the poem...the words tugging at her...her man had actually taken a herculean effort, yes herculean to actually pen down such beautiful thoughts...Misty eyed she looked at Ram...

Ram: Is it so bad that you have tears in your eyes?

Priya struggling with her voice...Ram...its beautiful...i did not know you write so well...

Ram: Priya dont pull my leg yaar...its just something that i have scribbled...

Priya: Ram i am no one to judge writing skills but anything that touches your heart has to be worthwhile and this is the most amazing birthday gift that i could have asked for...

Ram : Priya i am so glad you liked it...

Priya becomes sentimental and hugs Ram...

Ram: Oh ho...hey sweetheart ...Priya?

Ram: Priya...why are you crying?

Priya: Ram...no one has ever done anything so wonderful for me before...

Ram adjusting his frame to embrace her more securely...: I promise Priya...you will have many more of such wonderful moments...






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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome and beautiful update nodi...
thank you
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Posted: 12 years ago

dil mange more more more๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 12 years ago
An absolutely fantastic way to take the story..superb๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

M so looking forward for the next update, the only saviour to kill the weekend boredom..



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Posted: 12 years ago
@Anizor: Thanks 
@Sai: Thanks dear
@Viny: will update the next part at the earliest
@crystal: will update soon 
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it... ur my fav writer... 

 hw could u pen so well neha...


i  will always  remain  with thoughts after reading ur  ff ...

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Posted: 12 years ago
I don't have words to say on your writing OR i think i am not capable of giving my comments on such a adorable writer. :-)
I AM IN LOST OF WORDS WHENEVER I READ YOUR UPDATE. .:-P :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Molly thanks so much yaar...

Actually writing stories is not my forte ...i am more of a poem person...but glad you liked it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
[QUOTE=SWEETETIKA]I don't have words to say on your writing OR i think i am not capable of giving my comments on such a adorable writer. :-)
I AM IN LOST OF WORDS WHENEVER I READ YOUR UPDATE. .:-P :-)[/QUOTE

Hey Sweetetika: Thats truly like your profile name...sweet :-) ...but plz keep reading ..and also commenting ...helps me improve 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very Sweet for Ram... for attempting to write such love words for Priya... being a Business Tycoon... its great gesture...

Neha.. you are developing RaYa romance very beautifully ...its truely emphasis that LOVE is Ageless and Timeless...

Do continue soon..