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ArHi SS: Vertigo - Completed [Sequel link on Page 1] (Page 77)

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Posted: 01 April 2013 at 8:15pm | IP Logged
For chapter 12-

How did you do it? Most people can't define love once, you defined it four times!! From a mother's/woman's perspective in an elaborate monologue, from a father's/ man's perspective in a terse fashion, from the detailed perspective of a lover when he knows his beloved is close, and then finally from the short but all encompassing perspective of a man confident in his and his beloved's love. Beautiful...

If anyone will ever ask me what's love i know where to direct them.

Once again Arnav fantasizes because he has questions. This time it's his parents he conjures not Khushi. It could be because he has learnt from his past experience that calling her will not give him answers or he needed to hear it from his parents that he's in love, or his restlessness which had been hounding him since he left his office till he returned makes him crave human company, who better than his parents?

He heard the answers of his heart through their mouths and then went to the one place he was completely confident she would be there- their haven, his office, her cubicle.

And the effect that her possible absence is painful to read. Arnav Singh Raizada brought down to his knees...

And then the restrained joy of seeing each other, the hesitant smiles, the mutual fear of rejection, the first leap of faith, the first urgent embrace after missing each other, first laugh of joy and the first twirl of love... all expressed so exquisitely that i could only gape.

When he sees her stripped off of everything that defines her and standing before him expectant but without hesitancy and indignity he offers her his love, though unverbalized. All in time... I fell in love with this story a little more with this update

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Posted: 02 April 2013 at 4:20am | IP Logged
Man!

This thread is alive!!! I had forgotten about the story and the ID [Thyme] completely! A friend notified me minutes ago that Vertigo is getting comments...so had to check it out immediately!

Rasgulla: Thanks for recommending this story to your readers... I appreciate a lot for that. Will respond to few of then things in your comment tonight/tomorrow. Thanks again!

Thanks for reading guys!
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Posted: 02 April 2013 at 8:54pm | IP Logged
For chapter 13-

So much happened...

Sigh! The first feel of love...

Arnav is some man! He has two women in his life who have as strong a faith in him as God.

And both Arnav and Khushi are fortunate to have siblings who care so much for them.

I absolutely loved the one week courtship that you showed.

Soft kisses, gentle caresses, comfortable embraces, giving and receiving gifts, getting angry, pacifying, understanding the other, spending time together, to pick souvenirs secretly... sigh... sigh... sigh...

I was smiling like an idiot when i read two things- 1. He immediately let her know he has broken up with Lavanya and he loves the one standing before him. 2. That Arnav is at Khushi's home to meet her family. Yeah!

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Posted: 02 April 2013 at 9:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Thyme

Man!

This thread is alive!!! I had forgotten about the story and the ID [Thyme] completely! A friend notified me minutes ago that Vertigo is getting comments...so had to check it out immediately!

Rasgulla: Thanks for recommending this story to your readers... I appreciate a lot for that. Will respond to few of then things in your comment tonight/tomorrow. Thanks again!

Thanks for reading guys!
Sookie
 
Please dont say thanks... And how can you forget a story as beautiful as this???
 
And after I finish commenting on each chapter I want to write you a personal comment. Can you please hold your reply till then?
 
I need another 12 hrs for that. It is 9 am in India right now


Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 02 April 2013 at 9:25pm

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Posted: 03 April 2013 at 7:24am | IP Logged
For the Epilogue/ chapter 14-

You scared me with Arnav's pain and confused me with Khushi's 'happiness and contentment'. The start of the update was so contradictory to the title. I was panicking and holding my breath.

He was being separated from her, she would get married and be somebody's wife leaving behind all the memories together.

Only when Khushi entered did i realize that you fooled me. But i was never happier on being fooled.

So surprising the world with their 'mismatched' alliance they have together lived 30 years of their life together, experiencing an understanding and quiet love others fail to comprehend.

And together they have created a daughter.

You juxtaposed Arnav as a father who couldn't let his little girl go with Shashi. He wants to know why should he let his little girl go to Arnav.

And the prelude to his desire to marry Arnav, his unhesitant Papa probably won him Khushi's hand more than his boardroom argument.

And he included her entire family instead of limiting their love to themselves, making it a family decision. I really liked this and the ease with which they slipped into a combined domesticity on the first day itself.

Her aunt's request surprised me. Probably it was her helplessness towards Khushi that had always channelised as taunts.

All is well that ends well.

Arnav and Khushi are happy with each other and I'm happy for them

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Posted: 03 April 2013 at 11:18am | IP Logged
I am glad I came across this awesome piece of work and thanks to whoever revived this. Better late than never...

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Posted: 03 April 2013 at 11:38am | IP Logged
My final comment to this story.

I've never done this before for a completed story, that is to review each chapter individually. But for Vertigo i absolutely had to. It's easily amongst the top 3 stories that I've read on IF on Arnav and Khushi.

The story is really very simple but the treatment is poetic. Yes, that is what this story is. Poetry masked as prose. Each update had so many sentences that would leave me speechless with the sheer beauty of your narration. You described emotions and the complexities created by it really well.

I had just chanced upon this story and thank God i did.

Thankfully it is a completed story. Between two of your updates you had taken a couple of months to update. Good i wasn't reading it then. I would have died of impatience.

My sources tell me that you have three more stories going, 35 MM, the Noob and the Thoughtful and Waves and Particles. But you've not updated those in a long time. Please continue those stories. I would love to read more of your work.

Thank you for sharing such a wonderful story with us

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 15 August 2013 at 4:02am

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Posted: 04 April 2013 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
I would easily throw Nicholas Sparks book, if I ever get a chance to pick your writing over his. I am in awe with the story, and bashing myself for missing out on this amazing story. A year later, this story was recommended to me (Rasgulla_sp), and I wouldn't mind reading it all over again. 

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