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ArHi SS: Vertigo - Completed [Sequel link on Page 1] (Page 73)

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Posted: 30 March 2013 at 1:35pm | IP Logged
I just love this story this is the third time I am reading it

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Posted: 30 March 2013 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
For chapter 7-

How many times in our society do we see that in order to please the Creator we mercilessly butcher the sentiments of His creation?

Inspite of having her heart wounded repeatedly by her only dear ones she still believes in God because with Him it's not a give and take business, it's a continuous relation that every bad can be borne with His support and there is good always lying in wait. All you need to do is trust Him.

Arnav has lost that trust in God but unlike her aunt he has not lost his heart. He sees her in pain and proceeds to discuss his beliefs though he has not made even his sister privy to that.

I loved the exchange in which Anjali expresses pleasure at meeting Lavanya, his girlfriend, Arnav looks at Khushi to check her expression, she does a good job of keeping her smile in place but can't keep the disappointment from her eyes, he makes a note of that and she knows he has noticed that. That is how much they are tuned to each other.

With his parting words she realizes that behind the strong trousers and blazer appearance there is a troubled person and since he won't pray for himself, she does. Beautiful :)

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 31 March 2013 at 12:19am

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Posted: 30 March 2013 at 2:31pm | IP Logged
For chapter 8-

A case of mistaken identity.
This chapter reminded me of a scene in the movie called Socha Na Tha. I like that movie but i particularly love that scene. Ayesha Jhulka who plays Abhay Deol's bhabhi is trying her best to convince their family to accept his Christian girlfriend. She's talking to him about all her struggles for him and he's busy watching a video of and talking about Ayesha Takia. I loved it there i loved it here.

A case of mistaken identity.
But i really want to ask Anjali where did she notice the comfort and the spark she was talking about between Lavanya and him??
At least she comprehends his contentment while he's talking of his conversation about God with Khushi, of his perception of her varied struggles, of how she intrigues him, of what he feels for her.

Is it love??

For Khushi?

And Anjali rightly reminds him he's in a relationship with La.

Now that he's a little closer to what he feels for her i wonder where will this head.

PS- I loved his depth of attachment for his sister and his concern for her well being

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 31 March 2013 at 12:20am

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Posted: 30 March 2013 at 2:37pm | IP Logged

awsum ss

loved it

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Posted: 30 March 2013 at 3:26pm | IP Logged
Wow... This is really amazing...

 I want to say something more.. but don't have enough time now...'ll comment tmrw...


Edited by arshy4ever - 30 March 2013 at 3:27pm

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Posted: 30 March 2013 at 3:54pm | IP Logged
So glad that Rasgulla recommended this story. It's so beautiful and well written. Loved reading each chapter. Your take on it was very unique, different from the usual stories ive read here.
Hoping to read more of your work.
God bless

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