Jeene ke ishare mil gaye - SS - Page 16

I wish that it was longer but anyway it was something that. We all needed...cont soon plz

thanks a ton for updating!!

NIce small part.. Waiting for a huge update... thanks for the PM waiting for more...

Hey! Please PM me too! 

nice ss

well written

cont soon

do pm me

nyc bt a short 1 plzz pm me d next!! :D

It was short and sweet. Really liked the VirMan scene and poor Virat.🥺 When he brought up the good bye note, for a moment I was excited but looks like you are not ready reveal it yet. Hope to read the next part soon

i loved it!!

It was lovely! Manvi thinking it was virat at the door haha hints for jeevika.. Virat needs to expresses his feeling as soon as possible:) it would be so sweet :) thanks for the PM looking forward to the next :) thank you!!

Thanks for pm!!
Really enjoyed the VirMan part!!
I wish we had more scenes on tv too!
But your ff made me miss them a little less. 😊
Update soon!!