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PART 16 on PAGE 63

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kashishk IF-Sizzlerz

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PART 17 on PAGE 63

Hey guys thanks a lot to everyone who voted for me :D
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Maan held her safely and placed an arm around Geet. Before, disappearing, they turned back and waved back at them, one last time before leaving.

Only God knew, if Maan and Geet's love was strong enough to make the storm feel like a soft breeze or was so weak to make their lives crumble down.

"Mom, when will you come to meet us?" Geet asked, through the phone.

Padma chuckled and said "it had been hardly three weeks that you left"

"I know but I miss you, not only me but Geeta and Maan too" Geet replied with a pout.

"we'll come soon Geet. In fact we'll try to come today as it's a really special day" Padma said with a smile, even they were missing their little family back in Mumbai.

Geet got happy hearing this, she talked a bit more to her parents and hung up the phone. "what is princess doing?" Maan asked, hugging her from behind.

Geet held his hand and made him sit on the couch beside her. Placing her head on his shoulder, she said "I talked to mom and then I was just thinking how beautiful our life is". She played with his buttons.

"that is absolutely true." He said, pulling her in closer hug.

"you are earlier today" she said in an affirmative tone, looking in his eyes affectionaly. She places her arms around his neck.

"yeah, I was missing you and Geeta" he said placing a kiss on her head.

Geet sensed something was disturbing him so she asked looking into his eyes "You seem a bit disturbed, what is the problem?" She said kissing on his cheek in order to calm him.

"nothing Geet" he said in a low voice.

Placing her hand on his cheek, she said "you know you can't lie to me. Even if your lips aren't saying anything, your eyes speak the truth then why do you try to lie"

Maan hugged her tightly "Geet, I am just feeling scared. I love you and Geeta too much, I can't bear to loose you" he said, with his tears coming out. He let out all his fear in front of her.

For sure, he was feeling really insecure. "we will never be separated even when we die, our love is eternal" she said, hugging him back tightly and placing a kiss on his forehead as in to assure him.

Moving apart, she wiped his tears "I don't like at all when your tears come out from your eyes but I love you smile, I love the way your dimples show up" she said with smile, trying to cheer him up. She traced from his forehead to his chin.

Maan smiled hearing all that she was saying and her gestured. She knew very well, how to make him feel good. Once again, he hugged her back feeling much satisfied and light.

For sure, he was feeling better yet there was a nagging feeling in the back of his head but the immense trust he had on their love made him shrug of this feeling.

Having his wife in his arms, made him feel so good and heavenly. Just his mere presence near him, left him overwhelmed. The effect she had on him was so beautiful and he completely loved it.

"I love you" Maan whispered, lost in the moment.

"I love you too" Geet replied back.

Not able to control himself, Maan captured her lips in his. The kiss was full of passion, love and purity. Between the kiss, they moaned and ruffled each other's hairs. The exploration of each other's mouth was a speechless feeling. They didn't feel like breaking apart but due to the lack of oxygen they had to.

Maan opened his eyes and found Geet laying on him as he himself made sure not to be on top of her considering that she was pregnant so he had to take care of everything.

For a moment, he kept admiring her. Her eyes were closed and a beautiful blush was there on her cheeks. She was still breathing hard and her lips were slightly parched that he felt like entering his tongue again in her mouth through her lips but he controlled himself.

"I think we should continue this in the room as Geeta would be up anytime from her nap" Maan whispered in her ear.

Geet was amazed to see, still so much lost in the moment, he didn't forget about Geeta. She felt touched to know how much she and Geeta meant to him. All that he wanted was to keep Geet and Geeta safe and happy.

"only if you pick me up" she said, placing her head on his chest.

"As my princess command" as he said that, Geet stood up and then Maan picked her up in his arms.

Taking her in their love making room, he closed the door. He placed her on the bed and started kissing her everywhere. Nevertheless, while making love, he loved kissing and sucking her throat as it turned him wild. He felt that it was one of the most sensuous part of her body.

They completely freed each other from clothes. They were so much involved in each other to notice the surroundings yet if it had something regarding to their babies, they would come out of this moment, instantly.

He made slow love to her as he didn't want to hurt her in anyway. Their slow love making was full of caresses, kisses, love bites and what not.

After a while, they were laying in each other's arms, feeling blissful. "Maan" she called him, with her head still placed on his bare chest.

"hmm" he replied with his eyes closed and nuzzling in the nap of her neck.

"Geeta would be up any moment but I am feeling too tired to go and take a shower. Can you please take a shower and look after her. I'll join you in a while." Geet said, in a tired tone.

"Baby are you alright? do you want me to call the doctor?" Maan asked worriedly. His eyes were wide opened now. He touched her forehead and the placed his hand on her cheel.

She held his hand. "I am fine Maan, just feeling a bit sore. There is no need to call the doctor." she said with a tired smile.

"are you sure?" he asked, caressing her hairs.

"yes, I am sure" she said, placing a kiss on his chest.

"ok, if you say so" he said sweetly. He softly placed her head on the pillow and kissed her lips.

Taking a shower, he came out and found Geet still in the bed. "I think the pregnancy and the love making are making her tired a lot" he thought to himself " I should confirm once again to her doctor if we could proceed our love making" he concluded on this point.

He left the room, closing the door. The first think he did was to check on Geeta, she was waken up but playing with her toys calmly. He smiled at her and thought to call the doctor before joining Geeta.

"Hello, Dr Kirtika. It's Maan Mallik" Maan said, once the phone was picked up.

"Hello Mr Mallik, How are you?" Kirtika asked, sitting down on the chair in her cabin.

"I am fine Dr Kirtika but Geet isn't. She is feeling really sore after making love so I wanted to ask if we should stop making love?" he asked her with so much concern in his voice.

"Mr Mallik, it tends to happen and there is nothing to worry about but yes keep the frequency low" she told him not to make love a lot as then it could create a bit of complication.

"ok Dr" Maan replied back, feeling relieved.

Once he was done with the call, he joined Geeta and after a while Geet too joined them. As he saw her, he held her hand and asked anxiously "are you feeling ok now?". True the doctor said, it was normal, still he was worried for her.

"I am perfectly alright" she said, while sitting next to him and placing her head on his shoulder "I love being so close to you" she said hoarsely that only he could hear.

"same here baby" He replied back, looking at her.

"Papa, see" she said pointing at the toy house, where there were few dolls males and females. "this is Nanu, nani" she said pointing toward a couple, and she continued "this is Mama, papa and this is me, Geeta" she finished, clapping her hands excitingly.

Maan and Geet smiled, looking at her. She was so cute. Maan moved closer to her and added another little doll "and this your going to be brother or sister"

Geeta smiled hearing this. "wow such a nice family" came a voice from behind.

All the three of them, turned and looked toward the door, where they found all their friends and their babies. Maan stood up, taking Geeta in his arms and helping Geet to stand up "wow guys it's so good to see you all here"

Maan and Geet hugged them and greeted their friends babies with kisses. Atul and Anjali had a beautiful, Arun, of two years and half. Abhimanyu and Nikita's son, Vivan, was also two and half years old. Atul and Anjali had a sweet girl, Ananya, of one years and half. Their little angel met her little friends happily.

Their friends kissed Geeta happily. Picking her up, Muskaan asked "how is the little princess?"

"I am fine bua, how ale (are) you?" Geeta said with a smile her hands encircled around Muskaan's neck.

"I am also fine" Muskaan replied with a smile. That day, they hadn't just come to meet Mallik family but for a special purpose.

All the adults sat down, meanwhile the kids were on the floor playing with the toys. "Have you started the preparations?" Abhimanyu asked, sipping his juice

"Well I was waiting for you but I have arranged all the stuff, only decoration is left" Maan replied with grin.

"ok cool, we would be done with the preparations by midnight. All the while, Geeta will have to stay away, with Geet and the kids" Nikita concluded.

"no problem I'll manage them" Geet agreed with their planning

"And we know even if there is no problem Maan will check upon you every ten minutes" Rahul said cheekily, with a chuckle.

"exactly, he is complete lover boy" Anjali said, pulling Maan's cheek.

"now don't tell us to be like Maan" Atul added with a smile.

"oh well, we are happy with what we have" Anjali replied with a smile.

After a while, they had dinner and soon enough Padma and Shashank joined them. All of them rushed to welcome them. "mom, dad we are glad to see you here" Maan replied while hugging them, followed by Geet.

"how couldn't we come after all it's a special day" Shashank said with a smile, while picking Geeta and kissing her, followed by Padma. They introduced them to their friends.

"Mama, papa, from the molning (morning) you ale (are) saying it's a special day, why is it a special day?" Geeta asked, with a frown and while wrinkling her nose. She was looking adorable.

"well princess you'll know on the right time" Maan replied, his baby with a wink.

Geeta pouted but then she ignored their talks as she wasn't old enough to realize what actually was going on.

"come on kids, let's go in my room" Geet called them and all of the kids went with her, as well as Maan.

Looking at Maan, all of them started laughing. Once Geet reached in the room, Maan helped her sitting on the bed comfortably and placed all the needed stuff on the bedside table.

"kids don't annoy Geet, I'll come to check" Maan told the babies and left the room but not before giving a big smile and blowing a kiss in the air to Geet.

"love you" he mouthed.

"l love you too" she mouthed back with a smile. Maan left the room happily.


Hey guys,
Here is the next part, I hope you will like that :)
Thanks everyone for your comments and likes, please keep doing both these things as it encourages me writing further.
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A very very happy birthday for everyone who is born in May :D
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Edited by kashishk - 06 May 2012 at 3:05am

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Posted: 06 May 2012 at 3:07am | IP Logged
awesome parT!!!!!

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Posted: 06 May 2012 at 3:14am | IP Logged
awesome updae 

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Posted: 06 May 2012 at 3:26am | IP Logged
Loved the update..
Hw much maan cares...his love s increasing day by day..
wat function?

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Posted: 06 May 2012 at 3:52am | IP Logged
lovely part..

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nice part...happy family...

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