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This fanfic was originally not mine..lekin the writer stopped writing it..and many of us liked it so I decided to continue the fanfic from where the other writer had left off...
The following parts are those that were written by the other writer..
ANGAD: HE BELONGS TO ONE OF THE RICHEST FAMILIES OF INIDIA A SPOILT BRAT WHO DOES NOT BELIEVE IN LOVE..BUT JUST KNOWS TO USE THEM AND HAD MANY GFS IN SCOOL
KRIPA: SHE TOO BELONGS TO A RICH FAMILY SHE IS SWEET DOESNT TALK MUCH AND IS OF THE SHY TYPES
JOSH: HE IS FRM USA BUT HAS COME TO INDIA FOR HIS STUDIES AS HIS FATHER WAS KEEN TO LET HIM STUDY IN INDIA..
MISHTI: STAYS IN A HOSTEL ORIGINALLY SHE IS FRM DELHI...
PRITHVI: HE IS FRM MUMBAI A LOCALITE BELONGS TO A RICH FAMILY
AALIYAH: SHE BELONGS TO A MIDDLE CLASS FAMILY HER PARENTS R DIVORCED AND SHE STAYS WID HER DAD WHO DOESNT HAVE TIME FOR HER...
SHABBIR: HES A VERY SWEET KINDA GUY, A STUDIOUS GUY BUT LOOKS FORWARD TO ENJOY HIS COLLEGE LIFE....
its the first day of college, a new batch of students will be entering college today.... there is excitement on the campus the campus is full wid students all around( seniors) who all r waiting for the freshers...
near the gate itself the most famous group of the college is sitting so tht they can get hands on the freshers first.. kartik,anita,manek,harshini r all seated near the gate...
karthik: last year hum logo ne kitna mazaa kiya tha ragging karke.. sab logo ki bolti hi bandh ho gayi thi..
harshini: lekin phir principal ne hume data bhi tha..
manek: usme kaunsi naye baat hain hume toh woh roz data hai..
anita: aur kar bhi kya sakta hai uski himmat nahi hai ki hume college se nikal de...
harshini: pata nahi lekin mujhe darr lag raha hai..
karthik: btw this year mera bhai bhi college join karne walla hain...
anita: kaun angad?
karthik: yes anita who els ek hi toh bhai hai...
manek: lekin phir woh tumhare saath college nahi aaya?? tum log saath main bhi toh aa sakte the?
karthik: ha aa sakte the lekin woh tabhi uthna bhi toh chahiye tha na,, bohut alsi hai mera bhai raat ko jaagta hain aur din mai sota hai..
harshini: phir woh aaj 1st day par college ayega ki nahi?
karthik: yes he will come but not this early usko aate aate der ho jayegi..
anita: mazaa ayega usse rag karne mai..
manek: yes obviously..
karthik: nahi nahi usse rag mat karna warna woh idhar ki WWE khelne lagega he will just start a fight.. he is very shorttempered.. and mera bhai hai toh hum uska ragging nahi karenge..
anita : ok...
manek: chalo dekhte hain abhi kaun aata hain...
( as they r waiting for all freshers to enter a white BMW comes and stands near the door, frm it a girl wearing a white salwar suit gets down..she had worn long earings and she had long beautiful hair..)
a white BMW stops in front of the college gate.. and a girl dressed in white salwar kameez gets down of the car.. she gets down and somethings rong wid her sandal so she bens down her face is covered wid her hair karthik and manek r not able to see her face.. but soon she fixes her sandal.. whn she starts walking towards the gate karthik and manek r just starring at her she has long hair.. she loooks like an angel frm heaven she just looks beauty at its best...
karthik: (is very stunned but still goes near her and says)HI!! whts ur name?
kripa : ( as if not hearing him just walks)
(karthik goes back to her and says )
karthik: excuse me cant u answer me whts ur name? tht is wht i asked..
kripa: my name is kripa...
karthik: kripa nice name btw my name is karthik and
karthik and kripa suit rite?
kripa : will u plz shutup and go
manek: hey wht the hell do u think of urself we r ur seniors and whteve we say u have to do tht... its ur first day...
(now kripa is scared as she is a very sweet girl and very shy too)
manek: u have to kiss karthik in front of the whole college.. so do it fast we dont have time..
kripa: do u even know wht ur talking? i cant do this it not possible...
manek : yes u have to do this its ur punishment for not listening to him...
(meanwhile harshini is jealous of kripa as she has to kiss karthik and she likes karthik)
kripa :(karthik goes near her) kripa is about to kiss and her cell phone rings...
kripa: excuse me mr.karthik i need to attend this call...
( its her brother whos on the phone bobby kripa tells him the whole scene and he tells her tht hes coming to college to see those guys)
( in no time he comes der wid his whole group ina jeep)
bobby: whose karthik here?
they both see each oda here and start laughing and hug each oda..)
bobby: hey dude wassup? how u doing these days?
(kripa is shocked and is glazing at her brother)
karthik: i'm gd but how come ur here?
bobby: (he looks at kripa and tells him tht)hey dude whom u were ragging is my sis kripa and dont u dare even do anything to her...
karthik: oh is it? i didnt know yaa soriee kripa
kripa: its ok
(and thn bobby goes away and so does kripa in her classroom)
( gd 2 see kripa saved by her brother)
btw bobby is her elder brother and is very possesive abt her..he knows karthik as their moms r gd frends but kripa doesnt know him coz she used to stay in hostel..
(kripa goes to her class and bobby get off in his jeep wid his frends and karthik and manek go to the cafe..)
karthik: hey manek bobby ki sis kripa hai mujhe yeh bilkul bhi nahi malum tha..
manek: pata hota toh kya karta?????
karthik: pata hota toh kabka usse kiss kar chuka hota... usse nahi bolta mujhe kiss karne ko..
manek: mujhe nahi lagta ki kripa itni bold types ki hai ki tumhe kiss bhi karne deti..
manek: btw tumhara bhai bhi tak nahi aaya ab toh college bhi start hone aayi..
karthik: woh woh toh soya hoga abhi tak
manek: oh thik hai
karthik: chalo hum aaj class attend karte hain
(they both go to the their classroom unka mood nahi hai ab ragging karne ka chalo aacha hua ki baki sab toh bach gaye)
this part is little short as today is diwali so i have lots of work to do.. sorieee
(in the classroom kripa,josh,prithiv,mishty,aliya and shabeer r sitting wid oda classmates...)
professor: hello students its ur first day so i guess no1 will be knowing eachoda..
students: yes sir
professor: so i wud like all of u'll to stand up 1 by 1 and introduce urself..
( some1 knocks the door its angad he enters in and all girls look at him and start blushing...
he gives all girls a hard stare.. and sits on the last bench...
kripa: heloo sir i'm kripa sharma and i'm a student of manekji cooper scool
mishty: gd morning sir i'm mishty bose and i'm frm modern scool delhi
aliya: heloo i'm aliya and i'm frm zaviers scool mumbai
josh: hi sir (doest say heloo so the sir is shocked) i'm josh asher frm USA
professor: very gd but y have u come to india for studies?
josh: actually sir i dad was keen for me studying where he had studied...
professor: thts reali nice..
shabeer:hello sir i', shabeer mhta frm bombay scottish..mumbai
prithvi: gd morning sir i'm prithvi frm jamnabai..
angad: hi sir..i'm angad khanna frm utpal sanghvi scool
( and all others also give the introduction)
professor: since its the 1st day i wudnt teach anything so u guy can interact and know each oda,...
kripa: hi mishty ... nice name i reali like ur name.. u must be a bengali..
mishty: yes i'm bengali and thanx
kripa: where do u stay in mumbai?
mishty : i stay in the hostel next to our college..
kripa: uhun thts nice
aliya: hey can i join u'll ??
kripa and mishty: y not plz
aliya : hi i'm aliya...
kripa: hi how u doing?
aliya : gd
( the girls have interacted wid each oda but the guys on the oda hand r sitting wid their mobiles and playing games on it)
josh: hi angad how u doin?
angad: aww i'm gd.... soo.. ur frm USA?
josh: ya ur rite
angad : where in USA ??????
( ANGAD ASKED THIS AND HE GOT A CALL)
angad: hi sweetheart where r u?
( angad tells josh he'll be back )
prithvi: if i'm not rong tths angad i know him i think
josh: yes he is angad how do u know him..
prithvi: aww through some frends but we havent talked yet..
josh : oh thts cool hey shabeer y dont u join us?
shabeer: yah sure...
( they get along well together on 1 hand the girls r talking and on the oda these guys)
kripa: hey prithvi r u kailash unckles son?
prithvi: yes... soriee but i didnt recognize u
kripa: aww thts fine i'm suryabhans daughter...and mom in the morning told me tht kailash unckles son has also taken admission in my college...
prithvi: hey i'm soriee i didnt recognize u first...
kripa: its ok prithvi...
prithvi:hey meet my frends josh, shabeer...
kripa : hi josh and shabeer.. meet them too they r mishty and aliya..
angad: hey... i'm soriee i got a call...anyways josh i dont know anybody here cud u plz introduce..
josh: yah sure ( and he introduces all of them..)
prithvi: hey guys since we r frends now i think i can invite u'll now..
prithvi: to my house today is my b'day.....
aliya: omg is it? happy b'day...
( and all decide to go to his place in the evening for the party..)
(IN THE EVENING AT PRITHVI'S PLACE....)
INTRODUCTION OF CHARACTERS PRESENT AT THE PARTY
DAMINI MEHRA: PRITHVI'S MOM
KAILASH MEHRA: PRITHVI'S DAD
NAINA KHANNA : ANGAD'S MOM AND DAMINI'S FREND....
DILIP KHANNA: ANGADS DAD AND KAILASH'S BUSINESS PARTNER..
SURYABHAAN SHARMA: KRIPA'S DAD AND ANOTHER PARTNER OF KAILASH AND DILIP AND ALL THREE OF THEM R CHILHOOD FRENDS...
GAYATRI SHARMA: KRIPA'S MOM...
BOBBY: KRIPA'S BROTHER...
SIMONE: PRITHVI'S SISTER..
( ALL THESE PPL R PRESENT AT THE PARTY AND ALSO PRITHVI'S FRENDS LIKE JOSH, ANGAD, SHABEER, ALIYA, MISHTY, KRIPA R ALSO PRESENT..)
All the parts after this will be my parts...
Please leave comments, suggestions, and complaints
I will try to continue this fanfic as soon as possible, as I have chosen to write this fanfic since many of u want someone to continue it..so I am here for u..
I also have 4 other fanfics...
-Kaisa yeh Pyar hai fanfic
-Love at many Sights
So I will try my best to continue often..
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