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Posted: 21 January 2007 at 4:43pm | IP Logged
Didi whose next ...can I write...

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Posted: 21 January 2007 at 7:04pm | IP Logged
thank you so much for the lovely comments...
glad you all like it...

nita, this is just a little idea that is spinning in my head... but they wont break apart....just a new twist....

sakhi..... so the dish fill your stomach...hahaha.... thanks yaar.....

pari, thanks for joining us.... and good luck my dear... if I can help you just pm me....

raksha.... I have learned form the best Hug ..... thank you.....
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Posted: 21 January 2007 at 7:46pm | IP Logged
i didnt know the episode was posted today. so sorry my comments a little late. Embarrassed
Shali, that was a really superb episode. It was so detailed. It was as if i was watching this on SP! I cant descibe how amazing that episode was Smile ....it was truly wonderful. Poor nahar and saloni are drifting apart everwhere.... even in the show. I really really hope they dont drift in this fanfic. Cry this fanfic is wayyy to good. Anyways, really great episode. looking forward to reading more episodes. Big smile
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Posted: 22 January 2007 at 12:34pm | IP Logged

uhm...uhm.....

arent you doing the next epi, dear....

so no reading for you.... just writing....

thank you for your lovely comment... this is the reason for us to continue....



Edited by shali - 22 January 2007 at 12:35pm
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Posted: 22 January 2007 at 3:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shali

uhm...uhm.....

arent you doing the next epi, dear....

so no reading for you.... just writing....

thank you for your lovely comment... this is the reason for us to continue....

who me? hahah i told rakshadi this before, but i only write for my school news paper.Big smile.....i dont think i will be writing fanfics...at least for a while. i may join later. but trust me...reading the episodes by you, nita, sakhi, rakshadi, and desi chic (sorry if i forgot anyoneErmm) is seriously a reward. i love all of your episodes. i enjoy reading all these episodes as much as i love to dance.( and trust me...i live for dancingTongue. Garba  Raas Bhangra,.... anything!)Smile



Edited by punjabi_kuri36 - 22 January 2007 at 4:08pm
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Posted: 22 January 2007 at 5:47pm | IP Logged
oke who is doing the next epi.....
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Posted: 22 January 2007 at 5:52pm | IP Logged
probrbly pari. she wanted to write but now i can't find her. i will give her one more day to see if she responds.
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I am so sorry for the delay. India-Forums was not letting me log on. The site kept notifying to reset my cookies. I tried that many times but it did not work. So today after college I drove to the library to post the next episode. Sorry for the delay. I had it typed for days. I appologize if there are any errors or if you do not like it. It is my first time writing for this fan -fiction. Tell me how it is. Your comments give me satisfaction of my writing.

Recap: Ever since the children Nahar and Saloni have not been having time for each other

The next day....

Saloni and Nahar are sleeping.

Saloni wakes up

Suddenly she notices the time

Saloni looks at the clock and noticies "8:00am"

Saloni: aaj bahut der hogai. 8 baj gaye.

Saloni is about to get up from the bed and Nahar holds her hand.

Saloni turns to Nahar

Saloni: aap uth gaye?

Nahar puts his hand on her lips

He kisses her neck.

Saloni: Nahar bahut der hogayee hai.

Nahar: shhhh

He does not allow her to finish talking and kisses her.

Nahar: I have missed you

She hugs him

Saloni: We have not been able to spend time with each other.

Nahar and Saloni are about to kiss when... when Shruthi starts to cry

Saloni runs to attend the kid

Nahar thinks: I will surprise her for dinner

The whole day goes by

All day Saloni and Nahar think about each other

Its the evening

Nahar calls home

Saloni picks up

Saloni: Hello

Nahar: hi darling.

Saloni: Hi Jaan

Nahar: kya kar rahi ho?

Saloni: Kuch nahi abhi Bache soh gaye

Nahar: Perfect!

Saloni: Kyu

Nahar: hum bahar ja rahe ho. tum jaldi se tayaar hojao

Saloni: teek hai pur bache ko kaun sambhalenge?

Nahar: Maine tara bhabhie se subhe hi baat kar li thi

Saloni: realli? your such a sweetheart

Nahar: mein gadi bej raha hoon

Saloni: mein intezaar karoongi

Saloni decided to get ready. She wears a light blue sari and beautiful silver jewlery

She looks at the mirror and fills her maang with sindoor.

Saloni hears a honk through the window.

She runs down the stairs.

She says goodbye to everyone and leaves

Saloni gets in the car and the driver brings her to a beautiful restaurant.

Saloni enters and a young woman takes her to the back of the restaurant

It is a bit dark and faded but not all dark. there are little lights surrounding the room. Saloni stands in the room

Suddenly someone covers her eyes.

Saloni: Nahar? Tum?

The person takes their hands off of Saloni's face

It is Nahar!

Nahar: Pichle maine hum ek doosre se bahut door hogaye

Nahar: per aaj hum phir se paas ajayenge

The song agar tum miljao zamana chod denge hum

Nahar goes down on one knee

Nahar: May I have this dance

Saloni: It would be my pleasure

Saloni and Nahar slow dance

They look into each other's eyes

Nahar: kash yeh waqt yahee thamjaye

After ahwhile Saloni and Nahar eat a special candle light dinner

Nahar and Saloni walk outside

Suddenly Saloni and Nahar hear some loud popping loises

Saloni looks up

She sees so many fireworks

Then she sees some letters

I

L

O

V

E

Y

O

U

S

A

L

O

N

I

--- Nahar

Saloni Finishes reading " I Love You Saloni
----Nahar

Saloni is soo happy. Tears of happines come in her eyes

Nahar: yeh kya maine yeh sub isliye kiya kyun ki meh tumhare chere pe ek muskaan dekhna chahta tha per tum tho rone lagi

Nahar wipes her tears

Nahar: ub chalo zara muskuralo

Saloni smiles and hugs Nahar

Saloni: I Love you Nahar

Nahar: I love you too

---the next writer will continue

I hope you guys enjoyed it.



Edited by Kumud_Kshitij - 24 January 2007 at 6:56pm

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