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..... thank you.....
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....it was truly wonderful. Poor nahar and saloni are drifting apart everwhere.... even in the show. I really really hope they dont drift in this fanfic. 
this fanfic is wayyy to good. Anyways, really great episode. looking forward to reading more episodes. 
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uhm...uhm.....
arent you doing the next epi, dear....
so no reading for you.... just writing....thank you for your lovely comment... this is the reason for us to continue....
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uhm...uhm.....
arent you doing the next epi, dear....
so no reading for you.... just writing....thank you for your lovely comment... this is the reason for us to continue....
who me? hahah i told rakshadi this before, but i only write for my school news paper......i dont think i will be writing fanfics...at least for a while. i may join later. but trust me...reading the episodes by you, nita, sakhi, rakshadi, and desi chic (sorry if i forgot anyone
) is seriously a reward. i love all of your episodes. i enjoy reading all these episodes as much as i love to dance.( and trust me...i live for dancing
. Garba Raas Bhangra,.... anything!)
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I am so sorry for the delay. India-Forums was not letting me log on. The site kept notifying to reset my cookies. I tried that many times but it did not work. So today after college I drove to the library to post the next episode. Sorry for the delay. I had it typed for days. I appologize if there are any errors or if you do not like it. It is my first time writing for this fan -fiction. Tell me how it is. Your comments give me satisfaction of my writing.
Recap: Ever since the children Nahar and Saloni have not been having time for each other
The next day....
Saloni and Nahar are sleeping.
Saloni wakes up
Suddenly she notices the time
Saloni looks at the clock and noticies "8:00am"
Saloni: aaj bahut der hogai. 8 baj gaye.
Saloni is about to get up from the bed and Nahar holds her hand.
Saloni turns to Nahar
Saloni: aap uth gaye?
Nahar puts his hand on her lips
He kisses her neck.
Saloni: Nahar bahut der hogayee hai.
Nahar: shhhh
He does not allow her to finish talking and kisses her.
Nahar: I have missed you
She hugs him
Saloni: We have not been able to spend time with each other.
Nahar and Saloni are about to kiss when... when Shruthi starts to cry
Saloni runs to attend the kid
Nahar thinks: I will surprise her for dinner
The whole day goes by
All day Saloni and Nahar think about each other
Its the evening
Nahar calls home
Saloni picks up
Saloni: Hello
Nahar: hi darling.
Saloni: Hi Jaan
Nahar: kya kar rahi ho?
Saloni: Kuch nahi abhi Bache soh gaye
Nahar: Perfect!
Saloni: Kyu
Nahar: hum bahar ja rahe ho. tum jaldi se tayaar hojao
Saloni: teek hai pur bache ko kaun sambhalenge?
Nahar: Maine tara bhabhie se subhe hi baat kar li thi
Saloni: realli? your such a sweetheart
Nahar: mein gadi bej raha hoon
Saloni: mein intezaar karoongi
Saloni decided to get ready. She wears a light blue sari and beautiful silver jewlery
She looks at the mirror and fills her maang with sindoor.
Saloni hears a honk through the window.
She runs down the stairs.
She says goodbye to everyone and leaves
Saloni gets in the car and the driver brings her to a beautiful restaurant.
Saloni enters and a young woman takes her to the back of the restaurant
It is a bit dark and faded but not all dark. there are little lights surrounding the room. Saloni stands in the room
Suddenly someone covers her eyes.
Saloni: Nahar? Tum?
The person takes their hands off of Saloni's face
It is Nahar!
Nahar: Pichle maine hum ek doosre se bahut door hogaye
Nahar: per aaj hum phir se paas ajayenge
The song agar tum miljao zamana chod denge hum
Nahar goes down on one knee
Nahar: May I have this dance
Saloni: It would be my pleasure
Saloni and Nahar slow dance
They look into each other's eyes
Nahar: kash yeh waqt yahee thamjaye
After ahwhile Saloni and Nahar eat a special candle light dinner
Nahar and Saloni walk outside
Suddenly Saloni and Nahar hear some loud popping loises
Saloni looks up
She sees so many fireworks
Then she sees some letters
I
L
O
V
E
Y
O
U
S
A
L
O
N
I
--- Nahar
Saloni Finishes reading " I Love You Saloni
----Nahar
Saloni is soo happy. Tears of happines come in her eyes
Nahar: yeh kya maine yeh sub isliye kiya kyun ki meh tumhare chere pe ek muskaan dekhna chahta tha per tum tho rone lagi
Nahar wipes her tears
Nahar: ub chalo zara muskuralo
Saloni smiles and hugs Nahar
Saloni: I Love you Nahar
Nahar: I love you too
---the next writer will continue
I hope you guys enjoyed it.
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