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Posted: 26 April 2006 at 7:38pm | IP Logged
NOOO!!!! lol. saloni has left the house. excellent epi ramas. ye nahar bhi na! sach mein bada bewakoof hai! whose next? good job ramas, kya twist lagaya hai LOL
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Posted: 26 April 2006 at 8:22pm | IP Logged
Great job!!!Can't wait for the next one
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Posted: 26 April 2006 at 9:59pm | IP Logged

thanks deepa . Nitu. What a complement. twist me hi maza hai SmileTongueSmile

desi chic we are looking forward to your episode tomorrow. Can't wait.



Edited by ramas - 26 April 2006 at 10:22pm
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Posted: 27 April 2006 at 4:41am | IP Logged
Thanks indiandoll
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Posted: 27 April 2006 at 7:11pm | IP Logged

wow, u guys are gonna be like, "how did u write so much!" lol I don't know, I just kinda blabbed. hope u like it and I'm sorry for the hindi and long paragraphs, if u need help with the hindi please let me know....

recap: saloni has left the house along with some letters for neel, nahar and others to explain her reasoning. nahar is left devastated.

everyone at home is extremely upset. nahar just can't stop crying and he is being comforted by bhabho. brijesh, "ab kya karen?". tara, "neel aur saloni ke ghar walon ko phone kar ke batana hoga". aditi, "lekin hume saloni bhabhisa ko dhoondne ki koshish karni chahiye na. najane is haalat mein kahan gayi hongi aur waise bhi woh kafi upset thi". tara nods, "par saloni ne dhoondne se mana kiya hain". brijesh, "lekin hum aise haat pe haat baandhe bhi nahin beth sakte na. saloni pregnant hai, agar kuch hogaya to..". at this nahar gets up, "kuch nahin hoga meri saloni ko...ye sab meri wajayse hua hai. mein hi isse ab teek karoonga. mein saloni ko dhoond kar lata hoon." and nahar leaves instantly in a rush with brijesh not far behind...

tara calls up saloni's parent's place and tells the whole ordeal. ambika is histarical after they have put the receiver down. ambika, "najane meri bachi kis haalat mein hogi. hey bhagwaan, uska aur ukay hone wale bachey ka khayal rakhna..". narpat tries to calm her, "ambika, saloni sayaani bachi hai, woh zaroor apna aur bachay ka khayal rakhay gi". narpat, "samar, chalo, hum bhi brijesh aur nahar ki madat karte hain. akhir saloni humari apni hai." they leave and kaveri is standing around pretending to console ambika...

meanwhile saloni is walking the streets, she doesn't really know where she is going but a taxi wala stops for her. taxi dude, "madam, mein aapko kahin chod sakte hoon". saloni, looks over in a daze, "teek hai". saloni steps in and he asks where she wants to go. saloni, "jahan taqdeer lejaaye...mujhe sheher ke bahar le jao". and he drives her out of town. while nahar and brij have split up looking for her. brij went to the police station and filed a complaint and nahar is driving the streets and it is getting dark. background music, "tu jahan, mein wahan, sung sung yoon chaloon tere, jaise tera aasmaan.." (from salaam namaste...beautiful song). nahar is driving, crying, reminicing about the moments he spent with saloni, both good and bad...saloni is sitting in the taxi thinking, flashbacks with sweet and sour moments with nahar. the taxi stops and she gets out. music still going in the back. saloni is walking down the street, not really sure where she's heading, not really caring...shes in a daze. all of sudden she starts to feel dizzy and starts tripping and eventually she falls down next to the road.. the road is completely empty, and its dark.

nahar is still driving, and somehow he ends up at neel's place. he rings the bell, and neel opens and sees a distressed nahar at the doorway. immediately, he lets him in and sits him down and holds him by the shoulders. neel, "naharji, kya hua? aap itnay upset kyun ho?...aap kuch bolte kyun nahin?". nahar keeps looking down and cries, and hands neel two letters, one for him and the one for neel. neel, "ye kya hai?" he takes them and gets up reading. he is shocked, surprised etc. neel music starts when he reads the letter addressed to him. neel finishes and the letters fall from his hands. neel turns to nahar, "naharji, aap saloni ke saath...mujhe aapse ye umeed nahin teeh. mujhpe bharosa na sahi, lekin saloni?...apne saloni pe shak kiya?". nahar is filled with remorse and gets up facing neel apologizing. nahar, "mein jaanta hoon ke meinay bahut bari galti ki. saloni ne humesha mujhse pyar kiya aur meinay...lekin neel tum meri jaga par kharay ho kar to dekho. us din jab meinay tume aur saloni ko dekha to mujhe laga ke saloni abh abhi tumse pyar karti hai... lekin, please neel, ab tumhi ho jo mujhe meri saloni wapas dila sakte ho." neel looks at him surprised, "woh kaise?" nahar, "saloni ne likha ta ke agar tum shubhra se shaadi karogay to woh wapas ajagi...please neel". neel, "nahin...nahin mein aisa nahin kar sakta" nahar is pleading with his hands together, "please nahar, mujhe samajhnay ki koshish karo. mein jaanta hoon ke mein swarthi ho raha hoon, lekin tumne bhi to saloni ko kabhi chaha tah na?" neel looks away pondering, unconvinced. he turns his back neel, "nahin, naharji ye mujhse nahin hoga, I'm sorry". nahar is completely dejected and leaves.

meanwhile saloni has fainted on the side of street and a car pulls up next to the road noticing a body. ravi (what was saloni's lost and found brother's name? is that it? well that's whom I am referring to the one she re met in switz) rolls the window down and gets out seeing a lady unconscious. he removes the hair from her face (saloni is stomach down) and realizes its his sister. ravi, "saloni?! omg! ye kya, kaise?.." he quickly opens his car door and puts saloni in and drives to the nearest hospital...
when saloni regains consciousness she finds herself in a hospital bed. she looks around and realizes where she is. she tries to get up but due to weakness has trouble. while she is struggling, ravi walks in. ravi quickly stops her and helps her lay down again. ravi, "saloni, tumhe lete rehna chahiye". saloni is surprised, "bhaiyasa aap?...mein yahan...?" ravi, "meinay wahan tumhe sarak par behosh dekha aur tumhe jaldi se yahan le aya... lekin tum wahan aisay? aur tumhare paas kapron se bhara hua bag bhi?...kya hua saloni?" saloni explains everything to him and by the end ravi is really angry. ravi, "nahar ne tumhare saath aisa kiya? mein ussay nahin chorunga!" saloni stops him, "nahin bhaisa, mein nahin chahti aap wahan jaaen. aap ko meri kasam...mein jaanti hoon ke jo hua burra hua, lekin mein ye bhi jaanti hoon ke nahar mujhse bahut pyar karte hain, aur unhe bahut burra laga hoga baad mein...aapne kisi ko ye bataya to nahin ke mein yahan hoon?" ravi, "nahin toh? jab meinay tumhara bag dekha to meinay socha ke zaroor kuch hua hai aur meinay kissi ko nahin bulaya" saloni sighs in relief. she asks him not to tell anyone where she is because she doesn't want anyone to know where she is. the doc comes in and says that saloni can go home tomorrow and leaves. ravi, "arre mein toh tumhe congrats kehna hi bhool gaya, arre bhai itni bari kush khabri..mein mama banne wala hoon!". saloni smiles and he hugs her.

meanwhile time is flowing as neel refuses to marry shubra. saloni is living with her brother and is reminencing as is nahar. the wind is blowing silently and nahar is walking down the shores of a deserted beach...saloni is standing infront of a window looking over at the beach which is infront of her...song in the background "jaana hai jaana hai, chalte hi jaana hain...na koi aapna hai na koi tikana hai...sab raaste naaraaz hain..." (from the movie kasak). the pages of a book flip quickly due to the wind and the music continues to play....

oh boy, that was huge, hope u like it!

cheers,

dc



Edited by desi chic - 27 April 2006 at 7:17pm
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Posted: 27 April 2006 at 8:24pm | IP Logged
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was soooooooooo good its like the best episode u have written so far Clap Clap Clap i just loveeeeddd it!!! Tongue ok i guess i m next.
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Posted: 27 April 2006 at 9:38pm | IP Logged
omg dc, that was an amazing episode Clap great work. Clap Clap
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Posted: 28 April 2006 at 7:43am | IP Logged
Ok promo of what will be coming up next:

Saloni tells Ravi to go meet nahar, find out why in the next episode. Tongue


Edited by munizaaa - 28 April 2006 at 7:59am

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