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Posted: 11 April 2006 at 2:49pm | IP Logged
OMG U GUYS LIK TOTALLY ROCK! ALL THESE UPDATES ARE JUST PLAIN WONDERFULL AND FUN Clap LOL ! GREAT JOB TO ALL THE WRITERS AND THANKS FER TAKING UR TIME DOING THIS. LOL .. TOTALLY LOVED THE UPDATE... AWWW HOW CUTE!!!! Clap Wink

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Posted: 11 April 2006 at 3:12pm | IP Logged
thanks loranlee4u!..because of you guys we just keep getting better.. Smile
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Posted: 11 April 2006 at 3:35pm | IP Logged
lol... too good. manisha welcome and u did a good job and muni your's was hillarious. haha! I will continue next then I guess... watch this space!
dc
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Posted: 11 April 2006 at 4:22pm | IP Logged
Thanks desi chick oh yes muni that was a wonderful episode. Really romantic and sweet lol! The Drunk side of Saloni it was absolutely romantic. Feel sorry for her in the morningshe is going to have one bad headache LOL
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Posted: 11 April 2006 at 5:34pm | IP Logged
Episode 22?
next morning...saloni wakes up and realizes her position. she is sleeping half on nahar with his face covered in her hair and half on the bed. she slowly gets up pulls her hair out of her face and sits holding her head thinking...ye mujhe kya horaha hai. sar kitna bhari hai. oh god, aur mein aisay kaise sogai...then she remembers last night when she got drunk. and then nahar stirs and slowly opens his eyes.

nahar, "saloni, kya hua?...tum teek to ho?". saloni, "kyun mujhe kya hua...meinay raat ko...woh...nahar...". nahar, "raat ko bahut mazaa aya, phir chalen tohri si wine taste karne?". saloni, "nahar, aap bhi na...mein kuch ulta seedha toh nahin?...). nahar teasing her, "nahin kuch khas nahin lekin woh...". saloni (worried), "woh, woh kya?". nahar, "jaano do na sweetheart, raat gayi baat gaee". saloni lays half on nahar and her hair is falling to one side and questions him again and he teases her. nahar, "woh tumne na, tumne na...tumne sharab ke nashay mein, ek sharabi ko kiss kardiya!" saloni screams, "kya!". and nahar's laughs his head off. saloni, "meinay ek ajnabi ko...aur aap has rahe hain?". nahar, "ajnabi kahan?...sharabi toh hum hogaye teh, aapki nazron ko dekh kar"... saloni gets upset and starts beating his chest in a playful manner. nahar laughs and pins her down and puts his head on her chest and closes his eyes. they lie there like that for a while and nahar listens to the beat of saloni's heart which seems to be calling his name...

rush hour...time to quickly pack things up as the flight is in the afternoon at 1:00... saloni is frantically putting things away while nahar is just sitting around looking gloomy. saloni is angry at him for not helping. saloni, "nahar, aap zara meri madat karne ki takleef karenge please?". nahar, "saloni, kyun na hum yehin reh jayen". saloni, "achha ji, aur mein yahan aap ke saath hokar, aapki gulami karti phiroon". nahar, "nahin toh, woh tum mujh par chode do...waise bhi sab mujhe joru ka gulaam aakh te hain". saloni is even more angry and gets up with hands on hips in front of him who is sitting. saloni, "meinay aapko baand kar rakha hai kya?". nahar, "meinay aisa toh nahin kaha...woh to mein aapse bandha chahta hoon, humesha ke liye.." and he pulls her onto his lap and moves her hair away from her face and admires her beauty and looks at her passionately...
saloni snaps out and quickly moves back to work. saloni, "nahar, chaliye meri madat kijiye". nahar, "jo hukum mere aaka". they both laugh and pack up.

at the airport...saloni and nahar are checking in and are told that the flight is delayed for an hour. so both of them go and sit in the waiting rooms. saloni puts her head on nahar's shoulder and they share a drink (of juice lol). and saloni starts squirming. saloni, "nahar, mein abhi ayi, mujhe washroom jaana hai". nahar, "teek hai, par jaldi karna.." saloni says yes and leaves. problem is, she doesn't know where the washroom is... she is searching while the clock is ticking and nahar's heart is pounding...

saloni kahan reh gayi? nahar use dhoond payega? only the next writer can tell u! ps. sorry its kinda short... I have to update the other one too:)
cheers,
dc


Edited by desi chic - 11 April 2006 at 5:34pm
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Posted: 11 April 2006 at 6:29pm | IP Logged
wow desi chic that was a wonderful episode Clap Clap i wish it was longer though. "tumne sharabi ko kiss kar liya" LOL LOL LOL I just loved that part.

Anyways Deepa ur next... continue soon Tongue   
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Posted: 11 April 2006 at 6:42pm | IP Logged
Desi Chick short and sweet hillarious episode. way to go. I made up drunk lady. Muni and you made Saloni drunk & nahar (sharabi) and making fun of her. very well done. enjoyed it.

Edited by ramas - 11 April 2006 at 6:42pm
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Posted: 11 April 2006 at 8:24pm | IP Logged
That was really good!! Can't wait till the next one!!!

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