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Posted: 09 April 2006 at 11:18am | IP Logged
i think some other lady was drowning and saloni saved her and in the process her shirt she was wearing came off. The lady maybe neelima Smile

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Posted: 09 April 2006 at 11:54am | IP Logged
Good job Ramas loved how u fit all the peices together abt Saloni's brother. Wonderful episode!!!
i think it was saloni that drowned and she was saved by her brother when he came back to the swiming pool to get his towel that he had forgotten. Big smile

I guess my turn to continue next. Tongue
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Posted: 09 April 2006 at 5:17pm | IP Logged
please respond to the questions after reading episode we have partially correct answer but not completely correct answer. Use your imagination.
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Posted: 09 April 2006 at 5:31pm | IP Logged
Great job ramas!! i love ur parts there so good! Clap ..i think that girl was saloni who drowned. or maybe it was someone else and saloni helped her?

Edited by DeepaliC - 09 April 2006 at 6:36pm
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Posted: 09 April 2006 at 10:49pm | IP Logged
Thanks deepa. you may be right or may not? I am answering like you did.
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Posted: 10 April 2006 at 2:21am | IP Logged

I was wondering if anyone could continue the story. I ain't a fantastic writer but, I can always try. If yo don't like it you can always delete it

I am new to the saat phere forum however, I used to be in the tumhari Disha section.

Recap from last episode:Nahar: hey Bhagwaan yeh maine kya kiya. Meri saloni ko bachalo. Maine iske paas kaise jaoon. . Meri Saloni kaisi hogi . He tries to hold himself. But couldn't and start crying.  the clerk is comforting  Nahar.

Episode 20:

Nahar: (Asks the clerk) Kya kohi kabar ayi? Yaha mein itna taraf raha hu or is hotel mein kise nah kuch nahi kiya!

Saying tis he drops to the ground thinking about all the terrible things that could have happened. He thinks to himself yeh sub mere galti hein chala ta dekhna kya saloni tehar sagte hein. Ab dub gaye nah He continousley cries feeling absolutely upset. Finally the clerk tells him to go to his room.

CLERK:" if there is any news we would tell you immediatley. Please go back to your room.Smile

Nahar's room:

Kash meine Saloni ko nahi chora hota Kash..............AngryAngry

Saloni: Nahar kya ap restroom se vapas aa gaye hein? Nahar (No reply)

Nahar: Sal..oon (Nahi yeh mere man ka vehem hein)

Saloni: Nahar kya vo tum ho? Darvaja band kardo.

Nahar: OMG! Yeh to Salonni hein.

He runs in full speed to go see if that is really Saloni. Nahar instantly hugs Saloni. At first Saloni feels a bit shocked, surprised. However, gives into the hug they are both about to kiss when...............

Clerk: Mr. Nahar em... would you like to see your wife.

Nahar: Well, actually thanks for informing me but, this is my wife Mrs.Saloni Nahar.

CLerk: I am absolutely sorry em... do excuse me? Hope you have a nice time.

Naher: Kabab mere hadi. Saloni tum kaha jahi gali ti? Vo shirt? Tum nahi te or ek ladki dub gaye te meine soche ke meine tumhe hamese kaliye ko de ya hein.

Saloni: Shocked Itna kuch hogeya! I am so sorry Nahar je mujhe maf karodo. Meine jan buch kar yeh sub kuch nahi keya. Vo bat yeh ki mujhe neend ayi te or ap ana ka nam bhi nahi la rahe te to mein yaha aa gaye. Please Mujhe maf kardo. Age se asa nahi hoga.

Nahar: Saloni it's ok swetheart. Tumhare galte nahin hein ab chala bhar gumne.

Saloni: Kaha?

Nahar: Shopping or kaha? Mein aj tumhe leya ek cheez karedne hein.

Saloni: Sachi to cholo! Nahi... ek minute

Nahar: Kya huwa? Mun nahi hein?

Saloni: Vo kapare badal ke ati hoon.

Nahar: Saloni tum jis kohi be sari pehente ho us mein bhoot he zada khubsoorat lagti ho.

Saloni: EmbarrassedEmbarrassed Ap be nah!

Finally, Saloni's ready and so is Nahar to go and do their surprise shopping. Now, the next writer will enlighten you regarding the shopping episode. Hopefully you like this little episode. I'm sorry I didn't know someone else wanted to continue sorry.

Love Manisha



Edited by miss.england02 - 10 April 2006 at 1:22pm
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Posted: 10 April 2006 at 5:42am | IP Logged
Thanks Manisha very nice episode.
Yes new writers are welcome here. But we take turn so if you want to coninue writing with us. You have to letus know so the episodes are not repeated and also the writer who writes previuos episode tells the next writer what is the mystery.
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Posted: 10 April 2006 at 7:50am | IP Logged
It's ok manisha no one started working on an episode yet i m glad u continued. Ur a wonderful writer Tongue. Poor Nahar he was worried for no reason. Just tell me next time u want to write so that 2 ppl dont post the same episode. Tongue

I guess i ll do episode 21. Nahar and Saloni have been on their honeymoon too long lets bring them back home. Tongue Big smile       

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