FanFic SAATHPHERE - Page 44

Bravooo 👏

your an excellent fan - fic writer 😃

thanks for your part...will be waiting for the next one 😊

thanks ruby, deepa and Gk....

it's great to hear that you ALL love the epi.... never thought that I was able to write....I was amazed about my writingscales.....whaaoooo 😃

It was a good experince.....and hope that you will let me join more often....

Edited by shali - 17 years ago

you writers are rocking fantastic 😉 😉 😉

Thanks anju and mezbeen for wonderful comments.
I will be posting the next episode tonight.

aww shali that was too cute jaanu!!!!!!!! 👏 short and very sweet, your hindi is just fine. keep it up...looking forward to yours ramas!
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recap
Tara knoks on the door and comes in...... Nahar, saloni tumdono kuch din ke liye ek hill-station chale jao....tumhare tabiat bhi behal jayegi...... Par bhabhi.... Main kuch soonana nahi chahati. tumhare bhaija ne ijazzet dedi hai.... Tum dono packing karo....par neel our shubra ki saadi se peile wapas aaja na thik hai.......

Episode #

Nahar and Tara insists on Saloni to go to hil station. Intitally Saloni refuses saying Shubhra might need help with her wedding. She calls Shubhra. Shubhra also tells her didi go on. But please come back 4 days before the wedding. Tara helps Saloni packs their bags. Naha r& Saloni leaves for the trip. Somehow Saloni is still very much afraid about her dream. But does not say anything. She feels like something bad is going to happen.

Nahar is driving in the mountains. Saloni is just resting her head on Nahar's shoulder. Scenary is very beautiful as they are going thru mountains. Sunset is beautiful. Evening sky is so pretty with clouds and sun. They reach the beautiful cottage. The surroundings is awesome. It is very peaceful and calm place. Nahar and Saloni have candle light dinner on the porch with nice music playing. Nahar asks saloni to dance if she is not too tired. Saloni dances with Nahar.

Dono ek dusere me kho jate hai. Samay ka koi dhayan nahi raheta. Nahar stops saloni as he is worried she will get too tired. He hugs her and kisses her and carries her to the bed. They watch very romantic movie. Saloni is lying on Nahar 's tummy while Nahar is sitting on the bed . Nahar is gently massaging Saloni's head and playing with her hair. Nahar finally sees a smile on Saloni's face. He is very happy. Movie ends with happy ending. Nahar turns of lights holding Saloni tight to his chest.

Next morning they both wake up with birds chirping and beautiful sunrise. They get ready

 Nahar: Saloni aap kaisi ho aaj. Yahan kaisa lag raha hai

Saloni: mujhe bahut achacha lagta hai. Ek to aap mere sath ho. Phir ye khubsurat jagah. Aur ye payara sa mausam. Saloni smiles.

Nahar: saloni aap walk karne chalogi. Saloni: mujhe achacha lagega. They both walk and come to this beautiful place. There are mountains surrounded by a beautiful valley. Nahar goes to the edge. Saloni runs and grabs him. Saloni: Nahar sambhalke. She holds him tight. Nahar kisses her.

 They come back and have lunch rest of the day they spend leisurely talking and watching movie. Nahar regrets not taking camera. He goes out and buy a camera, while Saloni is resting. Next morning they get up early. Saloni is feeling much better and dress up nicely. She looks at Nahar and smiles.

Nahar: Saloni aaj aap kafi khubsurat lag rahi ho. Aap ki ye muskurhat ne to hume ghayal kar diya bhai. Uspe to aaj jaan dene ko ji karta… Saloni cover his mouth saying. Ye aap subah subah mai kaisi manhoos baaten karne lage jao mai aap se baat nahi karti. Saloni ruthne ka natak kar rahi hai. Nahar comes closer and hug her and says: darling muje maaf kar do. He holds his both ears, Gulti huye baba maaf kar do na meri pyari payri Saloni.

Saloni haste hue bolti hai: jao maaf kiya. Ayinda aisi baate muh se nikali to tumahri khair nahi. They both laugh. Nahar gets his camera they both leave. They reach the mountain and valley place. Nahar take Saloni's picture. He goes to the edge and before Saloni say anything he slips.
Saloni sees him droping from the cliff and screams Naaaaaaahhhhhhhhrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!

She feels like her world is ending and she is going to die. She gathers courage and looks down and sees Nahar hanging on the big trunk 3feet down with both his hands and trying to climb. He tells Saloni not to worry. Saloni looks around couldn't find anything or anyone. Without hesitating she takes off her saree and ties one end to a tree near by and throws other end at Nahar. Nahar is trying to grab saree. Finally after so many tries he get it. Then Saloni starts pulling him up with all her strength. Nahar goes up and down. Saloni closes her eyes and finally pulls him up. As Nahar comes up. She hugs him hard and start crying.

Nahar: Saloni dekho mai thik hu. Tumne aaj mujhe nayi zindgi di. He puts saree on Saloni. He sees blood on Saloni's hand. Saloni mai kitna khushnaseeb hun meri patni apni jaan ki parwa kiye bagiar meri jaan bachai. Dekho abhi tumme kafi strength bhi nahi hai. Tum bade trauma se uthi ho sach me mei khush kismet hoon. He kisses her hands.They both hug.

Next 4 days passes with lots of fun. Saloni feels like a new person and they are on their 2nd honeymoon. They started going back home. Suddenly weather gets bad. It is very foggy and raining. As Nahar is driving the car come from the opposite side hits Nahar's car. Nahar looses control. His car hits big tree and stops. Nahar and saloni becomes unconscious.

After few minutes Saloni wakes to see Nahar is unconscious. He is bleeding with head injury. She gets out of car pulls him out and calls the cottage for help. She puts his head on her lap and tears her saree and ties Nahar's head to stop bleeding.

The cottage servant comes with ambulance they take Nahar and Saloni to hospital nearby. Doctor checks out Nahar and Saloni. Saloni has some superficial injuries. Doctor treats her. Luck has it doctor recognizes Nahar as he is family friend and calls Brijesh and tells him about the accident and injury .It looks very bad. Nahar has internal head injury and we have to wait and observe for 24-48 hours. .He worries Nahar might slip into coma. If he doesnot come out soon. They may also have to do surgery. Brijesh , tara and dheer aditi bahbho all rushes there. Saloni is unaware of seriousness of naahr's injury. They all tell her Nahar is sleeping because of the shot doctor has given, they donot want to give another shock to Saloni. Saloni bahabho, tara , aditi all go to temple and pray for Nahar.

To be continued:
Please answer these questions

What will happen to Nahar? Would he slip into coma?
How would Saloni react once she finds out seriousness of Nahar's injury?
What will happen to neel Shubhra's marriage since it is only 4 days away?

Edited by ramas - 17 years ago

wow ramas wonderful episode just loved it 👏 👏 👏

whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaa,

saloni is action-woman...... 😆   👏 😆

good story ramas, love it......

Great epi ramas!!!! 👏 👏 👏 alot of suspence!! loved it! Edited by DeepaliC - 17 years ago

Originally posted by: munizaaa

wow ramas wonderful episode just loved it 👏 👏 👏

Thanks muni.