Originally posted by: ilvudayloved the update ...it was amazing n it was nyc seeing manyata jealois...i enjoyed d updateπ...plz update soon
ps thanx for pm
Thank you! I think jealousy makes the characters just so much hotter π
Originally posted by: ilvudayloved the update ...it was amazing n it was nyc seeing manyata jealois...i enjoyed d updateπ...plz update soon
ps thanx for pm
Originally posted by: -JEHAN-Omg...this was awesome...more than awesome...I hope show main bhi aisa ho...amazing...I love to see M getting jealous..how evil i am...
Originally posted by: xxDaydreameRxxOMG Vishwa...that was AMAZING!!
Seriously love M getting jealous parts..preponing the party ;) wow...hope she realizes her love for UDayveer soonThe towel scene was so well-written, reallly loved it! π³ You knwo you are an amazing romance writer.i always find the scenes so hot but pure and natural at the same time πLOL half teh fic i was thinking hmm how are you going to get rid of Akash, then the ending scene happened and im just like YESS! That should keep him away for a while at least, although no trusting the chipku Akash, hopefully a couple months? πOverall I loved ur update and seriously cant wait for you to continuealso i actually really enjoy ur writing style. When the whole party was planned i was all excited and expecting it to be shown for a couple chaps but i actually ended up liking that it didnt and that u dont unnecessarily drag events but kind of hint at their significance and in this case I feel like every event that happens is just connecting and building to Manyata's emotions ππΌAmazing job girl! Keep it up! π
Originally posted by: HaniibeeOoohhh...DRAMA!
What I wouldn't give to see Uday in a towel in the actual show!Hayeee...Yes! Ab Pakash can go back and leave ManVeer alone!You know even though J is acting I still HATE it!That girl just gets on my nerves!
Originally posted by: Inkpen4877Oh WOW! What a fantastic update!!! And Seriously Akash had to make his entry right then!?!?!?
Thanks for the PM!
Originally posted by: adventure_gurlloved the update what a shocker at the end!π
Originally posted by: jazzthakuratlast u made it
u updated wowthis was just awesomeespecially that kiss and that majnu watching iti want to celebrate nowkeep it up
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