SS:DTBHJ (A twisted KISS) Pg 34 - Page 27

Originally posted by: ilvuday

loved the update ...it was amazing n it was nyc seeing manyata jealois...i enjoyed d update👏...plz update soon 

ps thanx for pm

Thank you! I think jealousy makes the characters just so much hotter 😆

Originally posted by: -JEHAN-

Omg...this was awesome...more than awesome...I hope show main bhi aisa ho...amazing...I love to see M getting jealous..how evil i am...

Thanks a bunch! haha...I am sure it will as most of the times my updates and show are similar and I think I am the real devil 😈😆

Originally posted by: xxDaydreameRxx

OMG Vishwa...that was AMAZING!!

Seriously love M getting jealous parts..preponing the party ;) wow...hope she realizes her love for UDayveer soon

The towel scene was so well-written, reallly loved it! 😳 You knwo you are an amazing romance writer.i always find the scenes so hot but pure and natural at the same time 😊

LOL half teh fic i was thinking hmm how are you going to get rid of Akash, then the ending scene happened and im just like YESS! That should keep him away for a while at least, although no trusting the chipku Akash, hopefully a couple months? 😆

Overall I loved ur update and seriously cant wait for you to continue

also i actually really enjoy ur writing style. When the whole party was planned i was all excited and expecting it to be shown for a couple chaps but i actually ended up liking that it didnt and that u dont unnecessarily drag events but kind of hint at their significance and in this case I feel like every event that happens is just connecting and building to Manyata's emotions 👍🏼

Amazing job girl! Keep it up! 😃

First of all I want to give you a hug 🤗 
Thank you so much for the insightful and such a heart melting comment!
I personally hate cheesiness and not a sucker for romantics, more humor and tragedy but I know how much romance we all like from our fav pairs so had to add it in. 😳
But I am glad that you liked how it was written, and as for the Uncle, it was last minute thing to add him as I was really hoping to get rid of him 😆
Again..I am glad you liked that part...I hate fillers and I hate to write them as well...dance scenes I dont like to write unless they are hot romance since there is no point in describing dance movement 😆 ...and yea it does have something to the next update which will be interconnected in a way 😳
So enjoy and thank you soo much once again! mmmwaah!

Originally posted by: Haniibee

Ooohhh...DRAMA!

What I wouldn't give to see Uday in a towel in the actual show!

Hayeee...

Yes! Ab Pakash can go back and leave ManVeer alone!

You know even though J is acting I still HATE it!

That girl just gets on my nerves!

Haii!! ☺️ I know why don't they show AK in a towel...trps will FLY!!!! 😍
By the way...J is on UV's side, its actually their plan to make M jealous
and J is good in my SS so don't worry about her 😉
Thanks for reading 😳

Originally posted by: Gowri05

That was awesome!! and the kiss was hot!!!

Thanks love!

Originally posted by: Inkpen4877

Oh WOW! What a fantastic update!!! And Seriously Akash had to make his entry right then!?!?!?

Thanks for the PM! 

Thank you! Haha...well someone has to break up after all 😉

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

loved the update  what a shocker at the end!😆

thank you dear...glad you liked it...😆 yea me and my weird ways to end the story😛

Originally posted by: jazzthakur

atlast u made it

u updated wow

this was just awesome

especially that kiss and that majnu watching it

i want to celebrate now

keep it up

🤣 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
You crack me up Jazzy! 🤣 
Thanks so much!😆

Originally posted by: princessofkesar

wow what a update!

glad you liked it 😊

it awsum specially da kiss...do continue soon...