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In memory of our beloved friend JESS...

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Posted: 15 December 2011 at 10:41am | IP Logged
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jess ko yaad kartay huye mani yeh tumharay liye...


there is holes in floor of heaven '''''.

 

One day shy of eight years old,
When grandma passed away.
I was a broken hearted little boy,
Blowing out that birthday cake.
How I cried when the sky let go,
With a cold lonesome rain.
My mom smiled, said: "Don't be sad child.
"Grandma's watching you today."

"'Cos there's holes in the floor of Heaven,

"And her tears are pouring down.
"That's how you know she's watching,
"Wishing she could be here now.
"An' sometimes if you're lonely,
"Just remember she can see.
"There's holes in the floor of Heaven
"And she's watching over you and me."

Seasons come and seasons go,

Nothing stays the same.
I grew up, fell in love,
Met a girl who took my name.
Year by year, we made a life,
In this sleepy little town.
I thought we'd grow old together,
Lord, I sure do miss her now.

But there's holes in the floor of Heaven,

And her tears are pouring down.
That's how I know she's watching,
Wishing she could be here now.
An' sometimes when I'm lonely,
I remember she can see.
There's holes in the floor of Heaven,
And she's watching over you and me.

Well my little girl is 23,

I walk her down the aisle.
It's a shame her Mom can't be here now,
To see her lovely smile.
They throw the rice, I catch her eye,
As the rain starts coming down.
She takes my hand; says: "Daddy don't be sad,
'Cos I know Mama's watching now."

"And there's holes in the floor of Heaven

"And her tears are pouring down.
"That's how you know she's watching,
"Wishing she could be here now.
"An' sometimes when I'm lonely,
"I just remember she can see.
"Yes, there's holes in the floor of Heaven,
"And she's watching over you and me."

Watching over you and me.


Watching over you and me.


Watching over you and me.


shabd bhi kam par rahein aaj kuch kehnay kay liye. kal raat tak toh mujhay iss baat par wishvas bhi nahi tha, kyunki mera dil iss karway sach ko maan na hi nahi chahta tha aur na kabhi chahayga.

jess kay saath jitna bhi samay bitaya , i will always cherish those moments. apni har baat ko bari hi saralta aur apnaypan say kehti thi woh. kehti thi woh bahut mushkil ho raha hay aisay shabdo ka istmaal karna.

chotay chotay shabdo may toh may bahut kuch likhdungi magar ek kahani kesay likhoon. haan jess ek anokhi aur bari hi adbudh kahani hay. ek bahut hi vibrant aur lively kahani.

apnay aap ko kesay sambhaloon...aur kesay linkhoo us larki kay baray may jo humaray dil aur mann may hamesha rahegi...

mein aaj sabsay jess kay likhay gaye kuch lamhay share karna chahti hoon....


7 june 2011

 

Awww mystory, was waiting for your next intro... liked it so far.. now waiting for more... :D

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9 june 2011

 

Beautiful... such a beautiful intro... I can visualise and hear it.. like I am there.. in the fields with Khanak... and Shikhar.. sigh it is very magical mystory... your story...  I believe your name is Priya? Correct me please if I am wrong.. but your talent is simply outstanding...

 

Loved Shaan's intro too.. and in essence with ShaNak...

 

waiting for the next update as I am bowled by your unique way of telling your story mystory..

 

 

 

hey jessica thanks yaar fr such beautifull comment.btw they  are in sandunes of gujrat.runin on desert sand. bt thanks for the idea abt fields. surly use it in nxt parts. ya my name is priya.

Edited by mystory - 09 June 2011 at 11:50am

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its devine to b always in love.shaan loves khanak n we all love them.

 

 

 

 

Lmao... mistake ho gayaa re Priya... tehehehehe Sorry my bad...

 

But yes... Kutch ke rann (desert)  ki aur hi baat hain.. Sigh I love your unique style Pri.. and do call me Jess. jessica is too formal.. and makes me seem like a buddhi 

 

do continue.. here at the forum all read.. some do comment but all love and appreciate good writing...  The RBO forum is the most beautiful place that can happen to anyone.. Am speaking from personal experience.. gave me a lot and still is...

 

 

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14 june 2011

 

Aaahhh 2b, 2c.. finally caught up!!!

 

So this is the story... hmmm... like the parallels that you have given.. a clear view of the 2 sides of the coin...

 

But the similarity is love... Khanak-Shikhar's and Shantanu-Pankhu's... with a touch of a difference... yet that is the sole similarity...

 

sigh I can see the story now building... but am wondering how their paths will clash.. with so many miles seperating them...

 

But beautifully woven again... love the chooriyan and their masti.. naughty... and loved the smart city duo too..

 

Shall wait and see the outcome now...

 

Lovely Pri..

 

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wow jess

manay apnay ff kay baray may asay kabhi nahi socha ray

 

infact u have changed my view fr it.

 

cool right now m loving ur comnt so much more than anything else in this world.

 

loving ur comnt nd loving the weather(its raining right now)

 

i luv vry thing about romance.

 

nd there paths will nt clash , they'll meet at sum point

 

finally falling in love.



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its devine to b always in love.shaan loves khanak n we all love them.

 

 

I enjoyed reading it...

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Jessica

 

27 june 2011

 

Priya...

 

4a, 4b, 5...

 

Lovely.. small updates yet screaming the story, telling you in a small nutshell..

 

Lovely... loved Khanak walk to Shikhar's house as his dulhan... the pain so evident in that update... gosh girl...

 

Lovely updates.. though am replying in short.. they are so beautifully written...

 



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28 july 2011

 

Aaahhh finally the twain have a glimpse of he other... woh bhi mandir mein... Of course the Almighty has it all planned!!!

 

Beautiful short yet sweet update Pri...

 

The expressions that you have used more than conveys the feelings in their hearts.. Beautiful...

 

Am waiting too for the continuation...



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Jessica

 

12 july 2011

 

Hmmm... chimes.. for sure the ringing off her name in his ears.. is sweet music.

 

Loved the way they meet here... in this different environment of the office.

 

Like the wya the story is unfolding slowly.. steadily..

 

Nice update Priya.. keep going.

 

 



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Jessica

 

20 july 2011

 

Why are you leaving Priya?

 

Even if  Odhani ends, you can still continue being here at the forum. Do consider again... the forum shall live for a long time so that we can relive golden memories of RBO...



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hay jess

 

mujhay abhi rona aa raha hay  ( khushi kay aasoon )

 

i dint knw u care fr me so much

 

teray aur mani kay pass mera ff parnay ka time nahi hay

 

magar mujhay roknay sabsay pehlay aa gaye tum dono

 

mygod tum dono world kay sabsay acchay frnds ho

 

tumhay chor kar kesay jaoon ????????????????

 

i haftay baad milengay

 

bi

 

 

 

spot on bold :  Madam nautanki, I am up to date on your FF...

 

KMK DKD... waste of time... itne time mein apna FF update kar deti... lol... you are cute.. Waiting for you to update next part... after you take your break... whatever...



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Jessica

 

25 Aug 2011

 

Aahaaa... finally caught up...

 

so it is tu-tu main-main...

 

Yesss... the resurrection of golden RBO.. thand payiii...

 

Interesting story mystory... Priya intrigue always makes the mind wonder.. ab kya hoga.. kaise hoga.. kab hoga..

 

I wait for this journey... sighing remembering yet in total awe...



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yipeee

yup its aap-aap tum-tum...

thanks yaar u actually  callin it resurrection of golden rbo...

aagay jo hoga bhala hoga...

babes its really a journey worth waitin...actually shanak ki har kahani apnay aap may bahut adbudh hay...

love u n my sweets

muah...




jess we love u...

m so lucky to have a friend like u...a precious unique lil sister

dearly beloved angel may god bless u

n wishing ki kabhi na kabhi kissi birth may aapsay zaroor mulakaat hopaye (hoping for that red dot to blink again with ur jingles jess )

love yaaa

miss yaa deary Cry inhay rok pana bahut hi mushkil ho raha hay

R.I.P






 


Edited by mystory - 15 December 2011 at 11:05am

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Posted: 15 December 2011 at 10:56am | IP Logged
LovelySmilethat was a beautiful memoir
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Posted: 15 December 2011 at 11:20am | IP Logged
that was so nice priya..
she will always be with us..seeing us..
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Posted: 15 December 2011 at 11:40am | IP Logged
Lovely memories priya
u r such  cute buddy ki u have given each and every memory of jess that she shared with u that was really gracious
The ones in red lines were awesome... i hope yeh padne ke bad mani ka dard thoda kam hogaye(even though its difficult to come out sch a distressful situation )

she will be with us alwayss...




Edited by minnu345 - 15 December 2011 at 11:41am
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nice priya..that was a beautiful!
miss her.
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Posted: 15 December 2011 at 1:37pm | IP Logged
Thanks for sharing this Priya...That was Jess...Always supportive, generious and loving...
 
Never going to forget her...
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beautiful memories priya... she will always be with us...
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we are never going to forget her. love u always Jess di 

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