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                                       U, ME,AUR...?

                                                                 PART 56

Hai friends,

Thank you all for your support .Special thanks for my friends who clicked like buttons and commented my updates.. Please encouraging me in the same way'SmileI love you all.

hai guys,today i'm going to surprise u...waiting for the surprise..SmileWink

Once they stepped out of hospital,they were surrounded by medias…

Medias:hello mam..where were u till now?

is that right news ,u went abroad..

U went 2 take rest or Is there any misunderstanding between u n ur grand son…

Are u kidnapped..sir

Y where the police around ur house..

Kya mr.khurana bhi aapke saath thi..

aap yahaan kya karrahi hain..

Where did u both go..

Maan:mein shadhi karne gayithi…meri biwi bimaar hain..usei dikane hospital ayi hoon..ab aap khush..aapka jawab milgaya..then don't disturb us..

Maan who was totally upset with the medias annoying questions doesnt realize what he said in anger.

The medias went silent..

Dadi looked at him questioning..u only told not to bring geet before medias…now what have u said.

Maan who gained what he

At that time nurse came there..

Nurse:mam,ur reports..n this tablet u have to take now…dr.wants to meet u..for check up.

Dadi looked at the medias

Dadi:shayad now u have got the answers..all knows that I'm I went to take rest..maan accompanied me…n for u all I have a news..just wait for us in kc..

Dadi did not agree or disagree with his statement.she just diverted them.the medias took maans statement is an outburst of anger n he didn't mean it.

The medias followed them to kc..

Maan was trying his best to be calm..

They both entered kc .they straightly went to the conference hall n sorted the problem..

Dadi:adi,the papers

Adi handed the papers..

Dadi:maan ispe sign karo.

Maan without reading signed it..

Dadi:ladies n gentlemen,I have a gud news for u all..


From today maan will be the MD of KC..

All of them clapped n congratulated maan.

Maan was shockedShocked

Maan:par dadi..

Maan, I wish u all the u can make decisions of ur own.I know u will bring kc to no:1 position..i'll help u till u finish ur studies..

Maan was waiting for this moment to relieve dadi from overloading her works..but not in this she handed her position to an unexpected situation..when geet needs him the most..

They came out of Kc .Dadi announced her decision before the medias..

The rival,Rahul chopra,seeing the news broke the tv.

RC:Savithri kept each step fearing at me..but this man,maan singh khurana..he never backs up his decision.he is clever,I have to keep more eyes on him before he pushes me back from first place..

They both came back to the medias didn't follow them.

Maan:dadi,y did u give this announcement today..

Dadi:I know maan..u want to be with geet..but,I think if I 'll be at home I can look after her..n my health is also not supporting me..i cant work anymore..i feel tired maan..if I'm in house,I'll take rest n can take care of geet also.

Maan thought ..dadi was r8..

they entered the hospital.dadi went to see dr.

Maan called b.dadi n kala to go with dadi.

Maan walked towards geet room..

No one was near geet..Nurse  also went to collect the reports.she was coughing.Bahadur,who was outside came in. he poured water in the glass. n fed her holding her head .Maan entered the room n got angry Angryto see him near geets bed..  before he shouts.,..Geet started to throw out all that she had…bahadur hold it in his hands, before geet was messed up..maan came running to geet…bahadur walked to wash room to clear his hands..maan helped to open the door..maan again came to geet n fed water..but,still she was messed up..

Bahadur came out.he knows he must explain.

Bahadur:sir,I too have a sister.. I'll call the dr.

He went out.

It was a simple explanation,but maan's trust towards him took another step..

Geet was too tired after throwing out.maan locked the door n came to her..he started to undress her covering her with spread...he stopped leaving her inners..maan took a towel n whipped her face n neck n the upper area where she was messed up..maan could see n feel her skin.

Geet just held the spread tight over her. he took a spare dress .he made her  wear it..his hands touched her bare back n waist while pulling her kurti down..he remained calm... .there was no physical attraction..maans love n care has taken all over it..

He heared the knock on the door.after confirming she is fully  covered,he opened the door..

Dr.was standing with all of them..

Maan:dr.she vomited fully what she ate..

Dr:its normal..after a long gap,when we eat something..our stomach will take quiet time to accept it..

She checked geet..

Dr:maan now she is perfectly fine..u can take her home..but be careful with what I said..i have written some medicines,she has to take it regularly..u said about her behavior at n8,after her friends,I think she will not able to sleep at n8.i've written sleeping pills for,she will sleep peacefully..if she remains calm,u may stop it..

Maan:ji dr.

Dr:ok..i'll prepare the discharge papers..

She left..

Dadi:geet,see who has come to see u..

Geet:dadi,ye dadi kaun hai..

B.Dadi:I'm badi dadi of maan ..from now,ur b.dadi also..

Geet tried to touch her feet..

b.dadi hugged her..

B.dadi:bacha,per chuneki zaroorat nehi.sada suhaagan raho..bagwaan tumhe hamesha kush rakegha..sirf muskuradho…aur is ghar ka aur mere gussa wala pothe ka khayal rakhna,,.

achi sanskaari bahu mili hai savithri tumko..



28.12.2011.. 3.55pm.

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                                    U, ME,AUR...?

                                                                 PART 57

Hai friends,

Thank you all for your support .Special thanks for my friends who clicked like buttons and commented my updates.. Please encouraging me in the same way'SmileI love you all.


After sometime ,they all headed back to home.geet was leaning on maans shoulders n  looking outside .this is the first time she is seeing a city..she will look at the huge buildings bending her head..the numerous cars standing in line in traffic, the busy persons walking on the road with phones..the double buses..

she saw the car entering a huge gate..the big house,which looked like a palace..

Geet was looking in was her childishness n curiosity..

Geet:ye kya raja ki mahal hai kya..

Maan turned to her..after her parents death,she is talking normally..asking him question..


Geet:are we going to see the prince here..

Maan:no.(he smiled inside..geet apni que bank tho shuruwat ki hai)

Geet:then why are we here..

Maan:this is our house..

Geet:what?this is your house..itna badaaa ghar'aapki hai..

She was excited a little..she doesn't remember she was here from the previous she was sleepy when she entered the house n unconscious when she was taken to hospital.

She was looking at the palace like house,huge lawn n the big compounds..her eyes widened..

The car stopped infront of the door.maan got down n gave his hand to help her.he hold her by her waist n her one hand was over his shoulder supporting her to walk..she was looking at the house..they walked inside..unknowingly they both kept their first step inside the house at same time..maan showed her all the last they went to their room.

Maan was entering his finger prints..

Geet:whats this?

Maan:this is security machine..without my finger print no one can enter my room'

He took her hand n entered her finger prints'from now,you can open our room like this..he taught her how to unlock the room..

She entered the room..this was known to her..he took her to all the rooms..n atlast made her lay on bed..

Maan:take rest..

Geet:wo kya hai..she pointed his private space room..maans face shrunk..Dadis were at the entrance.

ST:den ki under ek aur den hai..

Maan:wo bhi mera room hai'don't try to go inside the room..i don't like anyone entering that room..

Geet:how can I go?that is also having security lock haina..


Geet:ye ghar aapka hai..

Maan:nehi..humaara hai..

Geet:I have listened stories..only prince lives in palace like this'tho aap prince ho..

Maan smiled at her.. I halliculating..maan as smiling..

Dadi..its real didi..maan is smiling..i told u na..only geet has the magic to change maan..

b.dadi:hmm..wo tho hai..

Geet:bolo na..aap prince ho..

Maan: Haan..tumhare prince..

      Hmm..ab boliye princess aap ko kuch chahiye


Maan:if I'm prince..then u r my princess..bolo do u want anything to eat..

Geet:ab nehi..

Maan:teek hai..we'll take lunch later..


Dadi's silently made their way to living room.they cant believe their eyes..maans way of talking..the man who was angry with medias few hrs before..was totally opposite with his wife'

B.dadi got a call from abroad'her expressions said she was happy..

B.dadi:Savithri..mein par dadi bangaya..tum bhi..she is expecting ..babaji ne unki sunli'sab dr.s ne kahaan she will never become a mother'aaj chamatkaar hogaya..

Dadi:Mubarak ho chamatkar geetki wajase hain..wherever she goes,she gives them happiness..par..unki khushi tho bagwaan ne cheen li'

B.dadi:..u r right..if god shuts one door..he opens another door'see how maan cares for geet..

        savithri,tum maanki chintha karna chod..ab sirf Vicky ke barein mein soch'we have to make this two poles dono bhaiyonka kuch karna padega..

Dadi:jis din maan Vicky ko apnaunga..i'll be the happiest women on earth..i'll happily leave this life that day..

B.dadi:shub shub bol'wo din bhi zaroor ayengi..mera dil only u told geet carries happiness with the bundle of happiness is in ur house..she will bring them both together.u will c maan n Vicky together with full of love at each other..

 so friends ,how was my surprise today.vicky,the boy who was playing with the dog dexture is maan's brother..geet is back with her questions..

my cpu got troubled..smoking i'll not be able 2 update till i get my cpu back..somehow i managed to type again in my hubbys off.lappy n posted today...pls,guys u have 2 wait for minimum 10days..i cant pm u frnds forgive me...but,i'll try my level best to give u update thru my hubbys lappy...if he gives me like


Happy n prosperous new all of them...

will meet u all in next year Big smileSmileTongue.

28.12.2011.. 4.05pm.

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Edited by valli22 - 28 December 2011 at 3:53am

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ossum dear
i think maan ll bring vicky for sake of geet 
becoz geet  brother name is vicky

and why geet cant enter that room
and why maan said to geet that
hope we can see soon that too

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super updates
loved it
continue soon
HAPPY NEW YEARSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmile

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awesome dear ...
happy new year dear ...

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