Shanak FF Pehla Nasha Part8 page15-17th July - Page 5

thank you😊 yes Shaan is your's favorite😊

 nope shanak z my favorite!!!!!!!!!!
wow second part z also very nice...after replacing viren vth shan i can now imagine da characters very well...

hei payal,
that was a cute update..
shanak snow ball fight..sharing their happiness..
n achanak kabab mein haldi ki tarah bodyguards..aarrggghhh..too bad..
shaan itne bada ho gaya hai yaar abb bhi body guards..he has every right to ask for removing these bodyguards..
will his father let him do work as per his interest..
bechara shaan..
payal lying to ducks abt wat she was actually thinking abt shaan..
n shaan's ma saying her as bahu..LOL!!!!
he haven't yet given a thought abt it..they r just now becoming friends ma..
n ya..shaan will help khanak to get her internship with 1st class in her degree exam..am excited..
do continue soon payal..
Edited by RB81 - 12 years ago

Hey Payal, I'm Afiya :)

I'm really liking the story so far! Especially how the two bonded so quickly in Manali, and how Khanak's brother is so sweet with her.  I loved this part in the story

Shaan: kya kar rahe ho? main wildlife ka koi janwar nahi hun😡😆

 

Khanak: wildlife ka nahi ho lekin domestic zaroor ho, puppy ki tarah😆

 

Shaan showed fake anger and tried to snatch the camera from Khanak. They were smiling like kids again.😛

It's going great, continue soon! 😃

 

Hey Nice Update🤗...wow and the update was super long...thnx so much😃I loved each and every word in the update and the way the story is being shaped is really good😊good job...Im impressed with khanak's character sketch,a totally bindass girl...Shaan still there is a lot to prove😊but im sure khanak will help him achieve his dreams😳...it was really gud...thnx for updating...waiting for ur next one😃

superb updates

its really gud and interesting'

totally diff from rbo

they are totally opp to each other but as it is said opp attract

so lukin fwd to it

luvin how they are getting comfortable wid each other

their conv are cute... and em luvin it

update soon.

Originally posted by: priyani143

m Priyani
nice story... waiting for the next part

Originally posted by: _sweetshona_

Muze achha lga ke sbko yashu ki smile aur uski aakhe pasand hai...
Payal..bahot achhi story likhi hai..really nice aur padhaneme bi maja ata hai...shaan aur khanak ki nokzok unki dadai..masti bahot achetrahse described kiya hai...
Bechara shaan harwkt bodyguard uskesath rahte hai..unka presure uspr hota hai..aur wo khanak ki life jaisa jeena chahata hai..like freedom bird...

Originally posted by: ktym

Originally posted by ktym

so sweet of u payal 4 repalcing viren vth shan...thanku so much dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thank you😊 yes Shaan is your's favorite😊

 nope shanak z my favorite!!!!!!!!!!
wow second part z also very nice...after replacing viren vth shan i can now imagine da characters very well...

Originally posted by: RB81

hei payal,
that was a cute update..
shanak snow ball fight..sharing their happiness..
n achanak kabab mein haldi ki tarah bodyguards..aarrggghhh..too bad..
shaan itne bada ho gaya hai yaar abb bhi body guards..he has every right to ask for removing these bodyguards..
will his father let him do work as per his interest..
bechara shaan..
payal lying to ducks abt wat she was actually thinking abt shaan..
n shaan's ma saying her as bahu..LOL!!!!
he haven't yet given a thought abt it..they r just now becoming friends ma..
n ya..shaan will help khanak to get her internship with 1st class in her degree exam..am excited..
do continue soon payal..

Originally posted by: Afiya

Hey Payal, I'm Afiya :)

I'm really liking the story so far! Especially how the two bonded so quickly in Manali, and how Khanak's brother is so sweet with her.  I loved this part in the story

Shaan: kya kar rahe ho? main wildlife ka koi janwar nahi hun😡😆

 

Khanak: wildlife ka nahi ho lekin domestic zaroor ho, puppy ki tarah😆

 

Shaan showed fake anger and tried to snatch the camera from Khanak. They were smiling like kids again.😛

It's going great, continue soon! 😃