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Posted: 11 years ago
I may update this Sat, its my mom-dad's anniversary :) 

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Posted: 11 years ago
This content was originally posted by: ..Maitree..

I may update this Sat, its my mom-dad's anniversary :) 


wowww
Will be waiting dear๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
You are such an amazing writer

can't wait for the update ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry for the late update guys, just couldn't find time...And I have got food poisoning again so yeah, that adds up. Here is a preview, I hope you all will like it ๐Ÿ˜ณ WEEE 6th May is near ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ƒ *whoopsi* ๐Ÿ˜†Enjoy the update!

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Preview to Part 18

"He's sinking."
"Please. No. You can't do this. You promised, you promised...", she muttered on, trying to ignore what she heard.  She felt lost, helpless, defeated, lifeless, all at the same time. The least she could do, was to press her ear to his chest, and hear maybe what was the last faint heartbeat.
 
"Please, we can't stop trying. His heart is beating.", her words were rushed and broken.
"It won't work, Riddhima.", came a tired, helpless reply, "You know its over."
"ITS NOT OVER! HIS HEART IS BEATING! ", she could feel her warm tears on her burning cheeks, her throat paining from the impact of the rough and sudden shout. "Once more please.."
 
A beep interrupted as she turned around rapidly to the machine to see a clear green line running through it, the loud sound piercing her ears.
"That..That..",she pointed and shook her head, wiping her eyes hurriedly with her elbow, "Its-just-not TRUEโ€ฆPlease, I-he-please!", she requested frantically again.
"Riddhima-"
"PLEASE! I swear he'll be okay! He promised me, PLEASE!"
"HE IS GODDAMIT DEAD RIDDHIMA! DEAD!"
 
That hit the nail at the point. She could feel her knees wobbling as she brought her hands to her hair. Her senses felt numb with shock as his body was carried out. Feeling something wet in her hands, she brought them in front of her face to see it dripping with blood, the same red blood colour that had stained her clothes.  Her vision was blurring, and finally when she heard a distant cry, she felt herself hitting the cold floor.
 
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Comment karo, bhaiyo, aur meri saari beheno๐Ÿ˜†
Love,
Maitree <3

..Maitree.. thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
No one's online SIGHHH ๐Ÿค”
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Posted: 11 years ago
*Res
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OMG! :O That can't be Armaan, nooo! Please that can't be Armaan, I so wish that it ain't him :( But still who died? :O OMG! I am very curious to know, please update soon before I die with curiosity ๐Ÿ˜› Please please update soon and the preview was amazingly written, liked the way it was described :D Keep up the great work di :) Thank you for the pm :D 

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YAYYY I am the first one to comment ๐Ÿ˜†
Edited by ArOrAMeHaK - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I will kill you if the guy in the preview is Armaan ๐Ÿ˜ณ And if he's actually dead ๐Ÿ˜ณ

And he better not be Sid either :P

xoxo

P.S - Get well soon ๐Ÿค—
Edited by Aanya. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nooo.. It can't be Armaan and not Sid either!! I hope this turns out to be a dream or something!! My heart has started beating faster than What it should reading this preview.. Please please please don't kill Armaan.. ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Wait i should say anyone close to and dear to Riddhima!! She'll be broken completely. Don't make it hard for her. She already has a lot of problems in front of her, god knows what will happen if something like this will happen to her. ๐Ÿ˜’
Just try making it a dream somehow!! Please please please...

Continue soon!! Can't wait to see who this is actually and What exactly happens next!! ๐Ÿ˜ŠEdited by Die_hardfan_KSG - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
grt preview..
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great preview. Waiting to read more and thanks for the pm