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seven years from now- last part (Page 9)

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Posted: 12 April 2006 at 5:10am | IP Logged
hey its too good.cont and also write sumthing btw tia and ranny.i cant wait for their meet.

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Originally posted by kutie

hey its too good.cont and also write sumthing btw tia and ranny.i cant wait for their meet.

ditto

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Posted: 12 April 2006 at 9:12pm | IP Logged
here's the next part:

PART 6

on the morning of the engagement ceremony of pri and aseem:
the situation was of utter chaos . the guests had started arriving and were staying in the rooms booked in the resort .
since the friends had not seen each other since a long time, seeing them was a total tamasha. people were dancing, some were laughing and some were even crying.

at the breakfast room in the resort, pri, meher , aseem , and aman, they were waiting for the others to come.pri and meher were talking about make-up.

aman:aseem tum bahu lucky ho jo pri itni jaldi maan gayi tumse shaadi karne ke liye. mujhe to bade papad belne pade the.
aseem:haan, pri told me dat you and vrinda liked each other since you met in maurya. yours is like the ultimate love story come true.these you hardly find couples who love each other so much.
aman:actually assem ours wasn't quite the ultimate love story. the ultimate love story was of tia and ranveer. it's sad that they broke up or else they would have been the first amongst us to get married.they were the desi version of romeo and juliet.
aseem:wow.it's so amazing but it's also very sad . why did they break-off if they loved each other so much?
aman: a very big misunderstanding . i don't know exactly why they broke-up as i wasn't there. you can ask your darling wife to be.she was tia 's angel she must be knowing.
meher:oh! you guyz why bring such a topic up at a happy moment.
aseem: tell us na plz.
pri: well if you want to know, tia and ranveer broke -up because ranveer wasnted so. he had called her up in the shed and there was a letter from him to tia in which ranveer wrote that he didn't want to continue this relationship b'coz tisa didn't trust him.
aman:this can't be true pri. b'coz ranveer had called me up the same day he was crying .he told me dat he was very upset and didn't want to live as tia had ended their relationship. he was very upset and was crying like baby. i was finding it very difficult to console him as in matters relating to tia he is very sensitive.
meher:nice story aman. if it is true then why did ranveer get engaged to shyla?
aman: what? this an't be true. ranveer never got engaged to shyla.
pri: yes he did . shy had herself called tia to invite her to the engagement ceremony.
aseem:people stop fighting. i feel there's a huge misunderstanding. it can be easily cleared out. ranveer's here. look at his left ring finger if he is engaged, then he'll have a ring or else he won't.
meher, pri and aman(together):fine.
ranveer:hi aseem. congrats banna.congrats pri.
aseem:thanx. glad you came.
aman:hi ranveer. yaar you look really very tired. why?
pri:hi ranveer. how are you?
meher:ranveer, how is your family,? and what was the last caseyou had? i must say your profession is not for the casual people.
ranveer(smiling): ek ek karke pucchiye. mere paas sirf do hi kaan hai aur ek hi mooh.aseem hume ana hi tha kyunki pri hamari bahut special friend hai aur hum inki shaadi miss nahi kar sakte.aman i am tired b'coz i had to do an operation for 8 hours at a stretch. this baby 4 dys old had a hole in the heart.meher, my family is fine.
pri; ranveer. you are tired. go freshen up. yuor room is no. 67 next to aman& vrinda's.here's the key.
ranveer. thanx(then he leaves)
[after ranveer's gone.]
aman:pri dekha uske haath mein koiring nahi thi. matlab uski engagement nahi hui hai.
pri:haan, iska matlab ki
meher: ki shy ne tia se jhooth bola taki tia ranveer ko hate kare.
meher: iska matlab ye hai ki raghu ne bhi is situation ka fayeda uthaya.
aseem: it can only be possible if shyla and raghu were working together. if it is true then something must be done to bringranveer and tia back together. they don't deserve tobe separate.
pri: right. we must help them.
aman: and we have ample timeas we have your wedding, then maurya's 100yrs celebration .
meher: they can't stay away from each other when so near. thank god dat shy and raghu aren't invited to the wedding.
aseem: so is it a deal to bring the desi romeo-julet back together, they maybe like romeo and juliet but their story will have a better endng.
aman: yes and the ending would be dat they get married, have laods of children and live happily ever after.
pri: we agree with you. and everybody will be included in this plan except the two of them ofcourse.
meher: right . and the first step will be to give tia the room besides ranveer. here she comes.


i don't know if it's good or not . plz do tell me.
sagarika






Edited by ranv_rules - 11 July 2006 at 3:16am
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Posted: 12 April 2006 at 9:17pm | IP Logged
here's the next part:

on the morning of the engagement ceremony of pri and aseem:
the situation was of utter chaos . the guests had started arriving and were staying in the rooms booked in the resort .
since the friends had not seen each other since a long time, seeing them was a total tamasha. people were dancing, some were laughing and some were even crying.

at the breakfast room in the resort, pri, meher , aseem , and aman, they were waiting for the others to come.pri and meher were talking about make-up.

aman:aseem tum bahu lucky ho jo pri itni jaldi maan gayi tumse shaadi karne ke liye. mujhe to bade papad belne pade the.
aseem:haan, pri told me dat you and vrinda liked each other since you met in maurya. yours is like the ultimate love story come true.these you hardly find couples who love each other so much.
aman:actually aseem ours wasn't quite the ultimate love story. the ultimate love story was of tia and ranveer. it's sad that they broke up or else they would have been the first amongst us to get married.they were the desi version of romeo and juliet.
aseem:wow.it's so amazing but it's also very sad . why did they break-off if they loved each other so much?
aman: a very big misunderstanding . i don't know exactly why they broke-up as i wasn't there. you can ask your darling wife to be.she was tia 's angel she must be knowing.
meher:oh! you guyz why bring such a topic up at a happy moment.
aseem: tell us na plz.
pri: well if you want to know, tia and ranveer broke -up because ranveer wasnted so. he had called her up in the shed and there was a letter from him to tia in which ranveer wrote that he didn't want to continue this relationship b'coz tisa didn't trust him.
aman:this can't be true pri. b'coz ranveer had called me up the same day he was crying .he told me dat he was very upset and didn't want to live as tia had ended their relationship. he was very upset and was crying like baby. i was finding it very difficult to console him as in matters relating to tia he is very sensitive.
meher:nice story aman. if it is true then why did ranveer get engaged to shyla?
aman: what? this an't be true. ranveer never got engaged to shyla.
pri: yes he did . shy had herself called tia to invite her to the engagement ceremony.
aseem:people stop fighting. i feel there's a huge misunderstanding. it can be easily cleared out. ranveer's here. look at his left ring finger if he is engaged, then he'll have a ring or else he won't.
meher, pri and aman(together):fine.
ranveer:hi aseem. congrats banna.congrats pri.
aseem:thanx. glad you came.
aman:hi ranveer. yaar you look really very tired. why?
pri:hi ranveer. how are you?
meher:ranveer, how is your family,? and what was the last caseyou had? i must say your profession is not for the casual people.
ranveer(smiling): ek ek karke pucchiye. mere paas sirf do hi kaan hai aur ek hi mooh.aseem hume ana hi tha kyunki pri hamari bahut special friend hai aur hum inki shaadi miss nahi kar sakte.aman i am tired b'coz i had to do an operation for 8 hours at a stretch. this baby 4 days old had a hole in the heart.meher, my family is fine.
pri; ranveer. you are tired. go freshen up. yuor room is no. 67 next to aman& vrinda's.here's the key.
ranveer. thanx(then he leaves)
[after ranveer's gone.]
aman:pri dekha uske haath mein koiring nahi thi. matlab uski engagement nahi hui hai.
pri:haan, iska matlab ki
meher: ki shy ne tia se jhooth bola taki tia ranveer ko hate kare.
meher: iska matlab ye hai ki raghu ne bhi is situation ka fayeda uthaya.
aseem: it can only be possible if shyla and raghu were working together. if it is true then something must be done to bring ranveer and tia back together. they don't deserve tobe separate.
pri: right. we must help them.
aman: and we have ample timeas we have your wedding, then maurya's 100yrs celebration.
meher: they can't stay away from each other when so near. thank god dat shy and raghu aren't invited to the wedding.
aseem: so is it a deal to bring the desi romeo-julet back together, they may be like romeo and juliet but their story will have a better endng.
aman: yes and the ending would be dat they get married, have laods of children and live happily ever after.
pri: we agree with you. and everybody will be included in this plan except the two of them ofcourse.
meher: right . and the first step will be to give tia the room besides ranveer. here she comes.


i don't know if it's good or not . plz do tell me.
sagarika




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Posted: 12 April 2006 at 9:32pm | IP Logged
its awesome sagarika Clap but pls let ranveer nd tia meet fast Embarrassed Embarrassed the excite ment is killing me Big smile
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Posted: 12 April 2006 at 9:39pm | IP Logged
OMG OMG OMG its AWESOME yaar!!!!!   this is so exciting Embarrassed   plsssssssss cont faaaaast Big smile   and ya write some reeeeeeeally romantic parts bet tia and ranveer. Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed
this is so sweet Clap
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Posted: 12 April 2006 at 10:22pm | IP Logged
hey sagarika...u r damn good yaar..go on...its goin gr8..do continue plzz Big smile Thumbs Up
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Posted: 12 April 2006 at 10:59pm | IP Logged
the best word id...EXCELLENT..no maybe even AWESOME....or we can even say...BEST
In all its rckin!
PLEASE CONTINUE ASAP!(i read all ur parts 2gether...and im so happy hat tia comes to knoe the truth bout shy n raghu)i hope it happens even in remix...AND THAT TO FAST! Tongue

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