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PART 29

Several days passed and the love birds were not able to meet each other. Both Ashi and Tia were very angry as Ranveer had promised he would come with Yuvi to meet them. It was the night before the D- Day. Ashi and Tia had come to stay at AHUJA MANSION for the wedding. they were staying in one room.

Everybody had gone to sleep suddenly Tia heard as if someone was calling her
TIA TIA Shhh ...... Yuvi lagta hai sab so rahe hain. Tia felt that Ranveer had come to meet her in her dreams if not in reality. suddenly a stone was thrown which landed in the balcony. Surely Tia wouldn't imagine ppl throwing stones in her dreams sooo she wasn't dreaming someone must have thrown a stone. She got up and went to the balcony and saw................ Ranveer  and  Yuvi. so she wasn't dreaming, they had climbed up to the balcony with the help pf the pipes. She quickly went and waked Ashi up and slowly and silently the four went outside the house unheard by anybody or probably they were heard by ppl but decided against disturbing the lovers on their night out.



Ranveer took Tia to a dserted park and Yuvi took Ashi to a different one.

R: Tia aap humse naraz to nahi hai ki hum aap se itne din milne nahi aaye.

T: woh Tia thoda upset thi par Tia ko realise hua ki tum humari shaddi ki preparations mein busy ho toh phir Tia upset nahi thi.

R: haan Tia aur vaise bhi yeh dooriyan humein humare suhagrat par aur kareeb layengi. kal ki raat humari raat hogi bas hum aur humari Tia dono akele ek saath , lights off

T: ranveer ( hits him shyly)

R: arre Tia aap sharmagayi. accha thik hai aaj sharma lijiye kal magar yeh sab nahi chalega. aap humare doodh leke aayengi, hum kamre mein ghusenge darvaza band karenge , aap ka ghunghat uthayenge..

T: bas Ranveer Tia ko sharam aati hai ( hides her facein ranveer's shirt)

R: humse kya sharam tia . aur agar aap aise sharmayengi to humara gift kaise dengi.

T: kaunsa gift?

R: ek saal mein ek choti si Tia sisodia.

Tia now hid her face even more. asthe moonlight fell on her face Ranveer saw how pretty she was he slowly removed the hair that fell on her face and slowly kissed her cheeks. It was dark but had it been daylight he could have seen the effect his touch had on Tia, her eyes closed cheeks burning pink.slowly he moved frm Tiaz neck , to her cheeks and then to her lips. the feel of his lips on hers drove her senseless and sent shivers down her body.


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on the other hand the two lovers were more vocal of their feelings and iin between when words failed them , expressed their feelings with gentle kisses. Yuvi and Ashi were never those out of the book romantic lovers, they were different. They fought with each other even on petty issues but that was how they had first expressed their feelings actually fights were what had brought them 2gether.

Ashi andYuvi never let ppl now abt their feelings for them feelings were personal , very personal. Public display of affection was rare , very rare.

soon it was time to leave. Yuvi and ashi picked Ranveer and Tia up and silently without saying a word , just holding hands they went home letting their eyes do the talking and just appreciating the feeling of being together on the night before their marriage.




Edited by ranv_rules - 17 July 2006 at 7:05am
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too good Sagarika Clap

continue soon

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part 29 posted.

last part will b posted whenever i hv time.

do comment

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It is superb, Its too good, continue soon.... Clap
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You are too good man
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue the last part soon .
It's really sad that you are ending your fic
It was really nice.
Why don't you continue with their life after marriage????
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ranny n tia getting naughty n all....cute Embarrassed
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its awesomeeeeeeeeeeee,plzzzzzzz cont soooooooon.

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