seven years from now- last part (Page 5)

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Sorry for the delay. I was not at home and therefore had no access to the net.anyways here's the next part


she saw ... Raghu .But tia couldn't understand why he was here in India as he wasn't invited to the wedding . then she saw why he was here ...... Shyla. but why was he talking to shy , she always thought that he hated her. she crept slowly to a place near them so that she could hear their conversation without being seen.
shyla: vo-oh! Raghu how r u? and how is ur tia darling? poor babes she thought that i and ranveer were actually engaged. she must have felt pathetic and shattered. even you are quite a dude man ,you kidnapped ranveer and put the bag on ranveer's bed. smashing. atleastnow i can be relieved that they hate each other.
Raghu: arre tumhe pata nahi ki deevaron ke bhi kaan hote hain. tum hamara plan aise openly mat bolo. kisi na sun liya to?
Shyla: ok. ok.

after tia heard this conversation, she realised how big an error she had committed. she had hurt Ranveer, of all the people ranveer. he who loved her unconditionally, he who had saved her from arjun. how could she? she felt pathetic. but she had to act carefully now. she could not confront them, they could easily outsmart her. yes, she could speak to ranveer. he would definitely understand. but what if he didn't ? she would try anyway.
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at the indraprastha apollo hospital, a delicate operation was being done. a new-born child was being operated on 4 a hole in the heart. the operation was being dine bynone other than Dr.Ranveer Sisodia, a famous carcio-surgeon who specialised in shild operations.

ranveer: songratulations the operation is successful. your daughter is now out of danger.shukra hai aap isse jaldi le aaye varna aapko yeh operation kisi aur se karvana padta.
patient's father: lekin kyon doctor saab?
r:kyunki mujhe aaj hi goa ke liye nikalna hoga . kal mere dost ki shaadi hai. waise to mein kabhi bhi apne kaam ko compromise nahi karta magar, yeh occassion bahut special hai.
pf:lagta hai dil ka mamla hai.
(then ranveer starts blushing givin the evidence to the patient's father that he was right.)
r: accha mujhe ab nikalna hoga varna flight miss ho jayegi.aapki beti ko hum 48 hrs. under observation rakhenge. us ke baad aap ek baar hospital ke doosre dr. se uska checkup karva lijiyega.


ranveer then drives home in his black S-class mercedes and remembers how hard it was for him to work through shool and college so that he could pay the he is a doctor and the owner of the famous company "tiawi pharmaceuticals".he had everything he wanted except -tia. he looked at the photo of the salsa dance at sid's party and smiled sadly.

At home:
Ranveer opens the door with the duplicate key as he didn't want to wake vasu and his mother up as it was only 5 in the morning.
he goes inside to see that his mother is waiting 4 him as usual.
R: ma, aapko uthne ki kya zaroorat thi. mere paas chaabi thi na.
M: beta abhi tune shaadi to ki nahi hai jo mein soti rahoon aur teri biwi tere aane ka intezaar karti rahe.
R: ma waise bhi shaadi karne ke liye ek dulhan ki zaroorat hoti hai, jo mere paas hai nahi.
M: kyun nahi hai? tere liye to kitne rishte aate hai, par tujhe to koi pasand hi nahi aati.
R: ma baaat pasand ki nahihai baat pyaar ki hai. aur mein inme kisi ko bhi pyaar nahi karta hoon. kher ma mujhe flkight ke liye der ho rahi hai. aap mera saman le aaiya tab tak me tayaar ho jata hoon.
M(thinking):ye kab apni dil ki baat bolna sikhega.

ranveer then leaves 4 the airport

Edited by ranv_rules - 11 July 2006 at 3:12am

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wow nice part keep it up and ab itni delay mat karna continue asa Clap
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amzing .........
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Clap so sweet Smile
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wow awsome Clap
keep p d good work

c c c c what i said Wink
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Clap Clap Clap i can actualy imagine ranveer as a dr Big smile Big smile Big smile
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