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PART 25

All four where sitting on the roof when they spot none other than - Shyla and Raghu. Both join the four uninvited . While Shyla was trying to climb up she falls and is saved by her prince in armour - Raghu.Finally both manage to climb up and disturb the love birds.

Shyla: voh- oh hi everyone kaise ho tum sab?

Yuvi( to ashi) : tumhare aane se pehle tak to thik the ab pata nahi shayad tabiyat kharab ho jaye.

ashi : yaa right raat ko aakar miss glliter face ne hum jaise chote bachchon ko dara diya.

yuvi: seriously shy is one mobile make up kit. ab dekhna kuch to ulta sidha zaroor bolegi tia ko insult karne ke liye.

Ashi: par yeh aaj apni insult karvaye bina nahi jayegi. done

yuvi: done.


Ranveer: hum sab thik hai shy.

Tia: vaise shy tumne humari engagement par congratulate nahi kiya.Evil Smile

Shy: congrats . by the way raghu tumhe nahi lagta ki tia aur ranvir ki jodi thodi ajeeb si hai? i mean ranvir itna serious aur tia itni immature, childish?Dead

Ranveer ( gets angryAngry . nobody gets away wid insulting his tiaEmbarrassedBig smile): shy aisa ho sakta hai ki hum aur Tia ek doosre se bahut alag ho, par opposites attract don't they?

Ashi:right thakur aur shy tum  apna case hi consider karo tum itna make up lagati ho, false accent jhadti ho false polite behaviour.

Yuvi : par bhau (referring to raghu) make up nahi lagate. inhe english aati nahi toh accent ki baat hi nahi aati. woh false politeness nahi show karte apna cheap aur disgusting behaviour khule aam sab ke samne rakh dete hain. kyun ho na tum opposites but still meant for each other.

Ashi: tumhare aur raghu ki tarah hi ranveer tia ek dusare ko bahut chahte hai. vaise to kaafi logon ne unhe alag karne ki koshish ki thi par nahi kar paye.

tia is very happy and looks at ranveer with eyes full of tears and thanks all her friends for taking her side.

Tia: shy aur raghu tia tum dono ko tia - ranveer, cum ashi - yuvi ki wedding ppe invite karti hai. par ek shart hai tum log apni shaadi par, ranveera and tia sisodia , yuvraj and anvesha dev ko zaroor bulayoge. ( stressing on the words sisodia and dez to lay xtra emphasis on the love the couples had for each other.)




Edited by ranv_rules - 11 July 2006 at 4:54am
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sagrika i can't see anything written after part 25..
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sorry i updated the post
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srry kutie actually i was writing the part but i clicked the icon post reply intead of enter. but now i hv updated the post.

part 25 posted
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wow sagrika..and thanx a lot for cont with ur fic..plzzz cont soon..
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thnx kutie. am writing the next part rite now.

btw gies on the first page of this topic i hv written which part is on which page.

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PART 26

sum info for dis part. Sonia and Sumeet are married. Vipul doesn't exist coz in my fic he never did. Ranny is staying wid Yuvi (yuviz house) and ashi wid tia( tiaz place) as last dey returned late frm the party nd didn't want 2 disturb their parents.


The next day.
At Tiaz House.

Tia gets up first and has taken a bath. Today dey have go to her dad's house as there has to be an imp announcement and ashi still hasn't woken up. Tia has been trying to wake her up since the past half an hour.

Tia: ashi utho aa. plz punk utho naa. pappa ka phone aaya tha ghar jana hai. oh tiaz god plzz is punk ko neend se utha do.
Ashi dekho yuvi aaya hai. woh tumhe bula raha hain jaldi utho.

ab now ashi simply has to get up coz yuvi ka naam sunte hi uske body ki saari laziness chali jaati hai.

ashi:yuvi? itni subah ? timblet tum usse kaise bhi karke bahar roko main fresh hokar abhi aayi.

Tia: ok miss ex - punk. (ashi is an actress so shez nt apunk nemore)

ashi goes and quickly gets freshened up. she wears a light pink and turquoise saari gifted to her by yuvi. and mind u she luks damn good.

ashi:kaisi lag rahi hoon?

at dis point tia simply couldn't control her laughter ashi doesnt understand what the matter is and thinks dat she has dressed in animprper manner.

ashi: kya hua? dress main koi kharabi hai? main acchi nahi lag rahi kya?

Tia:nahi dress main koi kharabi nahi hai aur tum smashing lag rahi ho

ashi:phir

Tia: ( still laughing bt speaking while laughing)woh... actually.... yuvi..... nahi aaya hai. pappa ne hume ghar pe ek imp..... announcement ke liye bulaya hai..... aur tum uth nahi rahi thi...... to tia ko jhooth bolna pada aur dekho tum uth kya taiyaar bhi ho gayi.......

Ashi: you timbo ( she looks at tia wid eyes of pretend anger but when she thinks of the situation she blushes)

Tia: oh tiaz  god uv ne ashi par kya jadoo kar diya hai ab woh blush bhi karti hai. par tum to kehti thi ki sharmana tia ka kaam hai phir tum hmm.... batao.... ashi.. plzz.

Ashi : shut up timbo aur chalo ghar chalte hain. dad w8 kar rahe honge.

Tia: ok tia ab tumhe tease nahi karegi.

then they leave for AHUJA MANSION.
............................................................ ......................................

AT YUVIZ HOUSE

Ranveer is already ready and waiting in the car for yuvi and thinking abt TIA.

he doesnt get to noe when yuvi cums and sits in the car as he is lost in his own world.

Yuvi: ranveer wake up ranveer bahar aao apni duniya se. cum back to reality dude.
HOPELESS ! Dude dekho Tia

Ranveer:  hhn ........Tia... kahan banna ?

Yuvi: tumhare dreams mein , tumhare life mein, tumhere wallet mein aur tumhare dil mein bhi. har jaga Tia. jahan Ranveer vahan Tia.

R( blushing) : nahi.. hum ..to.. bas ..

Y: its okay dude chalo humare sasur ji ka bulava aaya hai.

R: hone vaale

Y: ek hi baat hai. AHUJA MANSION HERE WE CUM.

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Edited by ranv_rules - 11 July 2006 at 5:52am

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