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seven years from now- last part (Page 38)

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Posted: 04 June 2006 at 2:14am | IP Logged
its was awesome, superb,Clap

Ashi denying tht she dosent Luv Yuvi Cry awww...

anyways it was really nice, i dont belive it i didnt read it b4 Cry Ouch

but anyways, dun take long dis time n continue soon

Divya

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guyz will b posting the nxt part at around 4.
the part will b ay part as dey need 2 patch up.

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aww. cho sweet

do continue soon........ plzzz
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wow plz continue fast with sweet romantic scenes b/w ashi n yuvi Smile
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PART 18

Ashi goes outside and waits for the car.
ashi being ashi avoids thinking about yuvi but that was very difficult for her. she couldn't help thinking about him.

A:ashi tumhe kya hogaya hai tum uv ke bare mein kyuun soch rahi ho.jab voh tumhare bare mein care nahi karta to tum kyun kar rahi ho?

ASHI STOP THINKING ABOUT YUVI.

soniya ray who was watching ashi from the verandah hears ashi when she scolds herself for thinking about uv.
being a parent she was obviously worried about her daughter's behaviour.

S:pata nahi mumum aise kyun behave kar rahi hai. voh uv ko like karti hai par yeh kehti kyun nahi hai?
kuch to baat zaroor hai. kya karoon ?tia se poochti hoon, usse zaroor pata hoga.

she calls up tia who was at ranny's place watching a movie with vasu and ranveer.just when vasu wwent to the washroom and she got to spend some time with ranveer, her cell rang.

R:ab kaun hai? logon ko kaise pata chal jaata hai ki hum akele hai aur thoda romance ka mood hai? hamesha disturb kar dete hai.

T:sonia aunty hai.zaroor koi imp baat hogi varna voh phone nahi karti.

(phone)T:hello aunty aap kaisi hai?
S:main thik hoon beta tum aur ranveer kaise ho?
T:aunty Tia is fine par ranveer is not so fine.(he was pretty angry at sonia aunty as he knew that it was going to b a long call)
s:kyun kya hua usse?
t:kuch nahi aunty. aap batayi aapne tia ko kisliye call kiya?
S:voh mumum ke baare mein baat karni thi.
T:ashi ko kya hua hai?
S:pata nahi.jabse pri ki weddind se vaapas aayi hai, chup chap ho gayi hai. roz voh yuvi ke saath bahar jaati hai.jaate vaqt to thik hoti hai magar jab aati hai toh bahut sad hoti hai.
mujhe laga ki shayad yuvi ke kuch na kehnepe upset hoti hai magar voh kehti hai ki voh yuvike liye kuch feel nahi karti.Tia tum batao main kya karoon. main mumum ko lekar bahut worried hoon.
T:aunty Tia ko pata nahi ki ashi ko kya hua hai par tia thinks ki zaroot uv se related hai.tia ashi se baatkaregi ya ranveer kar lega ashi usse sab kuch batati hai.
s:ok thank u. bye tc
T:bye aunty.
(call ended)

R: Tia kya keh rahi thi aunty?
(she tells him everything that sr told her.)
R:hum ashi se baat karte hai.
(calls up ashi)
R:hello ashi ap kahan hai?hume aapse baat karni hai.
A:main gaadi mein hoon.yuvi ke saath bahr ja rahi hoon.
R:accha. badiya hai. yuvi aur aap kya baat hai.
A:thakur aisa kuch nahi hai.
R:ab aap humse to mat chupahiye. aap kaafi pareshan lag rahi hai kya hua?
A:thakur kyunmain tumse kuch chupa nahi paati.tumhe kaise pata chalta hai ki main pset hoon.
R:hum aapke dost hai ashi aur dost hi doston ke baaren mein sochte hai.
A:voh actually main uv ki vajah se upset hoon
R:hume laga hi tha
A:thakur tum meri help karoge ki nahi
R:accha ashi bataye kya hua
A:kuch nahi bas uv . roz bahar jaate hai. roz mujhe lagta hai ki voh apni feelings xpress karega par nahi voh to duniya ka sabse bada loser hai.mujhe lagta hai ki voh kuch feel nahi karta bas dikhata hai ki voh mujhe like karta hai.
R:ashi voh aapko like nahi love karte hai.
A:phir voh kyun nahi kehta
R:sabra rakhiye ashi shayad aaj hi kehde u never noe
A:tumse baat karke i feel so gud.thanx 4 being my frnd
R:frnd kehti hai aur thanx bhi kehti hai
A:im srry. ok abhi bye koi call a raha hai.
R:bye
(call ended)

R:ashi bhi naa
(just then Tia's cell rings)
R:ab kaun hai
T:yuvi
R:yeh dono ek doosre ko kuch nahi kahenge hume disturb karte rahenge.


Edited by ranv_rules - 11 July 2006 at 3:34am
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Posted: 05 June 2006 at 8:04am | IP Logged
its soo sweet,Clap

plzzzzzzzzz AY ka bhi patch up kara do naah Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

n continue soonnnnnn

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grt..awesom...
plz cont soon.
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so sweet...but wish they didnt disturb tia ranny when they were getting romantic Embarrassed

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