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seven years from now- last part (Page 37)

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PART 17

in mumbai

ashi was at her mother's place.she was there since she had returned from pri's wedding and was getting bored of her mum.

S:mumum batao na tia aur ranveer ke patch up ke baare mein i mean yeh hua kaise?

A:mumma aap yeh sawal mujhse pachas baar pooch chuki hai aur maine sau baar javab diya hai.

s:shona main kya karoon mujhe toh believe hi nahi ho raha.accha woh log shaadi kab kar rahe hai?

A:kya pata mumma. abhi woh log delhi mein hai. jab vaapas aayenge to apne savaalon ki baarish unpar kar dena.atleast usse bombay mein floods nahi aayenge aur main bhi bore nahi hongi.

S:mumum.please.bas ek question aur.

A:mumma isse pehle ki aap kuch aur pooche main aapko bata doon ki main bahar ja rahi hoon.aap tia ko phone karke pooch lijiye.

S:main to bas yuvi ke baare mein pooch ne vaali thi.

a:ab kya mumma

s:bas yehi ki tum dono ke beecmein kya hai.tum roz usse baat kari ho. milne jaati ho. abhi bhi uske saat hi ja rahi hogi. kya scene hai?

A:mumma koi scene nahi hai.uv mera bas dost hai aur main bas usse .. usse..

S:usse pyaar karti hoon.

A:nahi mumma aisi koi baat nahi hai.

S:accha to ab apni ma se jhooth bhi bologi.agar woh dost hai toh tumhare gaal pink kyun ho rahe hain aur tum raat ko neend mein uska naam kyun leti ho?

a:hey bhaggu neend mein main usko gaali deti hoon aur aapko laga ki...

s:yeh pyaar nahi to kya hai uske phone ka intezaar karna. papre par uska naam likhna phir phad dena taki mein dekh na loon.yeh kya hai?kaunsi feeling hai ?

a:mumma i don't gt u. yeh pyaar vyaar mere bas ki bat nahi hai.buh bye mom.aate aate der ho jayegi.

she then leaves and shuts the door behind her.

a:srry mom. aapse jhooth bola. main uv se bahut pyaar karti hoon.par voh kya feel karta hai nahi pata.uv tum kyun nahi batate ki tumharedil mein kya hai.kyun?

s(inside the house):mumum tum kitna bhi deny karo par mujhe pata hai ki tum uv ko bahut chahti ho.tum apni mom se jhooth nahi bol sakti.




Edited by ranv_rules - 11 July 2006 at 3:32am

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part 17 posted. plz comment. Embarrassed

Edited by ranv_rules - 11 July 2006 at 3:32am
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Clap very nice
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