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Y:thank you very much Tia ab mujhe pata hai ki ashi ko kahan le jana hai.
Ashi ab jaldi aa jao aur intezaar nahi hota.(he was waiting for ashi at a cafe' coffee day outlet ashi was suppoosed to come there. just then a car arrives and ashi comes out of it.)
A:hi yuvi.yuvi tum bahut handsome lag rahe ho kash ki tum aaj mujhseitne door nahin hote. om ashi yeh tum kya soch rahi ho? yuviko samne dekh tum aisi wierd kyun feel karti ho. yeh sab to timbo ka department hai.
Y:hi ashi. ashi aaj tum xceptionally beautiful lag rahi ho.yeh dress tum par bahut acchi lag rahi hai.
A:hey yuvi kuch bologe bhi ya mujhe yshsn pe silence silence khelne bulaya hai?
Y:ashi tum kitna bhi apni feelings ko deny karo main janta hoon ki tum mere bare mein hi soch rahe ho. ashi chalo kahin aur chalte hai.
A:magar kahan?
Y:tum chalo to main lekar ja raha hoon na.u trust me naa? (the tone was tthough of a typical u luv me naa sentence. ashi nods her head and follows him.they go to yuvi's car.)
A:mere paas gadi hai.
Y:main aaj tumhe le ja raha hoon na. to tum vohi karogi jo main kehta hoon.(he then blindfolds her)
A:yuvi lekin yeh tum kya kar rahe ho?
Y(puts a finger on her lips):sshhh
(he then drives the car and stops it at a place.he takes ashi out of the car who is still blindfolded than he holds ashi's hand and leads her to a place. then he finally unties the cloth which blind folded her)
A:yuvi yeh to vohi park hai jahan hum...........
Y:haan yeh vohi park hai jahan hum saat saal pehle aaye the jab hum date kar rahe the.
A:magar tum mujhe yahan kyunlekar aaye ho
Y:ashi tum itni si baat bhi nahi samajhti.main tumhe of all the places yahan kyun lekar aaya? itne saalon se main tumhe kya kene ki koshish kar raha hoon tumhe kuch samajh nahi aata? tumhara brain itna weak hai?ashi don't be so insensitive.

(ashi could feel her heart beating way faster than its normal speed.she could feel her cheeks burning.she did not have the courage to speak.she closes her eyes.)

Y:ashi will you marry me?
(ashi opens her eyes to see that yuvi was down on his knees and had a ring in his hand)
Y:bolo ashi ab mujhse tumhara silence dekha nahi jata.batao will you marry me?

Ashi was unable to see anything thewords just weren't coming out of her mouth. she just nods her head to show her consent.

yuvi's reaction at this was totally hilarious. he jumped in glee. this was what he had always wanted and finally it came true.he couldn't believe it. he slipped the ring into ashi's left hand's ring finger.
ashi too couldn't believe it. yuvi had finally proposed to her.she was blushing and had tears in her eyes.

Y:omg ashi tum ek lady ki tarah behave kar rahi ho. u r blushing. my anvesha is blushing omg ashi im so happy tumne mujhe accept kiya.
A:yuvi plz kuch mat bolo.i want to njoy this day.
Y:thik hai madam hum kahin bahar ek romantic dinner ke liye jayenge. par pehle tia aur ranveer ko bata de. unko jane ka haq hai.
A:haan unki vajah se hum aaj ek saath hai.

the delighted couple then call up tia and ranveer who also are obviously very happy for their friends.

Edited by ranv_rules - 11 July 2006 at 3:38am
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awww. ............... cho cute Embarrassed

really nice

post the next part ASAP plzzzzzzzzzz

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its very nice pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz post the next part asap with tia ranveers part pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz and continue soon.
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