seven years from now- last part (Page 28)

ranv_rules Senior Member

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Posted: 23 May 2006 at 6:20am | IP Logged
guyz since i'm nt at home but u guyz asked me 2 post the nxt part i'll post a very small part:


Ranveer:kya hua ma?

Mother:vahin ruk jao ek kadam bhi andar mat rakhna.
(ranveer nd tia look at each other. Tia looks a bit nervous but smiles for ranveer's sake)

M:arre aise kyun muh latka rahe ho ranver. ghar ki bahu ko pehli baar la rahe ho aise tjodi andar anedoongi pehle aarti to utar loon.(aarti utar ti hai)andar aao.

Ranveer:nahi ma woh to hum bas.

Mom:thik hai ranveer hum sab samajh te hai tumahri ma hai. humse tum kuch chuupa nahi sakte.ab tum dono fresh ho jao.vasu tum tia ko unka kamra dikha do.

Ranveer:ma hum tia ko unke room tak le jate hai.

(can't let his darling go away frm him for even a second)

vasu:bhai ap hum par bharosa kre hum bhabhi ko pareshan nahi karenge sach.

ranveer nd tia:KYA!

vasu:kya hua aap dono aise kyun chikhein. bhabhi ab jab apki bhai se shaaadi hone wali hai to aap humari bhabhi hui na?to kya hum aapko bhabhi bula sakte hai?

ranveer:vasu aap bahut bigad gayi hai.(blushy-blushy)
hum nahi jante the ki humari vasu itni samajh dar ho gayi hai.

tia:ranveer jaane bhi dona bacchi hai. vasu tum tia ko bhabhi bula sakti ho.
ranveer tum nahi jaante tia ko mrs sisodia kehlane mein kitna proud feel hoga

ranveer:tia aap abhi se humari behen ko bigad rahi hai.

tia:hello camel tia bhabhi hon akoi aisi waisi baat nahi hai (giggling)

ranveer:chaliye tia hum aapko aapke room tak chod de.

dats it 4 2day. im srry 4 the rubbish part. but i promise to make a gud romantic part the nxt time. do comment on this though

Edited by ranv_rules - 11 July 2006 at 3:26am

kutie IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 23 May 2006 at 6:30am | IP Logged
hey it was too good.
but plz next time make it rpmantic and bigger also.
kutie IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 23 May 2006 at 6:30am | IP Logged
hey it was too good.
but plz next time make it romantic and bigger also.
foresight IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 23 May 2006 at 10:39am | IP Logged
tia bhabhi...soooo sweet

now it has to change to tia sissodia hone koi aisi waise baat nahi... Wink

nice part Clap
nigam_radhika Goldie

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Posted: 23 May 2006 at 4:21pm | IP Logged
it is awesum....cont asap Big smile
nikki_k Senior Member

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Posted: 24 May 2006 at 12:31am | IP Logged

it was very nice Clap Clap
waiting for the next part
mesocool Groupbie

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Posted: 24 May 2006 at 1:07am | IP Logged
ya dis part is also gud

but make d next part a bit more long nd romantic

plz cont. fastttttt
seas_ritu Newbie

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Posted: 24 May 2006 at 11:39am | IP Logged
wow u write vry well this is the 1st time i read ur fic its awesome plz plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue asap.
its wonderful

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