seven years from now- last part (Page 18)

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hi guyz thnxx 4 ur comments. sorry 4 d delay but i was w8ing 4 sumthing good 2 happen in t-r 's lives.nd here's the next part


they were lost in each other's eyes and did not notice that they were being watched...
Ashi and Yuvi were surprised to see Tia and Ranveer like this.they were also happy for them as they had cleared all the misunderstandings.
Ashi: they look so cute together, don't they?
Yuvi:they do. par tumhe in dono ko dekh kar thodi inspiration nahi milti?
Ashi:tum kya keh rahe ho?
Yuvi:tum in dono ko dekhon. yeh bina music ke dance karte hain aur tum ho ki music ke saath bhi dance nahi karna chahti.
Ashi:yuvi kuch zyaada hui mushy- mushy ho rahe ho. aise dialogues thakur ke muhpe ache lagte hai tumhare muhpe nahi.ab plz yahan se chalo, in dono ko akela chod do.

(THE NEXT MORNING yuvi gets up early but ranveer hasn't slept the entire night.all he did was think about the other room ashi was already ready as she had to go for her morning walk. she noticed that tia was taking xtra care and time to dress up today.she knew why and smiled to herself.)

Ashi:tia tumhe nahi lagta ki tum aaj tayaar hone me kuch zyaada hi time le rahi ho. kya baat hai
Tia(going a very dark shade of pink):nahi ashi aisi koi baat nahi hai.
Ashi:it's o.k. tia aise blush karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai.aur haan main walk ke liye jaa rahi hoon tum aaogi
Tia:nahi ashi tia nahi aayegi. tum jao.
Ashi:o.k. bye

(she goes out and meets ranveer who was coming inside the room she shared with tia)

Ashi:thakur tum yahan kya hua kuch kehna tha
Ranveer(who is obviously shocked as he didn't xpect ashi to be there in the room):Ashi aap yahan kaisa.
ashi:kyun ab main apne room main bhi nahi reh sakti hoon kya
ranveer:nahi woh actually yuvi ne kaha ki aap walk pe gayi hai
Ashi:to tum mujhse milne nahi aa rahe the . matlab... ria
Ranveer:nahi ashi

just then tia comes out of the room and yuvi also arrives there.

Yuvi:hi ranveer, hi ashi hello tia
Tia:hello everybody
Yuvi(winks at ashi):tia tum kal dance ke time kahan thi
Ashi:haan aur thakur tum bhi wahan nahi the kyun
Ranveer&tia(look at each other):woh um tia um hum...
Ashi&Yuvi:it's o.k. we know ki tum log vaapas ek couple ho gaye ho. thank god u guyz cleared all your u guyz hv sum fun nd we'll leave.bye

tia and ranveer are surprised.yuvi takes ashi to a park where they sit on a bench.
Ashi:tia aur ranveer ko ek saath dekh kar bahut acha lagta hai.
(yuvi was stroking ashi's hair which once used to be red.he slowly kisses her shoulder and then her neck and as he was going to kiss her lips.)
ashi:yuvi. mujhe ek zaroori kaam yaad aa gaya hai main bas thodi der me aa jaongi
yuvi:o.k. jao but you are very..

guyz i know that this part was boring but i promise that the next part will be comment

Edited by ranv_rules - 11 July 2006 at 3:21am
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Clap   very nice cont soon Big smile

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