seven years from now- last part (Page 16)

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hey sagarika pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz post the next part soon asap.

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hey can't wait plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon
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hey that's nice
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hey guyz here's the nextpart:


tia and ranveer were going towards the party when tia stops him

Tia:ranveer puhleese hum party me kissi ko bhi kuch nahi batayenge.
ranveer:par tia woh sab humare dost hai aur hume khush dekhna chahte hai.
Tia: nahi ranveer hum unhe kal batayenge.
Ranveer:thik hai tia, jaise aapki marzi.

they go back to the paty but not together as a couple.everybody was dancing with their parteners, only tia and ranveerwere left without any partener.both keep standing 4 a long time but the urge to dance with each other is so strong that they go away from the party.

meanwhile yuvi was dancing with ashi and he finds it strange that both tia and ranveer have gone towards the same place even they are not talking to each other.

yuvi: ashi, kya yeh possible hai....
ashi: yuvi tum kya keh rahe ho aur kya possible hai?
yuvi: ashi, tumne notice kiya kya ki tia aur ranveer dono thodi der ke liye party se gaye the, dono jab gaye to bahut sad the par jab vapas aaye to dono ke face pe ek glow sa tha
ashi:toh tumhe lagta hai ki they both are back together
yuvi: possible.ek kaam karte hai dekhte hai ki woh dono kahan gaye hai.
ashi: o.k let's go

on the other side, tia and ranveer meet near the bridge, they can hear the sound of the song, but it is very faint
they both want to dance with each other but are waiting for the other to make the first move. so. they keep on standing, looking at each other with eyes full of love but a hint of awkwardness in them.finally ranveer asks tia if she would like to dance with him and tia most willingly obliges.they both are dancing and the song that is being played in the background(not in the party)is their favourite song, the song that was meant for them only them -dil ki yeh dhadkan.

najaine kaise lagta hai aaise...
tumhara hai intezaar...
dil ki yeh dhadkan....
saason ki sargam...
hai kehne ko bekraar...

they both are so engrossed in each other that they don't know that they are being watched .....

i hope u like this part. plz do reply.


Edited by ranv_rules - 11 July 2006 at 3:20am
sweta2005 IF-Sizzlerz

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its very nice do continue fast asap and pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do not take much time this time.
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its nice Clap   so at last thier toether hummm????? Embarrassed
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pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue fast asap.

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