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seven years from now- last part (Page 14)

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hey it was great continue na plz fast

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Posted: 16 April 2006 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
its fantastic....cant wait 4 d next part...ie tia n ran's confrontation Big smile
cont asap
n by d way happy new year Big smile
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hi guys. thanx 4 ur replies. neways here's the NEXT PART:

PART 9

By evening everyone knew about shyla and raghu. everybody believed what tia had said ,everybody except ranveer.
At the engagement ceremony, varun, aman, yuvi, sid and ranveer are standing. they all are trying to make ranveer understand that he should forgive tia, but he was adamant. while ranveer is speaking to varun he notices that all of them are staring at something behind him. he turns to see that tia is coming down the stairs in a beautiful red saree along with ashi and meher. ranveer is so amazed, tia was looking exceptionally beautiful. it was impossible to get his eyes off her. the others notice this at take it as a cue to try and persuade him to talk to her once.
aman: ranveer kya hua tum tia ko aise kyun dekh rahe ho?
yuvi: haan dude tumhari ankhon me mujhe tia ke liye pyaar nazar aa raha hai. par shayad tum yeh bhul rahe ho ki tum usse naraz ho.
varun: ranveer , tum jante ho aur sab jante hai ki tia se tum aur tia ek dusre se kitna pyaar kate ho. phir yeh narazgi, gussa kyun?
suddenly ashi arrives there.
ashi: thakur tumne kabhi socha hai ki mrs. tia ranveer sisodia kitna accha lagta hai sunne me. vaise meain to generally pucch rahi thi, kyunki agar tum soch te to kabhi bhi tia se naraz nahi hote.
plz abhi apni narazgi bhul jao, aur ek baar, sirf ek baar tia se baat kar lo.

But ranveer was too busy to listen to what the others were saying.he thought that the name Mrs.Tia Ranveer Sisodia sounded very nice.

after the engagement was over, all the people were standing together near pri and aseem.

Ashi:tia ab to tumhare saare "angels" ki shaadi ya to ho gayi hai ya to hone vaali hai.mujhe lagta hai ki tum jaldi se shaadi kar lo.(she winked at the others and indicated it that the conversation was meant for ranveer)
Aman:haan tia main bhi ashi se agree karta hoon.
All others xcept ranveer:haan tia hum bhi ashi se agree karte hai.
ashi: to ab hume tia ke liye ek dulha dhoodna hoga.
vrinda: haan aur yeh kam saare ladke karenge.
aman: thik hai. kyun ranveer , thik hai na?

ranveer was unable to say anything and went away. the very thought of seeing tia as someone else's wife sounded impossible to him. he knew that he could't take this conversation lightly as ashi usually did whatever she said.

That night ranveer was unable to sleep, he kept thinking all night and finally decided to go and talk to tia the next day.

The next night was pri's wedding night.as usual, all eyes were on tia when she arrived, she was looking stunning and thay all complimented her.

Sid:tia tumm aaj bahut pretty lag rahi ho.
Vrinda: haan sid sab keh rahe hai ki tia bahut pretty lag rahi hai aaj.
Yuvi:tia ko aaj bahut compliments mile honge lekin uske liye sabse bada compliment woh pyaar hai jo usse kisi ki ankhon main dikh raha hai, aur jo us pyaar ko chupane ki bahut koshish kar raha hai lekin chupaya nahi jata.
(ranveer felt his cheecks burning and was blushing like hell)
Ashi:jab feeling itni string hai to pyaar chupega kaise?
Aman:vaise bhi pyaar chupaya nahi jatahai, nibhaya jata hai.

both ranveer and tia were blushing very badly and decide to go away. not known to each other, both go to a bridge and stop when they see the other.they both stay silent and say nothing as secretly wishing that this silence removes the distances between them and brings them back together.

Tia:ranveer..... woh tia tumse... tumhe... vo...plz tia ki baat sunlo kahin mat jao.
Ranveer:tia hum kahin nahi ja rahe , hum yahin hai. aap ko jo kehna hai aap kahiye.vaise bhi hum kisi ko beech raste me chod kar nahi jaate, log hume chod dete hai.hum hamesha doosro ka saath dete hai.
Tia: ranveer plz tia koaur embarass mat karo.tia tumse sorry kehna chahti hai ki tia ne tumhe trust nahi kiya. poar tia bhi kya karti......

Then tia tells him how she had seen the bag, how she had received a call from shy and finally also about the shy and raghu conversation.ranveer finds it difficult to believe but says nothing and just listens.he can believe tia in whatever she says abiut raghu but not about shy. he trusts her. she was his friend.

Ranveer: tia agar yeh sab sach hai aur ap ko shy ke baare me pehle se pata tha to aap ne humara rishta kyun end kiya?

tia then hells him about the letter in the shed.and ranveer believes her.

tia:ranveer, tia tumse bahut pyaar karti haiaur tum usse believe karo ya na karon, tia is extremely sorry for her behaviour aur ia hamesha ranveer se hi pyaar karegi.
(she then turns to leave but turns back to say something)ranveer, tia ke liye ek favour karoge? plz ashi ko bolna ki voh apne mind se tia ki marriage ka thought nikal de.(she starts walking away)
Ranveer
(runs up to her):tia hum yeh favour nahi kar sakte.
tia: par kyun?
Ranveer:kyunki tia humne aapke liye ek dulha dhoond liya hai.
tia looks up at his face ,unable to comprehend what he is saying, her eyes are full of tears.ranveer notices the tears and rubs them away with his own hand.
ranveer:agar aap ka naam shaadi ke baad Mrs.Tia Ranveer Sisodia hua to kya phir bhi aap shaadi nahi karengi?
he then sits on his knee and takes her hand in his hand and asks her: tia will you marry me?
tia is obviously too overjoyed for words and nods her head in agreement.the both of them then walk hand in hand while tells her about what ashi had said to him having decided to not to tell the others about this till the proper time comes.

i hope u like this part .do reply.
sagarika





Edited by ranv_rules - 11 July 2006 at 3:18am
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Posted: 17 April 2006 at 6:28am | IP Logged
omg wat a happy ending i luved it Embarrassed Clap Clap
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Posted: 17 April 2006 at 6:37am | IP Logged
very nice pleazzzzzzzzz continue soon asap.
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Posted: 17 April 2006 at 6:55am | IP Logged
cho sweettt
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Posted: 17 April 2006 at 7:52am | IP Logged
hey it was wonderful,really luved it especially ranny sitting in his knees and asking will u marry me.awwwwwwwwww it was cho cheet,i can actuallu imagine that.cont soon.

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