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Posted: 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
really nice 😳

gud to knw tht Yuvi aur Ranny ko Shy aur Latty ke baare mein pata chal gaya πŸ˜ƒ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

continue soon 😳

n if possible write another fanfic.. πŸ˜‰

Divya
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Posted: 17 years ago
Originally posted by: dia5

It's not boring😑...It's AWESOMEπŸ‘!
I know I don't post my comments regularly...But I do read your fic sometimes...And let me tell you that the last part was AWESOME πŸ‘ !
Waiting for the end! πŸ˜‰



thnx a lot. will b posting sum time soon

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey sagarika!!!!!!!!!
i read ur whole fic just now n i tell u that i was really getting into those scenes which u wrote
u r a superb writer n i hope sumday i can also write gr8 fics like urs..........................
ur fic is mind blowing n i luvd it
do continue soon
luv
sonam 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
its not boring at all 😑 😑 pls,never say so again,we alll ove ur fic,k? 😳 😳 now,pls cont soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
puh-lease Sagarika,

continue soonnnnn

n ur fanfic is not at all borin all rite

Divz
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Posted: 17 years ago
PART 25

All four where sitting on the roof when they spot none other than - Shyla and Raghu. Both join the four uninvited . While Shyla was trying to climb up she falls and is saved by her prince in armour - Raghu.Finally both manage to climb up and disturb the love birds.

Shyla: voh- oh hi everyone kaise ho tum sab?

Yuvi( to ashi) : tumhare aane se pehle tak to thik the ab pata nahi shayad tabiyat kharab ho jaye.

ashi : yaa right raat ko aakar miss glliter face ne hum jaise chote bachchon ko dara diya.

yuvi: seriously shy is one mobile make up kit. ab dekhna kuch to ulta sidha zaroor bolegi tia ko insult karne ke liye.

Ashi: par yeh aaj apni insult karvaye bina nahi jayegi. done

yuvi: done.


Ranveer: hum sab thik hai shy.

Tia: vaise shy tumne humari engagement par congratulate nahi kiya.😈

Shy: congrats . by the way raghu tumhe nahi lagta ki tia aur ranvir ki jodi thodi ajeeb si hai? i mean ranvir itna serious aur tia itni immature, childish?🀒

Ranveer ( gets angry😑 . nobody gets away wid insulting his tiaπŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ): shy aisa ho sakta hai ki hum aur Tia ek doosre se bahut alag ho, par opposites attract don't they?

Ashi:right thakur aur shy tum  apna case hi consider karo tum itna make up lagati ho, false accent jhadti ho false polite behaviour.

Yuvi : par bhau (referring to raghu) make up nahi lagate. inhe english aati nahi toh accent ki baat hi nahi aati. woh false politeness nahi show karte apna cheap aur disgusting behaviour khule aam sab ke samne rakh dete hain. kyun ho na tum opposites but still meant for each other.

Ashi: tumhare aur raghu ki tarah hi ranveer tia ek dusare ko bahut chahte hai. vaise to kaafi logon ne unhe alag karne ki koshish ki thi par nahi kar paye.

tia is very happy and looks at ranveer with eyes full of tears and thanks all her friends for taking her side.

Tia: shy aur raghu tia tum dono ko tia - ranveer, cum ashi - yuvi ki wedding ppe invite karti hai. par ek shart hai tum log apni shaadi par, ranveera and tia sisodia , yuvraj and anvesha dev ko zaroor bulayoge. ( stressing on the words sisodia and dez to lay xtra emphasis on the love the couples had for each other.)


Edited by ranv_rules - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
sagrika i can't see anything written after part 25..
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Posted: 17 years ago
sorry i updated the post