OS: A Poolside Proposal, note on pg 14 - Page 2

Ps:-I was not able to comment on ur FF, lately. Iam out of town! N travelling...so was not able to.I missed the wonderful game in ur update. Excellent updates.will try to comment later.

Keep writing... Enjoy it thoroughly.And thank u for making them finally Kiss...if not anybody...The poolside sure must have felt the calm...after such many misses of the kisses.

Ash.

thanks for the PM.. 

the OS was very fast pacing, convo was wonderful and catchy!! loved the firm stance arnav had throughout! and his reasons as to why she makes him happy were just awww

cheers

Prarthana😊

 

Loved it, loved it, LURVED it!!!!!

 

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"Does everything have to be spoken out loud? Surely you know how I feel about you? I go crazy when I don't see you for an entire day. I worry when you're late coming in to work, or your sister calls saying you haven't gotten home yet. Your tears disturb me. Your bleeding finger hurts me. The thought of another man touching you sickens me. And the idea of you marrying anyone but me is incomprehensible to me."

 

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And hey thanks for the mention😛!!!!!!

Can ASR be this good and straight!!?? If he could be then it would have been awesome in show too!

Nice one to read and feel happy!!

Thanks for the PM Vidhya!

Brillant.

Fantastic.

Charming.

Lovely.

THanks so much.

U r an amazing writer

It just felt so real for them to talk like this, and in confess in such a way by the pool. Oh and yess, to patch up with a kiss. Wonderful OS! I crush on ASR excessively each day, but yeah today, was even a better reason. Im hoping you continue to bring this OS's each day after crushing on him more than usual hehe! Its a treat to read what you write.

 

- Dee