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poetry after seperation

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Posted: 30 March 2005 at 1:22pm | IP Logged
twinecool..that was soooooooo COOLClap

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Posted: 30 March 2005 at 1:43pm | IP Logged

I like the part about the rain and heaven crying, too, the best. Keep it up!

My, we certainly are a creative lot, eh?

-DKaddict

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Posted: 30 March 2005 at 2:51pm | IP Logged

wow twine cool thats real good Big smileClap!! you guys all doing a great job Big smilewow now we have writers and poets on the forum!! Aren't we a creative group Big smile!!!!

Love Asian Princess/DK KI deewani Winkloll

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Posted: 30 March 2005 at 2:58pm | IP Logged

hi guys...long time no talk huh? www.smashits.comwww.smashits.comWink

u guys all rock!  anyways...speaking of poems after separation...I have a song from Kahiin To Hoga (Star Plus...us Canadian peeps can't watch it...no starplus here!Angry but then again...there's Zee TV!Tongue) i don't watch it, but have access to the videos.  the songs played are by the tunes of the beautiful song "Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai" [Some love has been done...yet some still remains...can't translate it any better!Confused] from the film entitled "Maine Dil Tujhko Diya" [I've Lost My Heart To You].  great song...you can listen to it online. perhaps www.raaga.com or www.smashits.com .

Correct me if i'm wrong, i think this song took place when Piyush died[it kinda would kinda go with this situation (but it doesn't mean i want DK to die!DeadAngrylolwww.smashits.comwww.smashits.comWink) ...means it was picturised on Sujal and Kashish.

I'm gonna try and translate it to the best of my ability...so just bear with me here!

It's a beautiful song btw...come to think of it...all the songs in KTH are awesum!!! seriously...if any of u guys here watch it...u'll noe wut i mean!Embarrassed

Here goz nuthin:
Female:
Tum nahi ho yahaan par [you are not around, yet...]
Teraa ehsaas magar hai [I still feel your presence]
Dil kii deewarein sooni [the heart feels empty...]
Kyaa tumhe isskii khabar hai [are you aware of this]

Male:
Koi aahat hotii hai [at every sound I hear...]
Yun lagaa tum ayee ho [I feel you've come]
Bhool kar saarii baatein [After having forgotten everything...]
Saari khusiyaan laayee ho [you've brought the happiness into my life]

Female:
Jab meraa ttutta bharam [when I awoke from this dream...]
Ho Ho Ho Ho Ho [dis is just an important choral line that helps tune the rest of the song]
Terii purchhaayee thii hum [I was nothing but your shadow]
Rehegayee hai tanhaayee [The only remains are those of my loneliness]

Male:
Yaad sau baar kiyaa hai [I've remembered you hundreds of times]
Tum nahi ayee [Yet you didn't show up]
Thoda saa pyaar huaa tha [I  did love you at one point in time...]
Kuchh nahi baakii [Nothing remains]
_________________________________END OF SONG______________

Read: the original song ends with
Thodaa saa pyaar huaa HAI [Some love has been done...]
Thodaa hai baakii [Some still remains]

For this song: it's mostly in the past tense:
Thoda saa pyaar huaa THAA [I  did love you at one point in time...]
Kuchh nahi baakii [Nothing remains]

SAD, EH?Cry

nyways....I have many such songs I'll post when I get the time...many that fit each situation...

tell us wut u thinkwww.smashits.comwww.smashits.comWink

byes, tc...ttyl



Edited by dkaddict jr - 30 March 2005 at 3:07pm
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Posted: 30 March 2005 at 3:12pm | IP Logged

lolll dk addict juniour love your song to dk that is seriously sooo funnyyyy LOL!!!! I' d love to see dk reaction to that !!!! loll

Love Asian Princess/ DK ki deewani Winkloll- i'd be like dk thera chera sexy lagdveh chera sexy tehra hasna sexy lagdveh hasna sexy lolll- am i mad or what lolll LOL

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Posted: 30 March 2005 at 3:30pm | IP Logged

lmao!LOLLOLLOL
hey guess what...ur not the only 1 huz krazzeee (Winklol...krazee_gurl!) ova DK!!!! lol!LOL

and yes...i love my song 2!!Wink hey but....i like urs betta...i would change it now...but i don't wana copy u...lolLOL

dats a gr8 idea, tho!

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Posted: 30 March 2005 at 3:58pm | IP Logged

hey ppl...herez anotha 1 cumin ur way! [kk...i gotta stop it wit de slang now!AngryAngryAngrylol]

same thing...to the tunes of "Thoda sa Pyar hua hai"
This one would fit in at the scene in which Disha is forced to choose between DK and Vedant....IF that happens...a BIG if! lol

Female:
Ek uljhan mein hai yeh [problems surround...]
Dil kaa sansaar meraa [this heart of mine]
Ek taraf dosti hai [one, my friendship]
Ek taraf pyaar meraa [the other, my love]

Kiss dagar jaaun jaane [where shall I head?]
Kuchh samajh mein naa aaye [nothing seems comprehendable]
Mere dil kii bechainii [the restlessness of my heart...]
Aur burdhtii hii jaaye [seems to increase further]

Issai pehlai to kabhii [Never before this...]
Ho Ho Ho Ho Ho
Zindagii aisii naa thii [was life in such a way]
Kaise do-raahe pe aayee [what kind of a two-way path has it {life} come to]

Ek humsaayaa meraa [One is my life partner]
Ek hai purchhaayee [The other is my shadow]
Thodaa saa pyaar huaa HAI [Some love has been done...Confusedsorry...cant translate this line very well...]
Thodaa hai baakii [Some still remains]

more on the way...enjoy...and let me know what you think of em!Wink
ttyl
much luv,

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Posted: 30 March 2005 at 4:11pm | IP Logged

this one, probably the last 4 today...loadsa hmwrk u c...lol.

back to the song...this one would fit in where Disha leaves the Kanaka House [for goodConfused] and DK feels betrayed!

Male:
Saath choraa hai meraa [You have left my side...]
Upnii raahein badalkar [by changing your path]
Jaasako to tum jaao [leave if you dare...]
Mere dil se nikal kar [from my heart!]

Uff nahi main karungaa [I won't utter a word...]
Sare aansoo peelungaa [swallow each tearCry...]
Mere bin tum jeeyogii [You will live without me...Disapprove]
Tere bin mai jeelunga [I will manage to do without you!Ouch]

Bewafaaii kii dagar [the way of betrayal...]
Ho Ho Ho Ho Ho
Tumko raas aayee magar [may suit you...]
Tune dedi tabaahii [you have left me with nothing but destruction!Angry]

Waadaa jo tumne kiyaa thaa [the promise you had made...]
Nibhaa nahi paayee [couldn't fulfill]
Thoda saa pyaar huaa tha [I did love you at one point in time...]
Kuchh nahi baakii [Nothing remains]

later guys...
byes
tc
ttyl
much luv,

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