Fan Fictions


Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

My Jigar Da Tukda (RTMC FF)Last partpg45 (Page 40)

Freethinker Goldie

Joined: 16 August 2010
Posts: 1989

Posted: 18 April 2012 at 5:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetsanyo

Cryreso ji
at last. dis one updated.!

god, i just loved d twist...
man, so happening.Clap
so just mindblasting twist.Star
nw plz ud dis regularly, or else i miss this twist n turns...
gosh , wat a story dis gnna be, makes me hell excited!.

veer shouted at anu's parents, Cry
may b he din meant to b! but sm tmes bad circumstances makes the brain go dull.
bt anu slapped him!Ouch
 veer joined his father in business, dats too good!
god he is trying to forget his ananya! sad

but who the hell is rani!.
stay away u rani, verna anu tumhara band baja degi!
she cn neva eva tolerate a gal near veer1
she is gonna eat u raw!

inntne saare dinno ke baad mile, voh bhi jagda karne ke liye!

but fight ws awesome!Wink
they both r annoyed wid each other! i noe!
but gussa bhi tho usese hote h na jisse pyaar karte h!Embarrassed

i m sure anu's hotel is veer's biggest competitor!
thn more fun awaiting.Clap
god i just love this fighting love story!
they fight, mess up, ...cute fights, thn they finally patch unknowingly!Embarrassed

i still remember d days wen they use to b totally in each other, god kisses n cuddles all d time!Embarrassed

may abhi tho anu ne VODKA bhi pina chod diya hoga!
coz usse sambhal ne ke lye koi nhi h!
wenevr she thnks it, she cud hav remembered veer!, so may be she quited drinking, to prove dat she cn live out veer!
she evn noe to drive nw!, i mean she din noe driving.Cry
she is trying to b self reliant, living widout veer!Cry

but i guess, she still need shim sm wer?????????at least!Ouch

god, di!
just love u for this ud
di plz ud dis sooper soon!
i just love veer n anu!
and the way u turned d story is just mindblasting1

plz ud soon ! n don't ignore dis story!

if u do to! i won't let u!, 
i will...
i will...
yes, i will eat ur heat by sending 1000s of pms to ud ma jigar da tukda!LOL

lov u di.
just a awesome ud.Embarrassed

ud soon!
thanks sweetie...your comments are always beautiful...loved reading it... i don't know if i can update...there's a problem in pm... but if i update i will after few hours...

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


Riyaa16 Goldie

Joined: 19 January 2012
Posts: 2411

Posted: 18 April 2012 at 9:34pm | IP Logged
oh thanku thanku thanku for updating this.

Awesome part dear
loved it thoroughly

omggg,they got separated to each other oh no
ab kya hoga yr even they hate each other too

n this new entry rani...yeh yahan kyun aayi h?

Little saddy update
but i enjoyed it
twist is very nice

last scene is gd
jo dusro ke liya gadda khodta h wo khud usme girta h ...hehehehe

i think that competitor is none other than anu
oh god don't make them rivals like their parents

update soon

thanks 4 pm
luv u

muahhh 4 updating this

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


sweetnandu IF-Dazzler

Joined: 05 May 2011
Posts: 4725

Posted: 18 April 2012 at 9:50pm | IP Logged
awesome part

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


sparksfly Senior Member

Joined: 12 October 2011
Posts: 355

Posted: 19 April 2012 at 1:02am | IP Logged
res Cry
ridzzi Goldie

Joined: 25 September 2011
Posts: 1798

Posted: 19 April 2012 at 2:48am | IP Logged
amazing di...Clap
veer fought with his parents for anu and said that  he will not break his promise done with anu...cho sweet...Embarrassed
n veer misbehaved with anu's dad...but it was not intentionally...Ouch
n anu slapped him...n veer too was very angry...with her...Cry
both themselfs have created problem in their relation...Angry
he has joined his fathers business...n who is this rani...?????...Confused
hope she will be a ray of hope for the patch up b/w veer n anu...not a their relation...Ouch
n two months...two months have been passed...they met after a long time  n started fighting...Shocked
god if they have tried...they have solved that problem at the next day of their fight ,they didn't have to stay away from each other for so long but they didn't even gave a each other...Angry
update soon...
luv u...Smile

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:


--Rose-- IF-Rockerz

Joined: 04 August 2011
Posts: 6071

Posted: 19 April 2012 at 3:44am | IP Logged
OMG Ye kya ho gaya:O hope everything will be fine soon,... Love Veer and Ananya:-):-) very well written dear:-) SuPERB:-)

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


Priyart12 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 24 September 2011
Posts: 3431

Posted: 19 April 2012 at 5:55am | IP Logged
thnk god
ud to mila iska Smile
di is bar chote cmnt se kam chalo
tbiyat kharab h bachche ki Ouch
wt a twist Thumbs Up
ye dono to ek dusre k jani dusman bn gye Ouch
bt h to ek dusre k jigar da tukada hi Embarrassed

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


anumeha_rajat IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 12 February 2010
Posts: 10172

Posted: 20 April 2012 at 8:45am | IP Logged

that was really amazing n superb part..

oh so both r going through tough time..

cont. soon..

it would be interesting...seeing them against each other..

thnx for the pm...

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
The perfect couple (RTMC ff) (reply on page 51)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 50 51

Author: samikshachauhan   Replies: 406   Views: 59004

samikshachauhan 406 59004 19 September 2013 at 12:41pm by NehArabella

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 25 26

Author: RoseFairy   Replies: 205   Views: 23900

RoseFairy 205 23900 25 April 2013 at 2:07am by RoseFairy
Jeevansathi (RTMC ff) Pt 12 in Pg 54

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 67 68

Author: Nandini25   Replies: 537   Views: 84195

Nandini25 537 84195 09 March 2013 at 3:41am by Cuty16
Yeh Shahar Hai Aman Ka...RTMC FF

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 13 14

Author: Patrarekha   Replies: 105   Views: 20160

Patrarekha 105 20160 23 May 2012 at 12:29am by Patrarekha

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 33 34

Author: ..oneOone..   Replies: 265   Views: 47025

..oneOone.. 265 47025 02 October 2007 at 10:57am by anni_23

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index