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Freethinker Goldie

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Posted: 15 December 2011 at 1:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetshera

wow another ff on RTMC
lovely intro
Ananya is such a foodie yaar
i'm confused about 1 thing
R they best friends or bf gf?
update soon
Thanks Sweetie...will update soon...Smile

Freethinker Goldie

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Posted: 15 December 2011 at 1:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by neha_dubey1709

wooowwwooowwwowowoowowo yieppieee another rt-mc ff huh... Dhanvi ur the best Thanxxx for starting another ff dear...
Thanxx for the pm...
I know no need to say continue soon bcoz ur a punctual person who updates sincerely and regularly but still I'm going to say...
Will be waiting for it :-)
Thanks a lot sweetie...even i love reading your comments...Smile will update soon...
Freethinker Goldie

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Posted: 15 December 2011 at 1:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Manipadma

wooohhhooo...NEW ONE...congoo shangooo dhanvi dear... the title is full 2 rocking Big smile both r JIGAR DA TUKDA of each other...lagta hai this time more masti is waiting for usss ...thanxxx sweetie ...looov u...muhaaa Big smile
Thanks sweetie...i really appretiate your comments...Smile lov u...
Freethinker Goldie

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Posted: 15 December 2011 at 1:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by BhartiKhushi909

wowww Jigad Da Tukda
loved the start n title
continue soon :)
Thanks Dear...Smile
Freethinker Goldie

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Posted: 15 December 2011 at 1:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetsanyo

cool start ...especially ananya...super dooperbo ananya
Thanks sweetie...Big smile
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Posted: 15 December 2011 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SonaliDhone

wow yaar  new story on RtMc , it's realy be fun to read Thanx yaar , Smile n I like the promo Tonguekeep it upClapWink

Thanks a lot sweetie...i was trying to think something new and this struck my mind...will update soon...Smile
Freethinker Goldie

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Posted: 15 December 2011 at 1:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sanyogitaprc

Smile one more RTMC FF...great...

nice start dear of FF is awesome Big smile...

veer & ananya...both r from rich families...but r they best friends of each other or GF BF?...

thanks 4 pm...plz continue soon...

thanks for appreciating...lets see what happens wil surely get to know soon...Smile

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Posted: 15 December 2011 at 4:02pm | IP Logged

Part 2

Ananya "yaar i find too much crowd today" while munching her favorite potato chips...

Veer "i told you." while looking around... "give me some chips yaar, you will finish the whole packet"

Ananya "so what?...and how come you are eating these chips, you are so health conscious"

Veer "now stop irritating, give me some"

Ananya pulled the packet towards herself...veer looked at her, while she was smiling...

Veer "Ananya!!!" he started tickling her around her waist... she laughed... "ok..ok...wait"

Veer looked too handsome...some girls were talking about him...

Naina "haaye...i just love him... he's so hot..."

Priya "don't even look at him..."

Naina "why...he's so handsome that I can sit all day and dream about him"

Pooja "let her dream, soon her dreams will break."

Naina "what do you mean??...if I go and ask him for dance...he will surely come"

Priya "why don't you try?" and giggled...

Naina "you know I am so beautiful that till now no one has ever said no to me"

Pooja "he won't say no"

Naina smiled and went towards Veer who was talking to Ananya...

Naina "hi Veer, I saw you in college so many times, can I please dance with you?"

Veer turned to look at her and smiled...

Naina smiled and was waiting for him to dance with her when she heard someone yelling

Ananya "how dare you??? you bloody witch...i will kill asked my Veer to dance with did you even think of it" she pushed Naina and was about to slap her when Veer grasped her waist and pulled her away...

Ananya "no leave me Veer, I will slap this witch..."

Veer "leave it Ananya, she knows you are very strong yaar"

Ananya was red with anger "next time if I see you, I will kill you bitch"

Veer "calm down...she only asked for a dance yaar...she didn't asked me to sleep with her"

Ananya "oye...if you say again then I won't talk to you..."she said while pointing her finger towards was a warning bell for him...

Veer "ok sweetheart, now leave it...lets go and dance"

Ananya "she's spoilt my mood..."

Veer "and you have spoilt me...its 12am and I am here with you...without telling anyone at home...and you can't even dance with me, should I sing a song for you now??"

Ananya "wow yaar, sing a song...arre I know you can sing a song shong..." she kissed him on the cheek

Veer " no way"

Ananya made a face...

He went on the dance floor ...

Veer "Disco teh club shub
Main kee karaan
Baar yaa pub shub
Main kee karaan

Ho o..
Ho o..
Ho o..

Disco te club-shub
Main kee karaan
Baar yaa pub-shub
Main kee karaan
Addaa toh sada hai wahaan
Hoga re hoga re jahaan
My jigar da tukda
My jigar da tukda
You are my sona-sona mukhda
My jigar da tukda aa

Digi digong dong dong…."

Ananya and veer were dancing...

Ananya "Cafe teh starbuck
Main kee karaan
Limo mile ya truck
Main kee karaan

Saanu teh jaana hai wahaan
Hoga re hoga re jahaan
My jigar da tukda
My jigar da tukda
You are my sona-sona mukhda
My jigar da tukda

Hoye punjabi
Shakal punjabi
Band bajaade"

Ananya "oh I am so tired now..." and hugged Veer tightly in her arms...

Veer "how much did you drink today??"

Ananya "does it matter...i love you...that's all that pick me up"

Veer "yaar Ananya, this is are heavy and I am tired too...i can't pick you"

Ananya "you do body me your strong muscles...come on Veer, I know you can pick me up"

Veer "i will die yaar..." while picking her up...he carried her towards the car park... "fine now I deserve a kiss"

Ananya "aiveyen..."

Veer stopped "fine then I won't carry you..."

Ananya kissed him on the cheek...

Veer "yes now I can even lift a bulldozer" Ananya smiled at him...

She loved him a lot...

Veer "ok who will drive your car??"

Ananya "hmmm we can ask someone...or leave it here...who cares"

Veer "you have gone insane..." he looked around and saw Vishal...

Veer asked Vishal to drive his car and come after him...first he will drop Ananya home and then he will go home...

Vishal "no problem Veer...then you can drop me home" and smiled

Veer "yes, I think I will reach home early morning, when everyone will wake drive behind this car." he said irritatingly...

Veer looked at Ananya "now don't you dare sleep... Ananya listen" he patted her cheeks

Ananya "no I am not sleeping just closing my eyes..."

He stopped the car few steps behind a big bunglow... "ok now I will get down and you drive the car inside"

Ananya "ok Veer..." she looked for the remote of the gate...

Veer " open and drive carefully and don't make noise, and call me once you reach your room and..."

Ananya "...and you give me a kiss baby"

Veer kissed Ananya gently on her cheeks "now go" he whispered and got off the car and walked back to his car...

Ananya opened the gates with remote and drove the car into the driveway... she came out and took off her sandals and bangles... then quietly opened the door and walked straight upstairs to her bedroom... she dialed his no " "thank God...Mitali is sleeping"

Veer "you are insane...she's your mother...arre yaar have some respect sweetheart"

Ananya "oh yes...ok now I have to sleep...muah my baby...goodnight"

Veer "its good morning baby"

After some time

Veer dropped Vishal on the way then stopped his car outside a big bungalow...he slowly drove the car inside after the sensor gates opened automatically...

He slowly closed the door of his car...watched his step carefully...he opened the big door In front of him...while closing from behind he heard someone...

"so you have come now?"

Veer looked back shockingly...but then relaxed a was his Grandfather... "oh you scared me Grandpa..."

Baldev "well, its just 2:00am putar...we still have whole night to enjoy"

Veer "oh Grandpa...please try and understand, I was with my girlfriend"

Baldev "what?? your she was also with you? But where?"

Veer "discotheque" he whispered

Baldev "lets go to your room...if your mother comes here...she will yell on both of us..." he whispered back

Veer "thanks for saving me today"

Baldev "now tell me what you did at the disco"

Veer smiled "next time I will take you with me..."

Baldev "if your girlfriend stays away whole night out of her house, do you think she's a cultural and nice girl"

Veer "i don't care Grandpa...all I know is that I love her...and she's very cute and nice girl"

Baldev "well if you think she's nice...then I believe you...but putar staying out for such long time is not good...and how did she go home?"

Veer "i dropped her...actually I drove her car"

Baldev "what?? so she can't drive her own car?"

Veer "oh no no...she drives superb...i love the way she drives...but she was drunk"

Baldev's eyes literally came out of shock "drunk!!!!"

Veer "don't worry wasn't that much"

Baldev "Veer!!!...well you know putar sometimes I think your time is very much better than my time...i never had a girlfriend before marriage and I never took your Grandmother in any disco"

Veer "oh don't feel sad...come with me next time"

Badev "ok...ok now you go to have to go for gym in the morning" he kissed Veer's forehead...he loved his Grandson...


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