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Posted: 20 January 2012 at 7:08pm | IP Logged
wowww...loved this part...
The innocence of love...the feelings are so pure...
loved it yaar...superb swthrt...!!
N Lov u too ..Big smile

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Posted: 21 January 2012 at 12:13am | IP Logged
thanks for updates n pms
sorry for late comment
loved all parts
all veer any scenes were beautiful!!!
heheheh any is toh lady salluWink
kabhi bhi kuchh bhi karne ko taiyar rehti haiLOL
LOLas per veer bold n beautiful!!Clap
loved raggying n veer's vampire
so any is foody from childhoodLOLLOLLOL
n veer is sweet like cakeTongue
loved both so muchEmbarrassed
so veer want to test abt his feelingsWink
n loved both remembering n imaging each otherEmbarrassed
any with apple n veer hugging vegitables tht was hillariousLOL
n the song is perfect matched for situationClap
both r not aware tht their famalies r rivalsShocked
ohhh our cute coupleOuch
loved the scene veer staring ananya in rainEmbarrassed
loved sweet moments between them n innocent love taking placeEmbarrassed
thanks once again
waiting for next update


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nice part  Tonguen sorry for late commenting

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Part 14 flashback cont...


In school

Ananya "wow this is so beautiful...whose made that??"

Veer "i love painting...so I made it last year..."

Ananya "you paint so well...can you teach me?"

Veer "sure...why not" he smiled at her...

Ananya "ok I will get my stuff tomorrow and you can teach me..."

Veer "are you going now??"

Ananya "oh yes...i am getting late..."

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in class

Meenakshi "do you like Veer??"

Ananya "are you crazy...no way"

Meenakshi "why?? he's so smart and handsome..."

Ananya "but he's a coward...and I don't know more about him..."

Meenakshi "coward??? no he's nice..."

Ananya "i like brave men...not like Veer who keeps on running from every fight..." as she turned around she saw him standing right behind her...

Veer was looking at her... Ananya felt bad she wanted to explain but he went off from there...

Meenakshi "he heard everything"

Ananya "i know...he must be feeling very bad...i must go and see"

Veer was walking towards the play ground...

Ananya "wait Veer"

Veer didn't say anything but kept on walking …

Ananya "listen Veer...i didn't say anything wrong about you...please don't misunderstand me..."

Veer stopped and turned around "i understand each and every word you said..."

and he walked away …..

Ananya stood still and felt bad of herself...deep inside she knew that Veer is a very nice person...she liked him...she didn't mean anything...she wanted to go and hug him tightly...he looked so innocent and nice...Veer didn't said anything bad to her nor he behaved badly, this was upsetting her...there was a strange feeling running inside her

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chadha house

Ananya was still lost in those last words said by Veer...how could she say anything like that for Veer...he was so helpful to her...he always seemed kind and different from other boys...Ananya hated herself for this...she wanted to talk to Veer and tell him that he was the best boy she ever met...that she started liking him...

"Any where are you??" Sulekha was knocking outside her room...

Ananya "Grandma let me sleep"

Sulekha "did you eat something??"

Ananya "yes I did..."

Sulekha "alright"

Ananya thought of calling Meenakshi and asking for Veer's no...

Ananya "hi Meenakshi...do you have Veer's no? I want to talk to him right now"

Meenakshi "no I don't have but I can ask Priya if she has...i will call you back"

Meenakshi dialed Priya's no "Priya do you have Veer no??"

Priya dialed Vishal's no "Vishal do you have Veer's no??"

Vishal dialed Rahul's no "Rahul do you have Veer's no??"

Rahul dialed Arjun's no "Arjun do you have Veer's no??"

Arjun Dialed Ronit's no "Ronit do you have Veer's no??"

Ronit gave Veer's no to Arjun who gave to Rahul who gave to Vishal who gave to Priya who gave to Meenakshi who finally gave it to Ananya...

Ananya dialed Veer's no...

Veer was sleeping when he heard the bell...

"hello" he said in half sleepy voice...

Ananya "hi Veer, Ananya here"

Veer opened his eyes "what you????" he disconnected the phone...

Ananya dialed again... "listen Veer...please don't cut the phone..."

Veer was listening...

Ananya "i didn't mean anything...i was just saying in my ego...i am so sorry...you are very nice and very sweet...can I please meet you outside..."

Veer "i have to sleep"

Ananya "please Veer just for sometime...you can come to new wales swimming pool...i am waiting for you..."

Veer "it is far from my house..."

Ananya "that's alright I am waiting for you...you take your time"

Veer smiled and got up to get ready...


After some time...

at the swimming pool

Ananya was waiting at the table near the pool when she saw Veer... she waved her hand...

Veer came towards Ananya...

both were sitting opposite each other...

Ananya came near and hold his hand "i am sorry Veer...i didn't mean to hurt you in any way...you are really very nice"

Veer looked up at her "i am coward"

Ananya "no you are not...you are not coward, you are very kind...and I like you the way you are...believe me Veer..."

Veer "i can fight if I want to...but I don't think its worth fighting with every other person and do you think if I beat someone unnecessarily then I will be brave."

Ananya "sorry Veer...please forgive me..."

Veer smiled at her "alright...forget it now"

Ananya smiled broadly "thank you so much...friends" she forwarded her hand ….

Veer put his hand on her hand... "friends"

Ananya "hmmm friends forever..."

After some time...


Ananya came in her pink swimwear...Veer gazed at her as she looked like a mermaid in the water...her flawless skin was shinning...soon she realized Veer looking at her...

Ananya "are you scared of water??" 

Veer "no but I don't feel like swimming now"

Ananya "come on Veer...you are my friend now...you can't say no...now come fast" she said while making a pony tail of her hair...

There were few girls and boys in the pool...Ananya was sitting on the pool side waiting for Veer...

Veer came out in his swimming togs... Ananya jumped into the pool and asked him to come...

Ananya "race???"

Veer "alright..."

Ananya "i will do butterfly you can go for normal...butterfly is more difficult stroke"

Veer "i can do butterfly as well, I have strong shoulders that I developed in my six years of practice"

Ananya "wow...ok lets start..." she said while wearing her pink swimming glasses "1, 2, 3 go" she went inside the water... both were swimming with equal speed. Ananya's wave-like body was moving faster...it seemed an easy job for her...

when she looked around she saw Veer reached first... "how come you are so fast???"

Veer " good technique is crucial to swim this style effectively"

Ananya "oh...so you are better then me...well thats good to know...i like winners..."

She came near him...and took off her glasses... "are my eyes red???"

Veer "little bit...you know its because of the chlorine"

Ananya "hmm...but I hate when my eyes are red..."

Veer "you look like a real vampire" he smiled...

Ananya moved her hands towards his neck...he went inside the pool...Ananya looked for him "Veer...i won't leave you...wait"

both were swimming together for long time...

Veer "we should leave now...its getting dark..."

Ananya "yes...but its so much fun here...i don't feel like going..."

Veer "come Ananya..."

Ananya "ok " as she was coming out of the pool her feet slipped...Veer was behind her...she fell on him...with her back against his chest...she turned a little and touched his chest...then gazed into his eyes...for a moment both were lost in each other...

Veer moved his hand from her shoulder to her waist...she kept her hands on his strong shoulders... they came more closer... Veer curled his arms around her waist pulling her slowly more closer...soon they were embracing each other with their eyes closed... suddenly they heard a noise... "please empty the pool" the life gourd was announcing... Ananya moved back... and embarrassingly looked at Veer... "my foot slipped... "

Veer "that's alright...i didn't let you fall"


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Ananya thought of calling Meenakshi and asking for Veer's no...

Ananya "hi Meenakshi...do you have Veer's no? I want to talk to him right now"

Meenakshi "no I don't have but I can ask Priya if she has...i will call you back"

Meenakshi dialed Priya's no "Priya do you have Veer no??"

Priya dialed Vishal's no "Vishal do you have Veer's no??"

Vishal dialed Rahul's no "Rahul do you have Veer's no??"

Rahul dialed Arjun's no "Arjun do you have Veer's no??"

Arjun Dialed Ronit's no "Ronit do you have Veer's no??"

Ronit gave Veer's no to Arjun who gave to Rahul who gave to Vishal who gave to Priya who gave to Meenakshi who finally gave it to Ananya...

Ananya dialed Veer's no...



chalo no. tho mila...phiueD'oh


hey do show a scene wer veer is dashing, fighting bravely...and ananya going flat on his fighting skills.


Veer "that's alright...i didn't let you fall" -----------well its ur responsiblity veer.


i just love them...hey did u like their description in d vm dat i made?


loved d ud.





Edited by sweetsanyo - 25 January 2012 at 7:38pm

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Posted: 25 January 2012 at 8:35pm | IP Logged
awessum part

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Posted: 25 January 2012 at 9:48pm | IP Logged
awesome update...Clap
anu don't say that he is actually not coward...but he didn't like to fight with everyone n everywhere...but he can fight for u...Wink
n that no. scene...finally  she got veer's no. ...kitni mehenat k baad,...LOL
n that last scene...Embarrassed
update soon...
luv u...Smile

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