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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 17 flashback cont...


Ronit "Veer listen..."

Veer was walking upstairs to his class...when he heard Ronit and stopped...

Ronit "are you going to Manali???"

Veer "no..."

Ronit "why yaar...lets go...we will have fun...its snowing there"

Veer "i don't feel like going..."

Ronit didn't force Veer, he saw him going in the class...he did notice that Veer looked sad...

in the class...

Meenakshi "i have given your name for the Manali trip"

Ananya "what??? why???"

Meenakshi "what?? you only told me that you are interested and you will be going"

Ananya "but I don't feel like going"

Ronit heard and said "even Veer is not going...it means you both will have fun here"

Ananya blasted on Ronit "what the hell...no way...Meenakshi I am going..." she left the class...



Ananya felt so helpless...she couldn't even talk to Veer...

she missed him...she missed talking to him...she missed his sweet smile...she missed a caring friend...

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Next day ….

Meenakshi "wow Ananya you are on time..."

Priya "hey Ananya...good we are going to Manali...i just love snow..."

Meenakshi "yes...and we will play around...i feel so excited"

Ananya didn't say anything... she quietly sat in the bus …...as it started moving out of the town...she felt something missing...she felt as if she is loosing something...she turned once...then closed her eyes and leaned towards the window...

Veer was playing with his basketball when he thought about Ananya...he missed her...he missed her smile...he missed talking to her...there was something strange happening with him...he thought of forgetting her...but still he missed her...without her he felt incomplete...without her he felt lonely...

he went to the swimming pool...he looked around and thought about his Ananya and how he couldn't say anything to her...

he missed her...

Lost n lonely coz you're the only
One that knows me
That I can't be without you
Lost n lonely coz you're the only
One that knows me
That I can't be without you

Hai kya yeh jo
Tere mere darmiyaan hai
Andekhi ansuni
Koi dastaan hai

Lagne lagi
Ab zindagi khaali
Hai meri
Lagne lagi
Har saans bhi khaali
Lost n lonely
Bin tere
Bin tere
Bin tere
Lost n lonely
Koi khalish hai
Hawaon mein bin tere
Lost n lonely
Bin tere
Bin tere
Bin tere
Lost n lonely
Koi khalish hai
Hawaon mein bin tere
Lost n lonely


Baldev "Veer...come have your dinner..."

Veer "i am not hungry"

Baldev "what happened Veer? You don't feel good"

Veer "nothing Grandpa...just don't feel doing anything...want to sleep...i am tired playing today"

Baldev "ok...then you must rest..."

he switched off the lights...

again he missed her, it was dark...and he wasn't sleeping...he just imagined her...


Ajnabi se hue
Kyun pal saare
Yeh nazar se nazar yeh milaate hi nahin
Ek ghani tanhaayi chaa rahi hai
Manzilein raaston mein hi gum hone lagi
Ho gayi ansuni har dua ab meri
Reh gayi ankahi
Bin tere
Lost n lonely
Bin tere
Bin tere
Bin tere
Lost n lonely
Koi khalish hai
Hawaon mein bin tere
Lost n lonely


Ananya was standing near the window and continuously thought about him... "what has happened to me..." she said to herself...she missed him badly...she wanted to have his glance...just one glance...she thought of calling him then stopped...


Raah mein roshni ne
Hai kyun haath choda
Iss taraf shaam ne
Kyun hai apna muh moda
Yun ke har subah
Ek bereham si raat ban gayi
Hai kya yeh jo
Tere mere darmiyaan hai
Andekhi ansuni koi dastaan hai

Lagne lagi
Ab zindagi khaali khaali
Lagne lagi
Har saans bhi khaali
lost n lonely
Bin tere
Bin tere
Bin tere
Lost n lonely
Koi khalish hai
Hawaon mein bin tere
Lost n lonely

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Next Day...

Ronit "Veer I know you like her...then what's the matter??"

Veer "you won't understand...its a long story...my family and her family can never become friends...they are big rivals...and I cannot continue my relation with Ananya...even she didn't talk to me after the party..."

Ronit "Veer...i think you don't love her"

Veer "how can you say that"

Ronit "if you would have loved her...then you wouldn't have lost all hopes...it seems you have accepted that nothing can be done and you and Ananya have to stay away from each other..."

Veer "then what should I do??"

Ronit "you should talk to her...i am sure she must be waiting for you"

Veer "she's gone to Manali...i don't when they are coming back"

Ronit "so what...you can go to Manali..."

Veer "me???" he thought something...

Ronit "yes...you can go and talk to her...tell her what you feel for her"

Veer "but what if she gets angry"

Ronit "so what...atleast you will get to know what she thinks of you"

Veer got up excitedly... "you are right"

After some time...

Veer was sitting in the bus...

Veer "Grandpa...i will come tomorrow...i have to study at Ronit's place for the night"

Baldev "alright but make sure you eat something"

Veer "don't worry...bye"

Veer was happy to meet Ananya...he didn't felt sad...nor he was feeling lonely...even the thought of meeting her made him happy and he was all set to propose her...

Bus stopped at the Manali bus stop...he knew the hotel address...

As he walked towards the hotel...he thought once again...something stopped him...he thought about his parents...his mother and father who raised him like a prince...always fulfilled his wishes and now he's going to do something that will hurt them... he didn't move...but then he thought of at least going and saying her final good bye...he will explain her that he cannot fulfill his promise...he had to do this...

as he walked outside the hotel...he looked up...then went inside...at the reception desk... "can you tell me Ananya Chadha's room no please...i am her friend Veer"

Receptionist "can you please wait sir...let me check" she called Ananya in her room

"maam someone wants to meet you...he is saying his name Veer...should I send him to your room?"

Ananya excitdely "oh...yes yes...please"

Receptionist "alright maam"

she turned towards Veer "Sir you may go to room no 105...from the lifts towards your right"

Veer "thanks" he walked towards the lifts...he was nervous for the first time...he came to propose her but now he wants to say his final words to her...he felt bad about the situation...but he still had to talk and clear everything...

he reached outside the room...his hands moved forward to knock the door but then he stopped...he thought of going back...he couldn't say final good bye to her...she was his dream girl...he could never look into her eyes and say that he will never meet with her or talk to her... he turned towards the lifts when the door opened...he turned to look...it was Ananya...

Ananya "Veer...you were going back??"

Veer "no no...i forgot something outside..."

Ananya "it must be snowing outside..."

Veer "when I came it just started..."

Ananya "come inside..."

Veer nodded and followed her inside the room...

He made himself comfortable on the couch...

there was silence between them...Ananya didn't look at him...

Veer broke the silence... "i...i came for some work here...so"

Ananya "so you thought you will meet me"

Veer looked at her "oh yes"

Ananya "you don't have to say anything...if this relationship doesn't work...then it doesn't work"

Veer "its not that..."

Ananya "i understand...even I am not effected that much...its alright we were only friends..." she gave a fake smile...

Veer "i think I should leave now"

Ananya didn't say anything …..

Veer got up and left the room...

Ananya was still thinking about what she said and how she broke up her relationship...something deep inside was urging her to go and tell Veer that she's in love with him...this feeling grew more and more that made her rush out of the room only with a t-shirt...she looked outside but he already left...she went downstairs...rushing at the reception...

Receptionist looked at her in astonishment that she was only wearing t-shirt till her thighs... "maam you shouldn't go out...its snowing heavily...and you aren't wearing..."

Ananya didn't gave her the chance to complete her sentence and rushed outside the hotel...she looked at the road...she couldn't make out as of the snow...she glanced around and saw a young boy with a leather jacket walking towards the taxi stand...

Ananya shouted and ran after him "wait...wait...Veer.."

he stopped and looked behind...to his shock he saw her running towards him...

Veer "Ananya...you came without wearing your jacket...this t-shirt won't help fighting cold...its very cold...you will fall sick...please go back..."

Ananya didn't stop but came more near "i have not come to go back..." she said and smiled...she came more closer to him...

Veer "Ananya you aren't wearing your shoes or slippers...and you will catch..."

Veer couldn't speak more...his lips were shut...she placed her lips on his...her arms were curled around his neck...she lifted herself on her toes...and kissed him longingly...

she pulled back after few minutes...

Veer looked at her "Ananya"

Ananya looked into his eyes "i love you Veer...will you be mine forever"

Veer smiled lovingly "i love you too, I was already yours"

Veer forgot everything and embraced her tightly in his arms not wanting to leave her...she squeezed herself inside him...



people passing by were looking with a great surprise...Veer suddenly opened his eyes and saw people staring at them... he immediately pulled back... "Ananya lets go inside...people are looking at us"

Ananya "let them see we are in love...i want to tell everyone..." she looked into his eyes

both smiled...and hugged each other... Veer gave his jacket to Ananya and picked her up in his arms and walked towards the hotel...

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Posted: 12 years ago
So cute to see them together
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww!! sooo romantic!!!!!!
lovely update!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
very sweet update dear... Loved it... Finally confessionsss:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...πŸ‘
both are missing each other...
n finally veer decided to meet her n tell her about his feelings...but again he stops...why veer...??????...
but our anu...i toh really love this girl...full too bindass...πŸ˜‰
she kissed him...ooo...we that veer will be the first one to do...πŸ˜†
n finally they confessed...

Ananya looked into his eyes "i love you Veer...will you be mine forever"

Veer smiled lovingly "i love you too, I was already yours"

Veer forgot everything and embraced her tightly in his arms not wanting to leave her...she squeezed herself inside him...

Roshan hai yeh zameen, aasmaan sab ishq ke dum se
Dhalte hai din aur raat ishq ke hi dum se

Khushiyon ke beshumar behisaab se sikke khanke
Dil ki ab har muraad ishq ke hi dum se

Tu hai mera khuda, ab na hona juda
Kar de qaram ke dil yeh chain payega
Maula maula re, shukr tera maula re
Rubaru hua hai mera yaar
Hooo.. maula maula re, shukr tera maula re
Rubaru hua hai mera yaar

Ho.. sajde mein tere hi jhuk jaaun main sadaa
Teri hi baahon mein ho jaaun lapata
Chhayyan ho, dhoop ho rasta bhi ho naya
Humko ab kaisa dar sang jo hai tu chala

Ho.. ab tere sare hi gham hai mere
Ab meri khushiyan teri hai sada

Tu hai mera khuda, ab na hona juda
Kar de karam ke dil yeh chain paayega
Maula maula re, shukr tera maula re
Rubaru hua hai mera yaar

Ho.. maula maula re, shuar tera maula re
Rubaru hua hai mera yaar

Roshan hai yeh zameen aasmaan sab, ishq ke dum se
Dhalte hai din aur raat ishq ke hi dum se

Ho khushiyon ke beshumaar behisaab se sikke khanke
Dil ki ab har muraad ishq ke hi dum se

Ho tu hai mera khuda, ab na hona juda
Karde karam ke dil yeh chain paayega
Maula maula re, shukr tera maula re
Rubaru hua hai mera yaar
Hoo maula maula re, shukr tera maula re
Rubaru hua hai mera yaar


update soon...
luv u...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update
atlast she purpose him
awesum update
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
πŸ‘it was too good ,
i just loved it.⭐️
at last we got it...❀️the proposal ud,
it was more than amazing.🀣
anaya is soopre dooper coolπŸ˜ƒ...i just love her so much.
veer is caring and too good.πŸ˜‰.
i was just speechless d way anu proposed veer''i love u ...wil b mine forevr..☺️

u r just amazing dhanvi... love u .
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice part
n  dear sorry for late commenting,
 
finalyVeer - Anu confesses there love for each other 😳
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago



Part 18



Veer came back out of flashback...its was almost 1:00am, he looked at Ananya and covered her with a blanket...then he opened the door and went outside...he somehow managed to reach his car that was parked outside her house...

He quickly started the car before anyone saw him...he thought about Ananya and her cute smile...the more he thought the more he smiled... "My wild cat" he said to himself while driving...

he reached home and saw the lights were still on...his Grandpa must me waiting for him...he opened the main door and entered the lounge and saw his Grandpa sleeping cosily on the couch...

Veer smiled and didn't wanted to disturb him... he got a blanket from his room and covered him...

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Next day...



Chadha house

Ananya woke up early... she looked around and saw she didn't change last night...she again had headache... she looked at the clock, it was 9:00am... she could hear the sounds of prayer outside...that must be her Grandma...

she got up and quickly went for a shower...

she heard her phone ringing...she quickly came out of the shower... "hello Veer"

Veer "when are you coming???"

Ananya "no Veer...i can't come for gym...i have a bad headache"

Veer "who told you to drink so much...you had so many shots yesterday"

Ananya "you could have stopped me"

Veer "as if you listen to me...you were ready to take off your clothes...do you remember that???"

Ananya "so what...it was only you and me...and I don't mind taking my clothes off in front of you"

Veer "you are insane...now let me exercise...i will call you later"

Ananya "ok...i will reach college and see you there..."

Veer "ok bye"

Ananya started getting ready...



After some time...



Ananya came shouting '... "Grandma...Grandma"

Sulekha "what happened???"

Ananya "nothing..i am hungry...give me something to eat"

Sulekha "oh you scared me the way you were shouting...well the breakfast is on the table..."

Ananya "what is this???? cereals and fruit...no way"

Sulekha "then what will you have??"

Ananya "can I have a cheese toast or aloo parantha please?"

Sulekha "i thought you were loosing some weight"

Ananya "why do I need to loose weight...i look fine"

Sulekha "you should loose some weight...otherwise who will marry you??? nowdays boys like slim girls"

Ananya "who wants to marry here???"

Sulekha "Any...you should be serious sometimes...won't you get married one day?"

Ananya "lets see...i am getting late Grandma...now please give me something to eat..."

Sulekha "ok wait..."



Ananya "when did you come back last night??"

Sulekha "i came back in the morning"

Ananya "wow...do you have another pooja today???"

Sulekha "no why do you ask???"

Ananya "just for my information..." she smiled... "ok I have to leave...bye"

Sulekha looked confusedly at Ananya's answer...



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in the college



Priya "but how did he manage to get out of your house..."

Ananya "don't know...i didn't ask him..." while having her samosa...

Priya "you always put him in danger..."

Ananya "i had too much drink and I really don't know what happened last night"

Priya "oh my God Ananya...what if Veer did something with you and you must be unaware of???"

Ananya laughed out... "Veer '...oh my God...Veer will do something..." she laughed out loudly... "i am waiting for the day when he does that something..."

Priya "why are you laughing...this is serious"

Ananya "you know Priya...Veer is the most descent boy on this earth...he believes in marriage...he won't do that something with me unless he marries me..."

Priya "and how are you so sure about that??"

Ananya "because I tested him once...do you remember last year when we both got stuck in that lift next to the library..."

Priya "oh yes yes...you got stuck for one hour"

Ananya "yes and '."

Flashback...

Veer and Ananya in the lift...

Veer "let me call the, and check..."

Ananya "leave it..." she came closer...

Veer "Ananya ...we are in the lift..."

Ananya "so what..." she came closer and kissed him on the lips...

Veer hold her tightly...her kiss was making him mad...his hands were rubbing her back...he kissed her passionately...

After few minutes

suddenly he pulled back...

Ananya "what happened???"

Veer "nothing..."

Ananya "why did you stop???"

Veer "i might loose control" he whispered holding her tightly in his arms...

Ananya "so what..." while rubbing his chest

Veer looked into her eyes... and cupped her face with his hands... "you are my love...and I respect you..."

Ananya "so it means you will never come closer to me???"

Veer "i will...but after I make you mine forever...after I marry you...and I am already so close to you..." he said while showering small kisses on her lips...

Ananya "fine...do you think its bad if we come close now"

Veer "no I don't think its bad...but its just a matter of respecting our values...if you still want me to go ahead...then for your happiness I can do anything"

Ananya gazed at him and smiled "you are very nice Veer...now I am not at all scared of anything...i love you even more...i am so lucky to have you"

she embraced him tightly...and kissed him on the lips...

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Priya " oh...well that's so sweet"

Ananya came out of her flashback... "and that's the reason I trust him blindly... he truly loves me and I love him as well"

Priya "wow...that's so romantic..."

Ananya "my phone's ringing...it must be Veer..."

Ananya picked up the phone "hello Veer...where are you??"

Veer "i am on my way...Ananya can you attend the practical class...i might get late...you can tell me later on..."

Ananya "alright...i am going to class now...will meet you after that"

Veer "do ask the the professor about the exams next month...i mean the dates..."

Ananya "ok...come soon..."

Veer "i will..."

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In the evening

Ananya "wow this ice cream is nice..."

Veer "you must try different flavors...i also like this one..."

Ananya "hmmm... its yummy"

Veer "so where are the notes...i will take home and give you tomorrow"

Ananya "oh...they are in the car..." she saw ice cream on Veer's lips...

Ananya "don't move..." she came closer

Veer "what happened...tell me"

before he could speak something...she came closer and licked his lips with her tongue...

Veer "Ananya..."

Ananya smiled "i wanted lick that ice cream..."

Veer smiled '.. "then I should lick as well...its not fair"

Ananya put some ice cream on her lips...

both laughed...



It was time to go home...

both of them stopped their cars in closed street... it started raining heavily...

Veer came out of his car...Ananya came out as well...

Veer "why did you come out??? its raining"

Ananya "please don't say anything..." She kissed him. She pressed up against him, against the outside of her car door on the dark road. A streetlight glowed somewhere but she couldn't see it because her eyes were closed. She heard only the rain. She felt only his soft lips against hers.

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Edited by Freethinker - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i just loved it, 
its beautiful .
really lovely.
veer is really caring and awesome..he is a prefect bachelor...
if he so prefect , than for sure ananya has to imperfect...

u noe , people frm far apart poles of earth makes the best couple...like our very own ananya and veer.

veer values his ethics...well every gal wants a man like dis...

this is really good,
even i personally feel it...d way veer feels...i too respect it.

u r just lovely...dhanvi di