Dil mera churaya kyun? (VirMan) - Page 2

omg!!! ths was soo awesum!!!😃
seriously!! 
the hawt wala scene was tho☺️
luvd it!!!
nd their nok-jhok wass totally cute!! ''wife'' 😆😆
nd yea contoinue ths!! definitely!!!😆 
keep writing😉

This was excellent👏
I loved reading it

Yuks

wow ... so romantic.😳.

Loved it..Pls PM me wen u update..

haiye haiye...loved it... :)

It was awesome...just superb...loved it
Plz cont soon 😊

that was just pure awesomeness!!! i loved it to bits!!!!!!!!!
" No thoughts. No musings. No questions. No doubts. Just the moment. The feelings. The hold. The comfort of each other." absolutely loved that part!!!!!!! you are an awesome writer! please do continue and pm me when you update yeh! and thanks so much for writing this! 😊

WOW is the only word that could express how i felt while/after reading this...i know virman is spicy(yeah thats what i blv them to be),insane and totally random bt ur os made them totally sweet...and and and i just adored the way you created a montage of virman romance,care and naughtiness...awesome...please do write more...

Hey noori, that was awesomeee 👏   👏   👏 U hav left me speechless, hayeee i could feel the heat here 😛 I jst luved each word u had written, esp the last line was fab! Do continue it soon!!

An os from u aftr so long..u r one amazing writer..do write more often..i love 2 read ur ss/os n al..dis one was awesome as always..n hawt!!😳