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VirMan : Almost Heaven Part 19 -Updated (Page 84)

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Posted: 12 February 2012 at 6:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by TUK...NYC

waooo...dis was great...plz cont soon...

Thanks dearie...Smile

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Posted: 12 February 2012 at 6:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aisha202

Another AWESOME update Rev! Big smile Loved reading this sooo much!

The way you've shown Manvi's thought process in the beginning and also near the end was just great, where she's totally confused in regard to her feelings for Virat.


Virat was so endearing when he told Manvi:

"I just want to be a small part of your life, someone whom you can share your sorrow and pain with and someone whom I can share my happiness with." Heart

 

Haha, the flashback when Virat was dealing with the Sales Guy (or was it the other way round! LOL) who was going crazy due to Virat's requests! The ring is truly special and unique - LOVE it! Heart

 

And when Virat comes back into Manvi's room and asks her if she's eaten...  and they share a sandwich! awww Embarrassed

 

Also when he was leaving:

"...Good night Manvi. I will see you tomorrow. Ab mein jao?" Winkhe asked her with his trademark smile.' Day Dreaming

He made her SMILE in return - shoo shweet! Embarrassed

It was great how you concentrated solely on Virat and Manvi on this part! Heart

A lovely VirManilicious part!! Thank you sweety! Hug Eagerly waiting for the next part!


Thanks Aisha for the awesome comment. Really means alot for me, Manvi is indeed confused about her feelings for Virat but it will be over soon. Next update coming soonSmile

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Posted: 12 February 2012 at 6:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -RabiaKSGKaJen-

greaat part; virat confesseddd; arwwwh. buhh feel soo baadd, hopee maani startss to realisee shee lovess himm too, virat iss suchaa shweet guyyy, thee rinng wass beautiful. ii loveee himm. 
update soon <3 x

Thanks Rabia... Manvi will realize her feelings for Virat soon & acknowledge it soon. Next part coming soonSmile
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Posted: 12 February 2012 at 6:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Maya.tasnim

 GASSSHH JUST READ THROUGH ALL THE PARTS!! Shocked You are awsomee and have amazing writing skills!! Clap Please continuee soon.. and pm me!! (A) Heart

Thanks Maya for taking your time to read thru all the parts and glad you liked it. Will continue soon, and definitely PM you. I have sent you the buddy request, plz accept it as it will easier for me send out the PMSmile

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Posted: 12 February 2012 at 6:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by KaranKundra4Eva

MIND-BLOWING!!!! 
That's wat this chapter wuz!!! =D
I love Virat!!! 
I hope Manvi realizes his luv sooon! 
PM me when yuuh update...nd update reallliii sooon! =D

Thanks dearie... the next part coming really soon, sorry for keep you waiting for long.Smile
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Posted: 12 February 2012 at 6:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ..luv_shahid..

rev rev rev Clap Hug
girl your chapters are getting better and better...loved both the parts yaar...the confession in the 11th part was something that I atleast didn't expect...the anger in his tone so clearly depicted his love for Manvi...undying and unconditional...aahhh...a perfect confession I would say
n the whole idea of proposing Manvi with a custom made ring in the 12th chapter was just so sweet...ekdum hatke proposal ka idea tha...loved it

Update it soon rev...and once very sorry for such a late reply Unhappy

Thanks dhara for taking your time to read both the updates and leave your wonderful comment. I wanted their confession to be different for our unique couple. Glad you liked my idea of the ringWink, next update coming soon, will PM when I updateSmile
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Posted: 12 February 2012 at 6:59am | IP Logged
Clap bravo loved ur story
please update soon
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Posted: 12 February 2012 at 7:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by missingremix

I was super excited for this update..manvi's reaction n al..u did not live up 2 my expectations...BUT SURPASSED THEM!!!!!!
This is bttr than wat i imagined..manvi is so in denial..for her love means her di..she cannot or rather is not able 2 accept the fact that virat has already formed a special place in her heart..she'l take tym n virat is ready 2 give it her thanx 2 dr shashank..i really liked this character in dmg n i'm enjoying his scenes here in ur ss as well..u hv depicted his character so nicely..i can imagine him giving his half smile/lop-sided grin everytym he sees manvi n virat fighting..n his knowing luks of finding deeper meaning 2 their banter!! Virat-shashank convo was beautifully done..virat finally finding hope n nt giving up on his loveBig smile..d scene that i absolutely lovedHeart was ring selection scene..how did u come up with such a brilliant idea..that ring jst defined manvi..virat knows his bandariya so well..the ring had 2 b unique..jst like bandariya..our mannu..d ending jst apt..like always virat is successful in putting an end manvi's restlessness..d beauty of their relationship is their understanding n u always manage 2 put that across...I love u for giving us such a wonderfull ss..ur updates never fail 2 entertain me..i jst get lost in this VirMan world u hv created..thank u n hugsHug 2 u for being such an amazing writer!!
Thank u also bearing wid such a big rant of mine..LOL..awaiting ur nxt pm..Wink

Aww dearie, thanks for the lovely comment. It is indeed not ranting, I truly enjoyed reading it. I gives me pleasure to know that you enjoyed the update and took the time to share with me the scenes that you liked. I hope the next part will also not disappoint you. I didn't want to rush into their relationship but glad all of you appreciated it. I had this weird idea of the ring and didn't know whether most of you will like it but all of you liked it. In fact, I was surprised to even find the image in the google as well.

Next part coming really soon, hope you will enjoy it as well. Thank you once again dearHug

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