Originally posted by: Khush94rev finally you updated. i have been waiting for this for ages. but you know what its just worth the wait dear. you were awesome. loved it and update next part real soon. and thanks for the pm and congo for reaching 100 pages.
⭐️party time⭐️"Bhabhi you want me to be with Manvi?" he asked in shock. "Jitna haq mere hain, uthna be haq tera bhi hain Manvi paar" she replied and left.these lines was just stupendous dear. i am still in your almost heaven dreamland. i almost cried reading this part.
Originally posted by: Khushi15Yayy..!! Em the 2nd to comment..!!
Beautiful..!!
U made me cry.:(
Simply beautiful..
Thanks for the pm and update soon and pm me when update...
Originally posted by: lakshmawesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Originally posted by: ashred12wow...sooo dramatic !!! congrats on 100 pgs... :)
Originally posted by: preethisawww i had tears in my eyes when i read this update you totally floored me dear... i liked everybody's reaction... perfect characterisation... now waiting to know more... superb dear!!!!!!!!!
Originally posted by: Shivrajput52Rev rev rev u r simply awesome yaar... Loved it... Beautifully expressed... And specially love u yaar bcs u r very hardwrkng for dis ss u have done an awesome analysis on cancer nd den beautifully added it in ur ss... Hats off 2 u my dear... And m literally cryng on dat line a mthr s searchng her child... Loved it yaar... M speechless nd still speaking...lol... Yaar u r great man... Love u...!!
Originally posted by: me.sanawwwsome... lovely update...
i had goosebumps as i was reading ur update...was waiting 4 ur update...thanks 4 the pm... do cont soon this time...
Originally posted by: Aisha202Rev! 😃
Lovely update - I could feel Virat's despair.
Right now he is hurting so much! 😭
Loved how Jeevika consoled Virat - awesome! ❤️
Lots of love
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