Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain


Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain
Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

VirMan : Almost Heaven Part 19 -Updated (Page 80)

Aisha202 Goldie

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Posted: 02 February 2012 at 8:41am | IP Logged

Another AWESOME update Rev! Big smile Loved reading this sooo much!

The way you've shown Manvi's thought process in the beginning and also near the end was just great, where she's totally confused in regard to her feelings for Virat.

Virat was so endearing when he told Manvi:

"I just want to be a small part of your life, someone whom you can share your sorrow and pain with and someone whom I can share my happiness with." Heart


Haha, the flashback when Virat was dealing with the Sales Guy (or was it the other way round! LOL) who was going crazy due to Virat's requests! The ring is truly special and unique - LOVE it! Heart


And when Virat comes back into Manvi's room and asks her if she's eaten...  and they share a sandwich! awww Embarrassed


Also when he was leaving:

"...Good night Manvi. I will see you tomorrow. Ab mein jao?" Winkhe asked her with his trademark smile.' Day Dreaming

He made her SMILE in return - shoo shweet! Embarrassed

It was great how you concentrated solely on Virat and Manvi on this part! Heart

A lovely VirManilicious part!! Thank you sweety! Hug Eagerly waiting for the next part!

Edited by Aisha202 - 02 February 2012 at 1:59pm

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-RabiaKSGKaJen- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 02 February 2012 at 11:14am | IP Logged
greaat part; virat confesseddd; arwwwh. buhh feel soo baadd, hopee maani startss to realisee shee lovess himm too, virat iss suchaa shweet guyyy, thee rinng wass beautiful. ii loveee himm. 
update soon <3 x

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Maya.tasnim Senior Member

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Posted: 02 February 2012 at 12:11pm | IP Logged
 GASSSHH JUST READ THROUGH ALL THE PARTS!! Shocked You are awsomee and have amazing writing skills!! Clap Please continuee soon.. and pm me!! (A) Heart

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KaranKundra4Eva Goldie

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Posted: 02 February 2012 at 2:32pm | IP Logged
That's wat this chapter wuz!!! =D
I love Virat!!! 
I hope Manvi realizes his luv sooon! 
PM me when yuuh update...nd update reallliii sooon! =D

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rev4eva IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 03 February 2012 at 9:30am | IP Logged
Hi All, Thanks for the wonderful comments... I will be out of town for a week. Sorry to disappoint all of you, but there will be no update next week. Will try to post one earliest when I return. Please bear with me. Will also reply all your comments later as well. Smile

Edited by rev4eva - 03 February 2012 at 9:34am

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..luv_shahid.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 03 February 2012 at 11:06am | IP Logged
rev rev rev Clap Hug
girl your chapters are getting better and better...loved both the parts yaar...the confession in the 11th part was something that I atleast didn't expect...the anger in his tone so clearly depicted his love for Manvi...undying and unconditional...aahhh...a perfect confession I would say
n the whole idea of proposing Manvi with a custom made ring in the 12th chapter was just so sweet...ekdum hatke proposal ka idea tha...loved it

Update it soon rev...and once very sorry for such a late reply Unhappy
--Mystical-- Senior Member

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Posted: 06 February 2012 at 11:34am | IP Logged
I was super excited for this update..manvi's reaction n al..u did not live up 2 my expectations...BUT SURPASSED THEM!!!!!!
This is bttr than wat i imagined..manvi is so in denial..for her love means her di..she cannot or rather is not able 2 accept the fact that virat has already formed a special place in her heart..she'l take tym n virat is ready 2 give it her thanx 2 dr shashank..i really liked this character in dmg n i'm enjoying his scenes here in ur ss as well..u hv depicted his character so nicely..i can imagine him giving his half smile/lop-sided grin everytym he sees manvi n virat fighting..n his knowing luks of finding deeper meaning 2 their banter!! Virat-shashank convo was beautifully done..virat finally finding hope n nt giving up on his loveBig smile..d scene that i absolutely lovedHeart was ring selection scene..how did u come up with such a brilliant idea..that ring jst defined manvi..virat knows his bandariya so well..the ring had 2 b unique..jst like bandariya..our mannu..d ending jst apt..like always virat is successful in putting an end manvi's restlessness..d beauty of their relationship is their understanding n u always manage 2 put that across...I love u for giving us such a wonderfull ss..ur updates never fail 2 entertain me..i jst get lost in this VirMan world u hv created..thank u n hugsHug 2 u for being such an amazing writer!!
Thank u also bearing wid such a big rant of mine..LOL..awaiting ur nxt pm..Wink

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snehaluvmaaneet IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 February 2012 at 10:27pm | IP Logged
plzzz update

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