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VirMan : Almost Heaven Part 19 -Updated (Page 69)

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Posted: 29 January 2012 at 4:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Talli-

OMG.. Viraat Confessed.. I'm So Excited Right Now.. Can't Wait For The Next Update.. Continue Soon And Thank You For The PM..


Thanks Talli...Smile Will try to update soon and I'm dying to read FF update as well...

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Posted: 29 January 2012 at 4:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by uniquebluerose

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Edit!!!

Clap Hey another fabulous update and my favorite till date s he confesses...not a slow methodical or well planned proposal on a date...but a spontaneous over flow of emotions which just tumbles our of his mouth!!!!

And what he did for Maanvi with the renovated room thing ws another beautiful touch...i literallay had tears in my eyes when i read that part...

You really capture emotions very well dear!!!

Kudos to you...do write more and eager for update

Finally reading your comments...Smile Thank you so much for the wonderful review. I decided to give them unconventional confession for VirMan, after all they are pretty unique. I didn't know whether the room scene will be appreciated as I didn't know to how describe the interior of the room well but really glad that most of you liked that and sorry for making you tearyEmbarrassed
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Posted: 29 January 2012 at 4:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nikki028

omggg revaaa awesomest update..n gosh u ended on such a high point..jst lik typical hindi serial cvs..haha.. i jst din xpectd u wud end at d moment virat confessd his love to her.. dying to d read next part.. reva u donno hw much u hv TREMENDOUSLY IMPROVED as a writer thru out this ff.. truly xcellent.. plz upd8 soon..


Aww thanks Nikki. It was not my intention to end at such a high point but I realised I have wrote to almost 5 pages in Word. If I continued, then it would have ended up in 7 to 10 pages as I tend to be long winded. So decided to stop at the confession...Wink  Every time I read the comments here, the expectation rises, I'm still trying to keep up to it. Thanks for the encouragement dearieSmile

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Posted: 29 January 2012 at 4:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by niha12345

it is the best update..
loved it a lot..
and thanks for the pm..
please cont. soon.
waiting eagerly dear

Thanks Niha, really happy that you liked it... Will try to update the next part soonSmile
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Posted: 29 January 2012 at 5:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mayur247

 Totally amazing! I absolutely loved it! Big smile Continue very very soon! Big smile

Thanks Mayur...Really glad that you liked it, will try to update soonSmile
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Posted: 29 January 2012 at 5:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by karrena

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I just love the confession scene, it's so emotive and strong. Just L-O-V-E it!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is the best Virman ff I've read so far...Clap thnx for the PM...love ur writing

Thank you so much dearie... I m so happy that you liked the confession scene.Smile
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Posted: 29 January 2012 at 5:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jz4amrit

read all the parts today only..
this is amazing and if u believe me,then honestly speaking,best fan fic i ve read till date,on IF in my pov.
u rock gal..AWESOME..
hats off !!!!
Best thing is that it moves at perfect pace,no hurried ILUs/kisses,nice grip and i can relate to it so well..
ACTUALLY MINDBLOWING.. *claps*
update soon.. :))

Thanks yaar, it was so sweet of you...I wanted them to bond and realize their love slowly and so happy that you like the pace it was flowing and could relate to the emotions that I'm trying to convey. Thank you so much yaar... Big smile
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Posted: 29 January 2012 at 5:31am | IP Logged
Super update..
Loved it...
Finally he confessed :D
Thanks for this PM and do pm me when u update...

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