Posted: 29 January 2012 at 5:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shehroon_riazI don't even know what to say after such an amazing update. I actually don't know what to say. It was so wonderfully put together. I mean, you said at the start that you didn't know how to put it all together and didn't know if it made scenes or not. But take my word for it; this was such a necessary part for this SS. I mean this. Like all the care that Viraat had for her and then the garden walk. How he said to her that the bench was his favourite spot in the whole garden. that clearly does show the fact that when Jeevika was inside with her all day; he used to wait outside in the park until evening came. That was so cute. Then when they went inside and into her new room. The description made tears come into my eyes as well as in Maanvi's. How she thanked everyone but Viraat and gave everyone a job to do; it was as if she knew that Viraat wasn't going to be there. I don't know why but that's I made out of it. Then Viraat showing his care for her in front of Viren and telling him that he'll be there with her on the day of the biopsy. Near the end, where they held each other's hands tightly assuring each other that it'll be alright. Last but not least, the much awaited part for me was where they had one of their nokh-jokh type conversation and he finally confessed his love for her. It wasn't a nokh-jokh but they were having one of their moments. I can't explain what I'm thinking but I'm sure you know what I mean.
Oh yeah; I nearly forgot the part where Viraat said; this bed is suitable for two people (or something like that)... Naughty Viraat; what mischief is cooking up in your brain? Lol. Whatever it is; needs to happen quick. I hope that Viraat doesn't go back home and instead, stays with her at night and maybe; just maybe they'll sleep on the same bed :O Imagine if they do. Oh gosh; the next update has to be a great one with all these ideas cooking up in my mind. I don't know what Viraat is thinking but this is what I'm thinking :P
I wanna know Maanvi's reaction to this as soon as! I mean this. I know that she loves him too! We all know this. But maybe because of what she is suffering from; she might say that she doesn't because of the fact that she thinks she might die (I don't want this to happen) She doesn't want Viraat to start loving her so much that when she's gone, he is heartbroken. I don't know.
Well this was my essay (comment) on this post. If 'Brklyn_gal' reads this part and sees this comment, she is just going to laugh because I always make my comments so so long. The writer is probably going to go to sleep while reading this. But yeah; BASICALLY, I LOVED THIS PART! IT WAS AN ESSENTIAL PART!
PS: Please keep writing and when you continue this amazing SS, please do PM me :)
Thanks and I hope I didn't make you fall asleep while reading this comment :P
Aww shehroon or how should I address you as dear, firstly thank you so much for taking the time to write such an awesome comments.. It is really so sweet of you and I'm so touched. Reading reviews like this is indeed great boost to me and I definitely love long comments
... Hw in the world can you think I will sleep off reading it. Somehow you manage to relate to the hidden and subtle flow of the story of how Virat spends his day in the park, giving the sisters the space and time their need. It is typical of Virat & Manvi to be like tom&jerry, with their nok-jok all the time when the rest are around but deep inside they could related to each other very well more. They don't words to understand each other. Manvi left out Virat from assigning task as she knew he will ensure everything is perfect for her without being told. Btw I don't have anything specific in mind yet for the bed but ul never know if something pops in between but will try to utilize the bed soon but nothing besharmi yet...
You seem to have read my mind and reveal what I have in-store for the for the future update
I really enjoyed reading your comment and appreciate you sharing your views on the scenes. Do continue writing and hope the next update will live up to the expectation that is already in your mind. Thank you once again